The Immortal Cultivation Story of Gods and Lolita

The fantasy genre was my favorite novel in the past, but later I gave up on it for some reasons, and I basically don't read novels in this genre. Nowadays, I mainly read transformation stories (especially loli), so this article written by the author is exactly what I wanted. Moreover, the author's writing style and stories are quite good. After reading about a third of the book, at least with my current perspective, I can't find any major faults. In any case, the five-star review supports the author and I hope the author will continue writing. Come on! Found a few small problems. It's just that the emotional aspect is not very prominent, and without the obvious psychological changes, it looks very bland. In this case, it is recommended that the author enhance the atmosphere through the environment and the inner psychological activities of the characters. There are also relatively few [thinking][thinking] descriptions of the environment. Some descriptive details can be added appropriately, otherwise it will look too dry.

The inner activities are rich, come on!