(Male channel, rebirth, poison in the first three chapters, no green after rebirth, multiple female protagonists, slow pace in the early stage.)
Zhang Yang and his first wife Tang Yurou have been married for many years and have no children. He originally thought that Tang Yurou was under great pressure at work and was unable to conceive a child, but a piece of news let him know the truth about his wife's difficulty in getting pregnant...
Zhang Yang, who had ended his first marriage, met his second wife Ye Qinghuan through a blind date. Ye Qinghuan became pregnant soon after the marriage. Zhang Yang originally thought that he would finally have a child this time, but all of this had been planned by Ye Qinghuan.
...
After rebirth, Ye Qinghuan said to Zhang Yang: "Zhang Yang, let's have a child."
But Zhang Yang said firmly: "No!"
Reader comments
The plot of the story is good, the two wives betrayed each other, became the white moonlight in their hearts and then took revenge. However, the content of the article is too bad, and the character of the protagonist does not match the character. After being reborn, I feel immature and stable in terms of IQ and mentality, like a child who scatters money and drives away people when encountering porcelain. This is a bit of a downer. If you have money, don't you have a lot of young people around you? The second sister was rumored at school and went to investigate on her own. Brother, you are reborn and are not a child. Spend some money to find a professional to do it. The protagonist of the plot admits his daughter? What you want is control, not a platform. This is like paying a female anchor to let her know a higher brother. I also feel that your writing style is not good, and you are not suitable for writing emotional articles. Generally, the early stage is foreshadowing, the mid-term climax is fast-paced, and the late stage is unfinished. Your early writing style and character writing are not good, but the first chapter is considered good.
Female channel's revenge formula? Let a girl love you but not get it? Such a childish way of revenge, don't get involved with the female channel. If it's a male channel, it's the one who secretly killed the heroine and the person who messed with him in the previous life? If you come to a male channel, please don't use such a childish way of revenge. There is no real revenge on the original male and female protagonists. Is it spiritual revenge? It's useless at all. Just break up and go abroad and have nothing. Come home, okay? The plot is too childish. If one day you can write about killing the betrayed wife in the previous life, I will immediately change the review to a positive review. Please, don't use such a childish way of revenge. No one will watch it on male videos.
A loneliness was reborn. . . .
It's almost a hundred chapters, and this method of revenge is just like children playing around. They are still continuing to be cool, and the protagonist is satisfied. It depends on Hammer.
It's written like a running account, and revenge should be bold and refreshing. I suggest that the author can write bloody short stories to practice first, and then write long stories.
Where's brother's revenge?
The second person betrayed him, and there were also those who were talking and laughing [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
The male protagonist's revenge method makes the female protagonist fall in love with him, but she can't love him, hahaha
Emm, I don't think it's very vicious, I just want to see if the protagonist will tell them about the sins they committed in the previous life, and then they will regret it, and finally spend their whole lives to atone for their sins. In the end, it is best for them to kill Chu Sheng and Gao Wan personally.
If I end up with someone named Ye, I'll have nothing to say. It's best to abandon her once.
It depends on how you write it, but will Ye accept it? Do you really think that when you see her, you will remember how she molested you in your previous life, sent you to jail, and aborted your child?
I don't see the point of revenge. There are obviously a hundred ways to defeat the enemy, just water.
The first life was a bit miserable, but the second life was just fine. It was originally a new life, so readers did not need to hold on to the poison of the previous life, and it was originally written about the second life.
What is it written about?
The book is pretty good, but I didn't see his first wife later [Thoughts]
When you update 5 times a day, your five stars will come quietly.
Okay, it looks good and the plot is attractive
It's not very toxic and doesn't change at all.
It has a bit of a flow-style feel, but it's more fluent and smooth. I'll give you five stars to encourage you.
No, we are not buddies. We have promised to take revenge. Why are the two ex-wives still alive and well? Is it because they think the hat is not green enough? [Vomit]
Female video article lightning protection
Your revenge is quite niche [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] You have become Bai Yueguang first. If people really don't like you anymore, won't you explode?
This rebirth of revenge is very interesting. This theme is very popular recently. The revenge and recovery of two ex-wives is very good, but the plot is a bit fast. The harem can use something sweet, and just decide on a boss.
The work is really good. I hope it won't be less than 800 chapters. It's really good. Please introduce more new characters, open more harems, and don't end with revenge. If you write more, you must write more.
It has novel ideas among similar articles, the plot is handled reasonably, and it is not too poisonous. It is recommended to read.
The plot is quite novel
Common routines are good, good, good
Go ahead and read it, it's quite interesting.
Beautiful, very suitable to my taste
Not bad. At least I like the protagonist's revenge so far. I hope they can dig a hole and bury the Ye family later.
You can skip the first three chapters and watch it, restarting the world line is okay. It would be a tragedy if the heroine regained her memory.
It's not bad. There aren't many bad points at the moment. We still need to work hard. Come on! 😊
The plot of the story is good, the two wives betrayed each other, became the white moonlight in their hearts and then took revenge. However, the content of the article is too bad, and the character of the protagonist does not match the character. After being reborn, I feel immature and stable in terms of IQ and mentality, like a child who scatters money and drives away people when encountering porcelain. This is a bit of a downer. If you have money, don't you have a lot of young people around you? The second sister was rumored at school and went to investigate on her own. Brother, you are reborn and are not a child. Spend some money to find a professional to do it. The protagonist of the plot admits his daughter? What you want is control, not a platform. This is like paying a female anchor to let her know a higher brother. I also feel that your writing style is not good, and you are not suitable for writing emotional articles. Generally, the early stage is foreshadowing, the mid-term climax is fast-paced, and the late stage is unfinished. Your early writing style and character writing are not good, but the first chapter is considered good.
Female channel's revenge formula? Let a girl love you but not get it? Such a childish way of revenge, don't get involved with the female channel. If it's a male channel, it's the one who secretly killed the heroine and the person who messed with him in the previous life? If you come to a male channel, please don't use such a childish way of revenge. There is no real revenge on the original male and female protagonists. Is it spiritual revenge? It's useless at all. Just break up and go abroad and have nothing. Come home, okay? The plot is too childish. If one day you can write about killing the betrayed wife in the previous life, I will immediately change the review to a positive review. Please, don't use such a childish way of revenge. No one will watch it on male videos.
A loneliness was reborn. . . .
It's almost a hundred chapters, and this method of revenge is just like children playing around. They are still continuing to be cool, and the protagonist is satisfied. It depends on Hammer.
It's written like a running account, and revenge should be bold and refreshing. I suggest that the author can write bloody short stories to practice first, and then write long stories.
Where's brother's revenge? The second person betrayed him, and there were also those who were talking and laughing [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
The male protagonist's revenge method makes the female protagonist fall in love with him, but she can't love him, hahaha
Emm, I don't think it's very vicious, I just want to see if the protagonist will tell them about the sins they committed in the previous life, and then they will regret it, and finally spend their whole lives to atone for their sins. In the end, it is best for them to kill Chu Sheng and Gao Wan personally.
If I end up with someone named Ye, I'll have nothing to say. It's best to abandon her once.
It depends on how you write it, but will Ye accept it? Do you really think that when you see her, you will remember how she molested you in your previous life, sent you to jail, and aborted your child?
I don't see the point of revenge. There are obviously a hundred ways to defeat the enemy, just water.
The first life was a bit miserable, but the second life was just fine. It was originally a new life, so readers did not need to hold on to the poison of the previous life, and it was originally written about the second life.
What is it written about?
The book is pretty good, but I didn't see his first wife later [Thoughts]
When you update 5 times a day, your five stars will come quietly.
Okay, it looks good and the plot is attractive
It's not very toxic and doesn't change at all.
It has a bit of a flow-style feel, but it's more fluent and smooth. I'll give you five stars to encourage you.
No, we are not buddies. We have promised to take revenge. Why are the two ex-wives still alive and well? Is it because they think the hat is not green enough? [Vomit]
Female video article lightning protection
Your revenge is quite niche [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] You have become Bai Yueguang first. If people really don't like you anymore, won't you explode?
This rebirth of revenge is very interesting. This theme is very popular recently. The revenge and recovery of two ex-wives is very good, but the plot is a bit fast. The harem can use something sweet, and just decide on a boss. The work is really good. I hope it won't be less than 800 chapters. It's really good. Please introduce more new characters, open more harems, and don't end with revenge. If you write more, you must write more.
It has novel ideas among similar articles, the plot is handled reasonably, and it is not too poisonous. It is recommended to read.
The plot is quite novel
Common routines are good, good, good
Go ahead and read it, it's quite interesting.
Beautiful, very suitable to my taste
Not bad. At least I like the protagonist's revenge so far. I hope they can dig a hole and bury the Ye family later.
You can skip the first three chapters and watch it, restarting the world line is okay. It would be a tragedy if the heroine regained her memory.
It's not bad. There aren't many bad points at the moment. We still need to work hard. Come on! 😊