After Being Betrayed by Two Wives, I Was Reborn!

The plot of the story is good, the two wives betrayed each other, became the white moonlight in their hearts and then took revenge. However, the content of the article is too bad, and the character of the protagonist does not match the character. After being reborn, I feel immature and stable in terms of IQ and mentality, like a child who scatters money and drives away people when encountering porcelain. This is a bit of a downer. If you have money, don't you have a lot of young people around you? The second sister was rumored at school and went to investigate on her own. Brother, you are reborn and are not a child. Spend some money to find a professional to do it. The protagonist of the plot admits his daughter? What you want is control, not a platform. This is like paying a female anchor to let her know a higher brother. I also feel that your writing style is not good, and you are not suitable for writing emotional articles. Generally, the early stage is foreshadowing, the mid-term climax is fast-paced, and the late stage is unfinished. Your early writing style and character writing are not good, but the first chapter is considered good.

Female channel's revenge formula? Let a girl love you but not get it? Such a childish way of revenge, don't get involved with the female channel. If it's a male channel, it's the one who secretly killed the heroine and the person who messed with him in the previous life? If you come to a male channel, please don't use such a childish way of revenge. There is no real revenge on the original male and female protagonists. Is it spiritual revenge? It's useless at all. Just break up and go abroad and have nothing. Come home, okay? The plot is too childish. If one day you can write about killing the betrayed wife in the previous life, I will immediately change the review to a positive review. Please, don't use such a childish way of revenge. No one will watch it on male videos.

It's almost a hundred chapters, and this method of revenge is just like children playing around. They are still continuing to be cool, and the protagonist is satisfied. It depends on Hammer.

A loneliness was reborn. . . .

The male protagonist's revenge method makes the female protagonist fall in love with him, but she can't love him, hahaha

Where's brother's revenge? The second person betrayed him, and there were also those who were talking and laughing 😂 😂 😂

It's written like a running account, and revenge should be bold and refreshing. I suggest that the author can write bloody short stories to practice first, and then write long stories.

Emm, I don't think it's very vicious, I just want to see if the protagonist will tell them about the sins they committed in the previous life, and then they will regret it, and finally spend their whole lives to atone for their sins. In the end, it is best for them to kill Chu Sheng and Gao Wan personally.

If I end up with someone named Ye, I'll have nothing to say. It's best to abandon her once.

It depends on how you write it, but will Ye accept it? Do you really think that when you see her, you will remember how she molested you in your previous life, sent you to jail, and aborted your child?