Dragon Ball: the Big Start Is When Vegeta Eavesdrops on His Heart

Write more about Vegeta looking comfortable and having goals to strive for. Even though he is the second oldest child in ten thousand years? But everyone likes him better. Come on, I will reward you when the time comes. Update one more chapter every day, I will support your book now

Suddenly I remembered that I didn't rate it hhhhhhh, so I'll make it up. We are also old fans, and I hope this book will be a stable one~

The writing is good, but the reasons why the readers lowered the rating should be as follows: 1. Zamasu has too many scenes 2. The interaction between Trunks and Vegeta is a bit less 3. Vegeta did not become the strongest among the Z fighters as he wished. 4. As a time traveler, I don't allow other people to find ways to improve their combat power, such as Piccolo, Krillin, Tianjin Fan and others. 5. In the early stage, Sun Wutian was directly arranged not to be born, and readers were dissatisfied? Overall, it's not a big problem. This is the best Dragon Ball fanfic I've ever read.

It's good to watch, and there are all kinds of fanfics. The main characters are stronger than at the same time, and so are the villains. The protagonist does not take up most of the scenes, it feels like a group portrait, and the villains also have a lot of space, such as the protagonist's younger brothers "Super Cell" and Buu, Broly and the arrogant brother Z Broly who joined the protagonist group after defeat, and King Frieza who has saved the earth many times. The protagonist currently has no girlfriend, and Xiao Wu is interested in the protagonist, but the protagonist treats Xiao Wu indifferently because of Xiao Wu's actual age, but Xiao Wu thinks the aloof protagonist is more handsome. Moreover, the protagonist's sister wants to bring Xiao Wu and the protagonist together, and the protagonist's younger brother, Vegeta and Bulma also recognize Xiao Wu.

The enemies are coming too compactly, and the strong ones are coming one after another. The ones coming now are all the theater version BOSS and the later stage BOSS.

Overall, it's good, but the original work made a few mistakes. 1. When Goku died, baby Trunks was at the door. As soon as Goku died, Trunks started crying. Gohan was not bookish, and he was dressed the same as in the android chapter of Z. 2. The artificial talent appeared two and a half years after Goku's death. 3. According to the video clip, Piccolo , Vegeta, and Yamcha were all kicked to death, Tianjin Fan was pierced by the light, Krillin was blocked by No. 17 And No. 18 When he was running away, and he was killed by one person and one Qigong wave. There was no situation where Piccolo was dismembered. This was originally a bug in the original work. I thought that Nappa killed Piccolo with just one wave, without destroying any core, and Piccolo also left the whole body. The source of the above information is the opening video of the future DLC of "Dragon Ball Z Kakarot". .

Yes, although there are some flaws. In the early stage, the protagonist Da Te was a little bit sour, and Vegeta was not strong enough. However, it was really fun to watch a chaotic battle of demons. So far, the plot is exciting and compact, but it is a bit too tight. It seems that there are problems one after another without much training, and Goku and Gohan's presence is too low. I hope that the follow-up plot will have more original forms and creativity.

The guy downstairs who has a clear eye and talks about my Yunlongzhu, go and see for yourself. The Spiritual Time Room is isolated from the world, but Trunks opened the door, so he can feel the atmosphere outside. I have written and written, and I have written so many books. This one is the best so far. In fact, I have a regret. That is, the results of the previous book were actually better than this one, but I gave up on the previous one too early. I should not have given up at that time, so I plan to write a book similar to the previous one, but I have not yet decided which one I want to write.

This book is very well written. Other Dragon Ball fans use high versions to beat low versions. I feel a sense of oppression when watching Dragon Ball. The villains come one after another. It's very enjoyable to fight.

I'm a cool guy. I've read more than 50 chapters. I've already killed the cyborgs, Cell, etc., I'm fighting Majin Buu, and I'm even trying to pass Broly. It's only about 50 chapters. I'm either fighting or on the way to a fight. I'm basically fine in my daily life. It's really fun to fight.

It's just that the battles are too frequent, with bosses coming one after another.

Work hard and don't give up.

Like to watch Dragon Ball fanfics

Very well written, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's very beautiful. I hope the author can update it quickly and don't stop updating.

I feel that the writing is very good. Why is it only over 7 points? This kind of rhythm is still very comfortable, but it is not interesting at all! I hope the author will update more [blowing kiss]

Zamasu has always been in the nesting doll space and time. Either Zamasu in this time and space is Zamasu in that time and space. If you really want to do this, you can't finish the nesting dolls. You really can't finish them.

The writing is good, remember to keep it. I don't care who the heroine is, but it's fine as long as it's not Xiao Wu.

Okay, it's quite good-looking. It can be said that it's a sequel that satisfies the needs of the Dragon Ball characters that I wanted to see but didn't take form. When I saw it, I thought it was pretty good. At present, after watching the update, there are two questions that I don't quite understand. The first question is that fairy beans almost don't exist in the story line. It seems to only appear once. I think it's a bit wasteful to not use this magic weapon, but I think the plot idea is good. The second question is why other angels actively intervene in the development of the story line, which is not consistent with the identity of angels. Maybe I didn't look carefully enough and missed it. The rest is okay, pretty good-looking

Trunks didn't go to the main time and space, so is Goku in the main time and space dead?

Dragon Ball: Legend of Zamasu [face covering] [OK] Durable king

Not bad, Vegeta eavesdropped on the thoughts of the time traveler's son Trunks, and then Lao Bei was helpless by his son's complaints about being arrogant. Quite funny.

The content is rich and the plot is novel. It is an excellent work in the Dragon Ball fan series [laughter] How could this undoubtedly masterpiece of Dragon Ball get such a low score?

Awesome, a bunch of bosses are out. Although I haven't seen how to solve them yet, they are so interesting.

It's pretty good. The plots are basically coherent, and there are various bosses. There are many old plots that I don't have time to watch, and there are many old bosses that can be seen [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Yes, this is one of the Dragon Ball fanfics that has a coherent plot. I feel like the protagonist could have a little more role. Of course, that doesn't mean it's not well written. The descriptions of other characters are also very good, and it's something that an old Dragon Ball fan likes.

@Tomatotomatosashimi I hope the author can update five chapters every day

Looks good, I hope there is no female protagonist

Beautiful, a very good book.

Personally, I feel that the early stage is okay. In general, the battle is fun, but the Zamasu is a bit like a nesting doll. One Zamasu fights back and forth, but the front is still good.