Curse: the Frail Brother in High School

Nice! Liuli's character is also very good, the plot interactions are lively and interesting, and the characters are not OOC. But what makes me wonder is why so many people hate 5t5 in this article? Obviously both sides were at fault in that matter, right? Liuli had only been here for half a month at that time. Isn't it normal for 5t5 to prefer Jie? (Scratching his head) Why are there so many comments in the comment area like "Aren't you going to kill him?" It feels like if it were anyone else and a friend was hurt by another person, they would be angry without knowing the truth, right?

Ahhhh, I really love Liuli's character! The author's portrayal of the image is also very good! ! Taking 10,000 steps back, couldn't I let this teacher write the plot of iivv? ?

The book is super invincible and beautiful. (It is exaggerated to mean P, P, P, P respectively) I feel that Liuli can form a cp with anyone (personal opinion, for reference only) (◦˙▽˙◦) It's very beautiful (｡>∀<｡)

This is really the least OOC cursed-back fanfic I have ever read. This kind of thing is really rare in Tomato😭! The author's writing style is very good and delicate, and the relationship between the brother and sister is really cute. After reading this book, I almost doubted whether Jia Ruli is really a character in the original work😭To be honest, I should kill it iivv and let the author write it. This is the ending I approve of! Mouth! Or is it actually the first half of "The Return of the Curse" that the author helped write (bushi). I feel that many people can relate to Liuli. My brother is really good and Asasi is really miserable. This novel always makes me feel that it is the original. In short, there is no doubt that it is five stars. After reading it, I feel that I can't find any equal to it and I will fall at Xiao Liuli's feet in this life. 😭 The protagonist is well portrayed and always makes me think that this is a character that appeared in the original work😭

As for this book, first of all, the writing is good, and the characters are relatively fitting. If it is not an extremely controlling book, it can still be read. However, I am one of those rare extreme controllers who really cannot accept the protagonist being abused. So Smith Marseille, see you again by fate!

The characters are well drawn, and the brother-sister relationship is really touching! The characters of Gojo Satoru and Xia Youjie are also very full and not single. In addition, everyone has a good relationship with the protagonist... Jie and Ruri, Satoru and Ruri, Fushiguro and Ruri~The psychological description of Ruri and Gojo Satoru is also great. Of course Ruri will envy Gojo Satoru and even Fushiguro, poor little Ruri, someone will love you. In addition, you can squat for a be extra episode, woo woo woo

This is a story about a girl controlling the world. This article is full of warmth, and the knife is endless, but the big knife can kill people. In my opinion, this article has no OOC, the logic is rigorous, and the script composition is excellent. Satoru's grandmother is a private design, but her behavior is logical and reasonable, and the setting of her parents is also very good, sweet and sharp. The author's writing style is also outstanding. I don't know how many times I laughed and cried while reading this article (I am emotionally sensitive). I like this article very much. It is not a time travel, not a rebirth, it is just a butterfly flapping its wings. An existence other than destiny reverses the destined ending with its powerful brain and extraordinary psychology, and it explodes!

It's really super, super, super pretty! ! ! Both the conception and the logical chain of the whole text are very good, and the foreshadowing is also unfolded little by little in the later stage. The most powerful thing is the characterization of the characters and the brain-burning reasoning plots. The characters are not blindly good or bad (except for rotten oranges). Without OOC, those complex sensory qualities are very cute. It has been interpreted, it makes people feel warm, and many times it makes people feel warm and touching, and makes them want to cry (because sometimes it is really heartwarming, and when I watch certain plots, I can't help but think of the original work, and then I want to cry even more). The phrase "We are the strongest" has always been echoed. Whether it's an on-campus threesome or a foursome, an adult (off-campus) threesome, a knotweed trio, and later a girls' trio at Kyoto High School, there are many others who really hope they continue to live happily ever after. The author Da Da's writing style is really good [I'm about to cry] but I don't know if Da Da Da still writes books or if he has changed the platform? Anyway, I'm looking forward to the new book, and I will follow this writing style to the death! ! ! Does the author have any other books?

It's the best among fanfics (personal opinion). I like to read aboriginal ones now. (The following are the advantages and disadvantages, which contain complex components such as personal subjective consciousness, please pay attention when demining) Advantages As an Aboriginal person, it's natural to make amends. How to make up for regrets definitely requires a method. He doesn't know the plot. I think the author did a very good job in this regard, and the reasons are laid out very naturally. For example, because of the conflict between Xia You and Liuli, Liuli wanted to find a chance to resolve it, so she went on a mountain village mission with Xia You. The characters are well understood and the emotions are well controlled (personal opinion, I haven't read the manga and watched the anime). The most touching thing should be the family relationship between Ruri and Glass. For this fanfic, the author must be attentive and loves the characters in the novel. The writing style is also very good. There are many psychological descriptions of the characters in the article. It can be seen that the author is very careful. There are also some extra chapters about outstanding characters in the manga (Hiromi Hikari) who do not appear in the main text. There's a lot of food, there's CP, IF cables, and movie viewing equipment! ! The IF line and cp are reminders to the previous author and can be skipped. ⭐One chapter has more than 4,000 words, so it's a big deal! ! One chapter is better than two! ! ! Disadvantages (?) Sometimes the narration is messy, and you may just use an onomatopoeia to transition to another scene or event right after one thing is said, without any dividing line (probably because the author is excellent, but I can't understand it for personal reasons). You will understand later by using [ ]

I feel that even foreigners are not worthy of owning such a good book. The teacher's writing is very delicate, and there are many things that you don't understand. You can underline it and read it slowly. But childhood is like Liuli. When I was a child, I was very sharp with knives, and there are more or less knives in the back. It is definitely the best among all the fics I have read, but the score is too poor, only about 8 points. Teacher, I will follow you all my life! ! Do you know why I use you? Because you are in my heart Happy ending, teacher! [Love][love][love] Ahhhhhh! When will the teacher open the second book?

Really love this book! ! ! It's so good that I want to read it as the original work. The characters' personalities are not broken at all, but the deeper and more important parts of their hearts are written out! For example, Zhenyi's obsession and love for her sister Maki, Satoru's importance to Jie, and Glass's inner feelings towards her friends were all written better one by one, making me like them even more! The point is, I love the protagonist Liuli the most! ! (♡▽♡) He cares a lot about his sister Glass, and everyone around him including Satoru, Jie, Nanami, etc., But it is all covered by his expressionless look. Probably only those who know him know how precious his care is, and he keeps all the people he cares about in his heart. , No matter what happens, he will protect them with his life. Because of the past, it is difficult for him to accept the kindness and kindness of others, and he will even avoid it. He lives just to accompany his sister to grow up, and does not want to make her sad, but for the sake of the people he cares about, he is trying hard to accept it! (*˘˘*). .:*♡I also started to open my heart slowly. I really like Liuli very much. I watched him go from only caring about his sister to being cared for and cherished by everyone, from avoiding kindness to slowly accepting it, from not having much affection to gradually understanding and gaining affection. Really, I highly recommend everyone to watch it! (It's best not to skip reading)٩(๑^o^๑)۶ Finally, my dear, I love your writing so well and so touchingly! ! Come on! ! ! (˘ ³˘)♡ P. S. I really like playing CP and planting CB! ! ! I really like how they get along with each other! ￣￣

Friends who can accept the addition of new characters and hope to see the survival ending of the original characters can give it a try. However, it is not suitable for fans who are overly CP-oriented and those who have not come into contact with the original works. Although fan fiction is in a sense promoting the original work and allowing more people to see the beauty of this world, the unique world view and people who do not understand professional terminology will affect the viewing experience. Liuli at the beginning made me unable to imagine Liuli, the high school brother at the end. The growth of a person and whether he is loved or not are clear at a glance. The author really loves his children. The main text does not focus on the plot. The description of the protagonist in the early stage is relatively weak. The plot of getting along with the original character will make people hesitate whether Gojo Satoru's character is like this. However, in the later stage, these problems are solved and the author's own explanations are included in the extra chapter. The foreshadowing is also concluded at the end. In the comments, you may read that the rating of this book is not high enough, but as a second-generation fan novel, Tomato can successfully complete the book without destroying the original settings. The author has analyzed the original characters and reasonably arranged for his children to integrate into this world. It is already very good. The score of 9.2 Points is suitable for it. I hope more people can read it and give the author a little encouragement to persevere, at least to persevere a little longer. I have finished reading the main text and am slowly completing the extra chapters. It is really great that Grandpa can leave surrounded by everyone. Parting is doomed, but you can make the last time have a different color and leave with a smile.

I don't remember the reason at first. I think I was tired of the novel, so I stopped reading after reading only one chapter. Later, I read it again because I heard that it was a non-CP extra chapter. Then in the first few chapters, Satoru and Jie didn't like the protagonist's attitude, especially in Chapter 8. I almost gave up on the part where they pinched the protagonist's neck, although the protagonist didn't feel anything. , But I had a sense of grievance that made me cry, so I deliberately read the explanation chapter at the end, but I still felt uncomfortable. I could only persuade myself that the protagonist didn't care. Why should I think so much about it, and I realized that this is normal for them, and you can't think it's not okay just because you read too many fanfics, so I continued reading, and after their relationship improved, it became very easy to drink. The characters are all quite realistic, and there are some funny moments. Although there are some knives, I can accept it. The most important thing is to put aside the unpleasantness and just see that they get along really well, and they really accept the transformation into an expert. The most important thing is that Satoru regrets the behavior of pinching the protagonist, and the unpleasantness has disappeared. However, there is a story about this novel that really made me intuitively understand why Wu Hejie was called scum by the singers and the others, and I really felt like going in and beating them up. Anyway, the author writes very well, and the psychological description of the characters is very good. As long as I read the previous part, I can really feel that this novel is very well written [][][]

A great article, by far the most interesting Curse Return fanfic I have ever read. The main text is cb, and the extra is cp. Both the main text and the extra are very interesting! But I prefer the cb direction of the text. The family relationship between the four of them is so heart-warming. Wu, Jie, Glass, and Liuli. The four of you living a good life together are more important than anything else! I think there are almost no knives in the text. It's very warm overall. Personally speaking, the only thorn in the side is that every time I read the text, "Everyone Lives Well," I always think of their ending in the original novel, which always breaks my guard [crying] In group portrait articles, basically everyone will have a description. If you like daily life, you can go straight to it! Only after I posted the review did I realize that I had actually watched it for so long [face covering] I can't help it, it's so heartwarming and beautiful! Each passage must be savored carefully

It's so cool. I've never been able to bear it mentally, but the teacher's Fushiguro and Nanami's writing was so perfect. Watching Liuli live in pain in the front did secretly generate selfish thoughts to free him, leaving everything behind, but he fell in love with Glass again, and in the end it was the adults who were forced to forget and the same. The struggling walking dead ushered in Liuli's death. It was too tragic for them, but they were the most close to Liuli. They had no illusions, compared with Wu's sky and sea, and Xiayou's tolerance and gentleness. The ending of the adult group was too cruel, but Liuli was the most relaxed, without tolerance, acceptance, understanding, and relief. For example, after eating the orange-flavored candy, only the sourness and the sweetness in the memory are left in the mouth. The adult group who have never tasted sweetness can only live with the sugar in the memory (Nanami is even forced to forget, it is so pitiful)

The daily articles are very, very well written, and the logic part is also very good. (As for the original work and fanfic of Cursed Return, I can only understand the effect of the spell, but not its principle). This fanfic not only consoles iivv's regrets, but also portrays the characters of the original work very well. What is particularly outstanding is that with the time of appearance, which is the development of time in the work, the characters gradually become clearer (following this fanfic) The basic law is that all changes in character and behavior are formed under the influence of external changes in internal thinking, and the author pays special attention to patching up the content of his own text - using the past experiences of the characters in the original work as a premise for the behavior of the characters in the fanfic). In short, the thinking is rigorous and the details and emotions are delicate, and the investment is not a loss.

I like the girl control setting but it seems inexplicably frustrating, so if you can't stand the frustration like me, you can just moisturize it, but the rating is very high and I don't want to lower it too low.

The writing is great, there is no OOC, and I really like the character of the protagonist. He is the kind of person who values his family far more than his own life. He wants to live in order to be with his sister. He is rational and intelligent, and his emotional changes are particularly delicate and not abrupt at all. The transformation process is a little slow, but after mutual acceptance, It's also particularly nice to get along with \(//∇//)\ The protagonist is a bit miserable, especially the one who had a knife in his childhood [almost cried] no CP, every CP can be knocked off [admiration] The extra story is also super interesting, very imaginative [heartfelt] Although there are many differences compared to the original plot, the adaptation is very reasonable.

This book is really well written [Blow Kiss] The genius of the protagonist is a truly traceable genius! ! Logical thinking and everything else are great! ! Moreover, the changes in Satoru and Jie's attitudes and emotions toward each other and the protagonist are written very naturally!

The protagonist is a girl-controller. She does not just pursue friendship with the protagonist group. She has a little bit of knives. She is very strong when she is serious. She is considered a mature type (?). The description of each character's personality is very delicate! Everyone can basically avoid OOC, and if there is, it will probably advance the plot (?) Anyway, this book is very interesting! [Laughing] Make one more! The author will fill in the gaps! ! ! Emmm, I suggest you turn off the display of comments

It's great to watch, I just hope the extra chapter has cp [adoration][adoration][adoration][blowing kiss] It looks great, have you considered adding a movie to it? @I'm just dreaming [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

The protagonist has a high IQ, cold temperament but unique personality charm. The plot development rhythm of the story is well controlled, the emotions of the characters at each stage are described delicately, and it is an excellent work that deeply analyzes the character of the curse.

Quite a good book! The world view is grand, the logic is smooth, the writing is online, and the plot is very attractive! The characters are not OOC. Although there are some objections to the plot conflict at the beginning of the writing, the author explained it later. I think the author's understanding is acceptable. Although it is a bit uncomfortable, it is only up to 15 chapters. It is fine after that. You must continue reading. The rest is really good, especially the last part of the extra chapter, which directly completes the world view. The world setting is really shocking! Great article! It's worth savoring, it's a complete story about a world, the girl control is so powerful and terrifying [Adored][Admired]

It's very beautiful, the emotions are progressive, the setting is interesting and novel, the writing is very good, and the characters are well created. I like it very much!

Like it, it looks good, I love it, it's so sweet and reassuring! However, in the introduction, "It was only us later"... Is there a big sword in the future? 😨😰😱

Well, the only puzzling thing is that everyone really sleeps together and rests on the same bed (maybe because I have never had such a close relationship from the perspective of companions. There is always a subtle sense of awkwardness when seeing this kind of plot... X) After reading the rest, most of it is understandable. The solutions to the problems faced in the original work are excellent, and the analysis of the characters is also very interesting. Compared with the previous book, which mainly pursued the research and expansion of techniques, this book explores more diverse perspectives on changing the situation, and is more "thorough" in preparation. There is no doubt that there are omissions, which is very interesting. From different angles, it gave me many perspectives to look at the dilemma of the original work and the character itself (as well as the position and real thoughts) and solutions from various angles, which gave me a lot of inspiration. And Ruri is very cute (?), Very strong, and very vividly portrayed, I like it. All in all, this is a particularly worth-watching episode among the works about Ju Hui's interpretation of the meaning, and it is highly recommended to read.

It's really super, super, super good-looking! I think this is the most satisfying novel among all the spell battles, especially the setting of the protagonist, the sister control. Really, who knows? ! ! ! After reading this book, I really felt like I was hooked. I thought about it all the time. I was attracted to it by its name at first, and then the more I read it, the more I read it. I am looking forward to its update every day. Go read this book, and you won't say a word after reading it.

I like it very much, it's interesting, and it's a book that suits my taste. The protagonist is not cookie cutter, he is very strong. But the ability and character image can make people see something new at a glance. The most praiseworthy thing is his portrayal of the protagonist. In the hands of the author, the fictitious character of Shaozi's brother is just like the original work, a living character. The protagonist's family is also clearly told, and the protagonist's character and experience are all reasonable and resonant. The interactions and characterizations between the characters are also very vivid. (Just a quick reminder, there are so many close interactions between Xiayou Wujo and the protagonist, but the main text just can't be eaten😭The extras are still okay)

It's so comfortable to watch. . Comfortable in every sense of the word. Even if you haven't read the original work, you can still read it very smoothly. Maybe it's because there are so many fanfics on the market about systems, time travel, knowing the plot, and cheating (they are all the same, and the more they become boring), I suddenly saw this one, and it was amazing. ... It all depends on our Liuli's IQ and the company of the people around us. Watching it makes my heart warm and my brain swell. The extras are also well-fed and take care of all readers. There is no other book in the world that suits my taste so well.

The writing style has matured to the naked eye, and it delicately integrates the protagonist into the world view of Curse, erasing all regrets. The estrangement between Glass and Jiewu at the same time was handled in detail, and it also highlighted the special trust between the family and friendship between the four people. The protagonist is completely created, perfectly explaining the principle of the physical spell of soul magic, and every plot is inevitable. I'm going to blow this fandom up a notch, it's my top one!