Death by Hunger: Symbiosis

It's a very good fanfic. I've been looking for food like crazy recently. I hope it can become popular. Now my attributes have given me a deep understanding of what it feels like to be hungry. There's no end in sight. I smoked almost a pack of cigarettes and I still haven't recovered [crying]

Counting it all together, it is the best among the fans and the follow-up has not been significantly changed. It is also very good. I hope the author can write about 300,000 words. At the end, although the colleagues of this work are basically not popular, it is really touching to generate electricity for love.

Very good, awesome. (Highest praise) The character design is not broken, and the number of words is the largest, which is impressive. The novel has a main line. It is not a simple sweet article, but it is a very good novel. The article does not introduce a new character, but mainly focuses on Liang (if you have a bad feeling for Liang, don't read it). Mansui's character design has not collapsed, and some personal settings are included. The plot connects after the end of the game. If you have played "Hungry Death" and don't have any bad feelings about the above, you can watch it. It's quite impressive. The writing and descriptions in Tomato are very good. It's not obvious that the author is writing it for the first time. (Only a dozen chapters have been updated, let's see if the plot collapses later)

A good book, the author wrote it carefully and the writing style is good. After playing the game, adding this can bring great comfort to your heart that has been stabbed.

It's very interesting. It's a fan-optional game novel. I hope the author can marry Liang and Mansui. I also hope that the work will get better and better and the plot will become more interesting. Author, you can keep writing until the end.

I really didn't expect that the author's writing style has become so mature when he is only in the second grade of junior high school. The characters are very consistent with the original work and the characterization is very detailed. I feel that it is qualified to be a follow-up or DLC to Hungry Death. If Lao Ling could see it, I would probably want to recruit you. There are also a lot of fighting scenes in the progress of the plot. I feel a little ptsd after watching it. The sword skills of the final knight's journey are very good. I won't do it next time. The knife killed me. Mansui's death seemed to have pierced my heart. I shed tears. I really can't watch it a second time. I hope the author will make more extra stories to send sugar. The child is going to die with a knife [cry] [cry] [cry]

The author's writing style is very good, and the gaps after the ending of symbiosis are better filled, which comforts the heart after eating the knife.

As a player who has just finished all the Starving Death endings, I can see that the author has played this game seriously and thought about it seriously. The plot logic is also in line with the original work. I hope the author will update it more, step by step, and use this fan novel to smooth out the regrets in the hearts of us Starving Death players. PS: Give me more sugar, my friend has hypoglycemia [laughter]

This is the most interesting one among the many fanfics written by Hungry Death. First of all, its narrative style and writing style are very close to the original game. There is no deliberate piling of words or too vulgar narrative. Compared with other works that want to match up Liangsui from the beginning and just write a happy ending, the author chose to take it slow and let them slowly develop their relationship and experience some twists and turns, which makes it more fascinating to read. Some other characters have also been added to make the story fuller. The personal chapters of these characters are also very close to the style of the original work. I even doubt whether they were written by Lao Ling himself╭( ￣ ▽￣)╭

The fourth chapter is currently online, but after all, it is a fan, so it is normal that the character is not very similar to the original work.

It is a better second creation of fan symbiosis. It not only restores the character of the characters, but also enriches the character image of Sui Yuliang nine years later. These existences are incomparable in other fan fictions. When the symbiosis is played to the end, when Ryo sees Mansui nine years later in the boat, it is inevitable that people will look forward to a scene of the two holding an umbrella. After playing the game and reading this book, there is always a sense that the story is still continuing, and Ryo and Mansui are still on the road together.

It satisfies the fantasies about Sui Heliang's back and the writing is also very good.

Invincible, I want to watch them together, but I don't know if it's possible Cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The writing of this book is very good, and it can be seen that someone has played this game seriously. The author has his own understanding and strict logic, which is very consistent with the original work. I just finished all the endings and I was really disappointed. This novel has soothed the regrets in my heart. May there be no more hunger deaths in the world [Sending Hearts] Let me tell you quietly, the author is only in the second grade of junior high school [laughing evilly]

The writing is very consistent with the characters of the original work. It does not deliberately sugarcoat or avoid the important (although I like eating sweets). The relationship between Liangsui is also very consistent with the original work. It is complex and difficult to distinguish, not just love or hate. In short, it is very interesting.

Come on, the author writes very well, and the creativity with options is also very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on [sending heartfelt wishes]

This article is a continuation of the ending of "Hungry Death: A Thousand Miles Journey in the Late Ming Dynasty". Both the writing style and the content and plot are fascinating, and the subtle plots also poke into the hearts of the audience. The image of the adult Mansui is more deeply portrayed, which is most important to readers. The author does not use the sloppy and simple knotting method to summarize the relationship between the two, but uses "love" to express Liangsui's caring feelings. Instead, Liang "loves" Mansui, and Mansui "loves" Liang. This is the best, although readers would prefer this pair. CP can have a clear relationship, including me, but the complexity of their relationship is not suitable for defining it like this. If they get married like this, I will feel even more empty. The author undoubtedly uses a more eclectic and perfect way to write the most beautiful relationship between the two, but I feel unsure and contradictory. On the contrary, I hope that their relationship can be truly settled and "love" can be truly concrete. This is what we want to see. I hope that the author can completely smooth out the contradictions in the relationship between the two in the subsequent chapters, so that the confession comes naturally and is expected by everyone. But if this article ends here, I think the relationship chapter will be perfect.

I have to say that the author's writing style is the best among the fanfics I've read so far in Thousand Miles Journey. It is clearly organized and the development of the emotional line is very natural. It satisfies all my fantasies about the future of Tongsheng Line, but the update is a bit slow [laughing]

It's a very good book. The characters and personalities are consistent with the original work. It's not a mindless read. The plot design is also quite good. In fact, ending Chapter 119 is a good choice, but of course there is no way to put the knife. I personally think that when Suisui dies in the ending of Knight Rider, we can add some good memories of the past, recalling the first time we met Suisui, recalling secretly performing shadow plays at night together, and recalling the farewell by Luoyang Lake. This will allow readers to recall the original work, and it should be more sharp [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] (I am in a very good mental state

It's good to watch, I recommend it. As for the plot, I hope it will be sweeter at the end and don't suddenly have a knife, okay?

The writing is very good, and the characters and plot are particularly well-written. Although there is no shortage of jokes. But overall it's pretty good. When will they get married? I'll make some more Fulu feast [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's very well written in big letters! It's worth reading [Sending Hearts]

It looks great. I love watching it. It all feels like it was written in the official formalities.

This is the first gala game I have played, I really like it, and it has great stamina. The author is so awesome. I was in the second grade of junior high school and I didn't know where Akaishi was, but the author's writing style is already so good [crying] [crying] [crying]

This is the fanfic that troubles me the most. The good thing is that the relationship between the two is very subtle, and it is hard to feel that Sui actually has a crush on Liang. But the bad thing is that Liang is too obsessed with what he has done. But to put it into perspective, if it were me, I would not forgive myself so easily. Compared with the ending of the symbiosis line next door, "Stop Being a Wolf" or "My Lovely Wife Man Sui" The two are not married, which is relatively unique, but after reading it, I can actually feel that the two have reached that point, which is better. After all, according to our modern thinking, no matter how much we forgive the person who killed his father and his enemy, the dead person will not be able to come back, so I let Liang accompany Sui to atone for his sins and have a relationship that is more like a lover. I think it is very good. For original characters, Chen San is well-deserved perfection. In the face of life and death, he overcomes his own cowardice and becomes his own hero. Such righteousness makes it easy for people to forget that he is actually only a teenager. I actually had some objections to Yang Jian's appearance at the beginning. After all, a thief appeared out of nowhere and had so much money. But later on, why he stole, his atonement for the theft, and later his life-and-death friendship with Liang Sui, it was very touching. The character of Feng Qi is actually not well written, and can only be used as a transitional character. The bad part is that what happened with the girl, how he survived later, and whether there is a higher person behind him, there are still many questions that have not been resolved. The author hastily published his extra story, which can actually be considered a drawback. After reading the whole book, I think this is the best in the circle of hungry people. The whole book is about atonement, but the sin is not what they want. Whether it is the people killed by Liang Duo, Chen San for his own weakness, or Yang Jian for his stealing, every character has completed his own atonement. In such an era, it is already difficult to live, so if you have just played or just finished playing, this can definitely be your first fanfic.

Much better than the previous book, clear and organized [Love]

I finished this work in three nights. I watched it a little late because my phone was confiscated last year when I was liking this IP. But it might as well be my great appreciation and recommendation for this work. The length of this novel is appropriate, and the plot is not procrastinating or too sweet. In terms of characterization, I think it is the most realistic fanfic. The author has a good handle on Liang's inner guilt and eagerness to pay for his life, as well as Sui's feelings for Liang. The original characters are not obtrusive, as if it is an official sequel. There is less plot, but there is enough weight to prevent it from becoming a pure sweet novel. It is hard to imagine that such a high-quality work was written by a junior high school student. I think the only shortcoming is the Yangzhou extra chapter. I feel that it is not necessary to add this chapter, because the ending has been determined before and the sweet article has also been published to show that everything is developing in a good direction. So I really don't understand the meaning of this chapter, and I am a little uncomfortable with the ending of this chapter. After all, The official also said that he would not be able to kill Liangsui, so in the end, it is completely unnecessary to kill Liangsui under the premise of the symbiotic ending. In the end, it ended with the dirty words said by the Qing soldier. I really don't understand the author's purpose, but I still hope that the author will make changes in the future, and I look forward to the author releasing better works. Come on

I feel that the author is the kind of sweet-smelling and soft boy, whose face will turn red when his ears are touched, and who will cry and burp when there is a quarrel. It's sweet, soft and fragrant. It makes you cry when you pinch it. It makes you burp when you cry. It smells like milk all over your body. It's a little milk bag that you will throw into your arms and act coquettishly when you feel wronged, and then keep burping in your arms.

The organization is clear and the writing is excellent. Every character has flesh and blood, and the male and female protagonists constantly recall the past because of some things on the road, but this also makes their respective feelings clearer. He is a leader in fan fiction. I hope the author can continue to work hard.

Looking forward to it! A rare masterpiece! The character's personality is well grasped, and this is how fan fiction should be written! It's very good. I finished reading it in two days. I felt really good. I've finally recovered from my hunger pangs. The author remembers to update more after the summer vacation!