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The writing is superb, the emotions are really delicate, and the logic is also very good. I really like the relationship between the male and female protagonists, especially the male protagonist who always guides me gently. Wow, and the plots in each world are also very novel. The most important thing is that when the female protagonist is strong, the male protagonist is really like a puppy, hehehe [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]. The ss interaction between the male and female protagonists in the first world is also very delicious! ! ! The writing is also great! It's just one world, only a few dozen chapters, so I must write more worlds [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

This quick travel article is really touching! The setting of the male protagonist traveling through various worlds to save the female protagonist is actually not new, but the author has written the emotional line extremely delicately. There is no love-at-first-sight routine, but a slowly growing warmth. The first world is particularly real. The female protagonist is not a paper person. She is flesh and blood and can be stubborn, jealous, hesitant and nervous. The male protagonist is also gentle and smoky. I like to see the little details of their daily interactions, such as the hero asking the heroine to spend New Year's Eve with him, the two of them going to the supermarket to buy clothes, setting off fireworks and watching movies, etc. Or maybe the original heroine has created a cute image, or the heroine secretly wiped her tears and the hero didn't ask...

I haven't written a book review for a long time, so I'll write briefly. As a work that unfolds from the perspective of the male protagonist, 7° is particularly successful in shaping the image. He is not a superior "savior", but step by step closer to the heart of the offset character through companionship, understanding and guidance. Whether it is the preference given to "children who lack love" in the campus chapter, or the firmness of "No matter what you become, I will love you" in the apocalyptic chapter, 7° always shows a delicate and tolerant tenderness. This kind of tenderness is not weakness, but a deep emotional strength, allowing readers to feel the emotional sedimentation even in the fast-paced plot. Although the story spans multiple worlds and settings, the author always maintains "emotional coherence." Although the 701s in each small world have different identities and personalities, they all have a real and touching connection with 7°. There is no sudden emotional development, and there is no mechanical "routine love". Every heartbeat has a trace to follow, and every redemption comes naturally. In particular, the design of "love" as the final method in the "End Times" pushes the emotional theme of the book to a climax, echoing the sentence in the introduction: "Yes, all it takes is a lot of love." As the book says: "Eternal love is my sincerity in liking you." And this sincerity, the author has truly conveyed it to every reader through words.

Looks good! This book belongs to the type of book that gets better and better. I didn't get into it at first. I felt that the male protagonist was a bit like a human machine [laughing awkwardly], and some of his mental activities and expressions seemed to be floating outside. But the heroine's character is very good and she is very independent! A lot of words are devoted to the female protagonist. Although the male protagonist is the one who conquers the novel, it is not like some other novels where the female protagonist is passive and placed in a position of being "liked". You can see the active "liking" of the female protagonist. I really like this feeling of "licking the dog" (no derogatory meaning) for each other! It's love that goes both ways. Please update the author quickly [Blow kiss] The combination of the witch and the puppy is really cute.

This is one of the quick-travel stories from a boy's perspective that I've seen so far. It's the most beautiful. The emotional line is written in a way that I like very much. I don't fall in love suddenly and out of nowhere, but there is a process, and the way I get along is super loving! The ending is also good and doesn't end abruptly. I hope the following content will be more high-quality and good-looking

I have only read the first story so far, and my rating is perfect The relationship between the male protagonist 7° and the female protagonist 701 particularly touched me. The warmth between them made me want to bloom towards the sunshine [crying] Quickly wear the male protagonist (responsible, has normal human emotions, and has a positive personality) Anyway, I feel that the male protagonist is already a perfect match [face covering] It's a bit sad in the middle (actually it's not bad), but after this sad episode is over, it becomes endlessly sweet [laughs] If I meet someone like the male protagonist, even if I am a man, I will have to fall in and trick the male protagonist into going to Chengdu to be together [laughter]

That's great. I've been thinking about it since I read the novel, why is it that the female protagonist has always been the one to save the male protagonist, and now the male protagonist has to save the female protagonist. Moreover, the characters created by the author are very good, and the plot logic is also great. I love it so much, it's a blast!

Overall, the setting is very novel and the writing is okay. But I can't quite accept the character of the heroine in the first world. In the original plot, Yang's mother's family gave her a lot of love and help, but because they moved later and did not continue to be nice to the heroine and did not truly regard her as her closest family member, the heroine collapsed and killed the entire family? Her mother was so mean to her, why didn't she go against her own mother? I can't understand it very much. From some details in the article, it can be seen that the main character of the heroine is kind, but the paranoid character caused by the tragic past makes me feel that it is unacceptable. The character is somewhat fragmented and not very attractive. The character of the male protagonist is also a bit unclear. The process of the male protagonist falling in love with the female protagonist is a bit far-fetched in my opinion, and the foreshadowing is not very good, but the atmosphere after the love is well written. The author's characterization didn't particularly appeal to me. But the overall setting and the foreshadowing laid out above are all of my interest, and I also think innovative works are worthy of encouragement, so I plan to stick with it and see the next world.

The male protagonist Qin Du (7°) travels through various small worlds as a corrector, gently dismantling the deviant content of the female protagonist Qi Lingyi (701). From strange temptations to heart-to-heart dependence, every drop in the danger value is the heartbeat hidden in the plot. The delicate emotional foreshadowing, the right amount of sweetness, and the warmth that goes in both directions make this cross-world love particularly touching.

Help! ! ! ! It's really good to watch. I couldn't help but leave a five-star review before I finished reading it. [Crying] The characters are so interesting. I'm satisfied with the settings that I usually want to see but never see. The key is BG! BG! BG! I love BG!!! The male protagonist's perspective is even more special. The wet female ghost and other things are also very shocking and delicious [crying] All the perverted XPs are satisfied. The key is that the girl and boy are all very good babies, and the supporting roles are good for everyone! Woo woo woo woo. It would be better if I could keep writing more settings [crying][crying][crying]

It's very, very, very beautiful. I really like it. The author, please give it a try. I've already promoted it in countless book promotion posts. Hahahaha. This book makes me feel very comfortable. The sadistic scenes in the first world are progressive and sweet. The story is also very novel and the characters are very full. They are really like real people. I like it so much. There is no female rivalry and the female protagonist is not limited to loving the male protagonist. I am so happy to read it. I will always support you, come on, come on, come on😚

As a fast-travel novel mainly from the perspective of the male protagonist, this is a very good novel. Especially the character creation of the male protagonist is very good. He is really gentle to the female protagonist and will look at her problems from the female protagonist's perspective. The first small world has attracted me, I hope you can continue to do so, more and more [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Super pretty! ! [Congratulations] I really like the author's narrative style. It's eloquent and clear. The male and female protagonists are clearly shaped. I also like the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists. It's very delicate and it's easy to get immersed in it.

Oh my gosh, how many blessings did I have to accumulate in my previous life to read this treasure book? The writing is so good. Fast Time Travel + 1v1 is just too good for my taste. I have read other fast time travel stories before, but they all had many female protagonists that I didn't like. When I saw Da Da Da, I felt so happy and my body was warm. Even though it was exam week, I finished reading it in one go. I even read it in the middle of the night and couldn't stop reading it. The writing is very good, the emotions are very delicate, and the character's outlook is very positive. I really like DaDa. It feels like DaDa is already in shape. I really want to tie DaDa in the basement and let DaDa update ten chapters every day.

I've only read eight chapters and couldn't help but come here to comment. The author is really awesome [adoration][adoration][adoration] The heroine's character is vividly described in just eight pictures, it's really real! The male protagonist also has a really good personality, and the characters written by the female author are the soul of the female author! I really like the author! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] This book is also the first male-female quick-traveling book from a male perspective, which is really shocking! It has been on my bookshelf for a long time, but I never dared to click on it and read it, and it got out of hand! Not much good to say, just see for yourself! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Very nice quick travel article! The male protagonist is gentle, steady, responsible, emotionally stable, and always respects and guides the female protagonist. This kind of character is very, very rare in reality. No one can refuse a gentle and mature man, okay! The heroine will be paranoid in a certain aspect in each world, but her character background is kind and strong, she is just like a great heroine! And sometimes some little actions and expressions are particularly cute! I love her so much! The young couple is a perfect match! The plot is also very complete and the logic is smooth. The two people will have a little bit of abuse in the first small world, but everything will be sweet after that.

It's beautiful. It's been a long time since I met a male and female protagonist that suits my taste. Externally, she is cold to varying degrees; internally, the heroine is more cold-faced, cute, and straight-forward, while the male protagonist is more gentle and guiding. The two of them act coquettishly towards each other and make me die [Adoration] 66 is quite cute, and he works hard to learn how to be a good person; the center is the head of the group, who cares about each small world and the physical and mental health of each corrector. The entire organization is very positive. I personally like this relaxed and pleasant atmosphere. The plot didn't have any surprises for me, the writing was smooth and the emotional line was very sweet.

It's really beautiful. Every book by Xingxing is very beautiful! I've been following it since Qingqing! They are all very suitable to my taste! It's not like some novels that deliberately create unreasonable plots in order to follow the plot, and it doesn't deliberately drag out the plot, it's very smooth! Every character is very nice and real, that is, they are very clever [and heartfelt] and very comfortable to watch. This book 701 and 7℃ are also super cute! Getting along is very natural! Some micro-coercion or something (actually there is no such thing, it's just a mutual love), just a couple's trick! Xingxing can just write what he wants to write. I hope Xingxing will write better as he writes! Super awesome!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! It's so good that I stayed up late during finals week to read it! I like this book. It's the first time I read it from the perspective of the male protagonist. The character of the male protagonist is well created and the heroine's character is super attractive. I'm very moved. I love it! Big cheers for the author! ! I will keep following for updates! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Sending heart][Sending heart]

Good looking(♥∀♥) The plot doesn't drag on and the writing is comfortable. A young couple falling in love without involving a third person is simply a perfect little sugar cookie! Highly recommended ♡♡♡♡♡ Male protagonist: He appears to be a gentleman but is actually a little pervert who focuses on his wife. The heroine: She is a big pervert who has a dark heart but pretends to be a normal person. The first world: If the lack of childhood is the rainy season that cannot be ignored in the future, it is sticky and wet, just like a doll in the mud. Qi Lingyi is a doll in the mud. When she questioned fate countless times, the God of Destiny found her. Qin Du, the God of Destiny for dolls, accurately found the doll that made him feel distressed among countless old lines. From then on, in every sticky rainy season, there was an umbrella leaning for her. World 2: There is no distinction between good and evil, right and wrong, and the world has no other colors except black and white. Born in the earth, she does not know good and evil, and the world is only black and white. When she was healing in a dark corner, the God of Destiny met her again. It existed in the dark, and she was constantly looking for it. However, the God of Destiny had some misunderstandings with her. When the misunderstanding was resolved, the God leaned over and the believers looked directly at her. For the first time, the world has color, and we have a new identity: family. World 3: Strong possessiveness is a sword that can stab your lover. No matter how careful you are, you are still afraid of your lover being stabbed. Even if you want to forget what you have experienced, it will turn into an invisible cage to trap the soul that longs for love. God will lean down and desperately search for the soul that longs for love. When receiving the apple from the God of Destiny, fate once again favors the forgotten believer. The soul that longs for love has the strongest love from the gods, and possessiveness becomes the proof of love. World 4:……………………

I've finished reading the first story. The heroine is really a little snow leopard who lacks love and is a bit gloomy and yandere but has a very kind nature... I like her round eyes and alert look. The male protagonist is also very good. I like this gentle and kind male protagonist who respects others.

So pretty...! I have been following the updates, and I have watched 7°° grow up and gain its own abilities and lovers hahhh. Really good! 7° Himself is a very good person, and I feel like he is a very responsible and kind person, otherwise he would not have been dragged into the small world for saving people. Because of these qualities, the first world will hesitate to be with 701 because he is a mission holder, and subsequent worlds will also worry about everything about 701. Sometimes if the conditions are right, he will also help others in the small world, but don't worry, he won't help completely all the time. After all, his mission target is still Xiaoyi. 701 Is totally cute with a cold face...🥰🥰The little world of snow leopard is so cute to me, and the most suitable animal sculpture for 701 has appeared! She is also a very good person, with a kind background, and she does not go on a killing spree in the small world. It is because the so-called protagonist hurt her that she turns evil. At first, I will be suspicious and wary of 7°, but I trust my own eyes and heart. When I see 7° doing this and that, I will gradually let go and face my own feelings, which is also good. The two of them have a good relationship, warm and happy, and they make me feel soft! There are not many small worlds, but the settings from the world to the characters are different, so they don't look the same, which is good. Anyway, I hope 701 and 7°° can be happy 99. Thank you to the author for the wonderful experience you brought me! [Blowing kiss]

Highly recommend, this novel is really good-looking, and the male and female protagonists are very charming. Apart from not liking the first small world, the female protagonist is abused, and the female protagonist's baby is a peerless little bitter melon. Moreover, the male protagonist will also slightly abuse the female protagonist. However, considering the character of the male protagonist, his behavior is understandable, and it is also necessary for the transition of the plot and does not affect the viewing. And the most important thing is that I read novels and love the writing style. The author's writing style is very good. As a result, after reading this novel, I couldn't read other fast-travel novels. I wanted to read other novels by this author, but it turned out that they were not the type I like to read. I have been short of books for a long time.

Very, very, very beautiful. . It's the first time I've watched it from the male protagonist's time travel perspective. It's pretty good. The male protagonist's outlook on life is very upright, and there's no such thing as one person licking the other. The two have been loving each other sweetly since the first time they met. The male protagonist is strong in heart, gentle and has big breasts (? Husband). The female protagonist is a lady in appearance but soft in heart and likes a sweet baby. It feels a little bit like the male guide. The succubus is really super good-looking. It's just that it's hard to wait for the update. I can't watch it in one go like the first time (?

It looks good. The most important thing is that I feel that the three views of the text are very upright. The whole text in Tomato has the value that normal people can understand. The characters are very three-dimensional, the characters are particularly vivid, and the writing style is delicate and distinctive. I just finished watching the first Small World, and I'm a little overwhelmed with stamina, so I'm going to take my time writing a review. Recommend

It's from the male protagonist's perspective, but it's really well written. Some of the things the male protagonist does about the female protagonist really go beyond the fixed thinking in many books, especially in regards to sex. There are too many words to express their love, but the male protagonist here will stop and observe how the female protagonist feels, instead of just focusing on his own happiness and continuing to do it. And this is just one of them. The male protagonist's respect for the female protagonist really goes beyond many articles. The author should be a really great person. There are too few stories about time travel from the perspective of the male protagonist, and he wrote this article so well.

It's a very sweet story, the hero and heroine keep changing worlds to fall in love, the arrogant and evil girl✖️the kind and loyal dog, but I always felt a little sad while reading it. Because if the male protagonist is not in the first world to do tasks, he must be close to the female protagonist, and must get along with the female protagonist every day. His character is unlikely to fall in love with the female protagonist. In fact, the possibility of the male and female protagonist falling in love is like the author deliberately creating the conditions for the female protagonist to be loved in order to make the female protagonist happy - choosing a kind and clean male protagonist, throwing him into the female protagonist's world, and giving him the task of solving the heroine's darkening. Under such circumstances, it is impossible for the male protagonist not to fall in love with the female protagonist. When I read the article, I felt very sorry for the heroine, because she is really cute and worthy of love. I also know that if it were not for the author's deliberate setting, she would not be able to achieve happiness, which makes me feel even more uncomfortable. Okay, just random thoughts... I only write book reviews for my own records. They only represent my personal feelings. If you disagree, please ignore me.

I have been reading novels since I was in the sixth grade of elementary school until I am about to graduate in my senior year of college. The book is ten years old, so my evaluation should be quite useful for reference! I am a person who loves writing! The only drawback is the writing style! So what keeps me reading is basically the writing that I think is good. To be fair, this author's writing style is not the best among the novels I have read, but it is really heartwarming and makes you want to read on. And sometimes the author's writing is so cute hahahaha! The story of 701 and 7° has come to an end. In this novel, we can get to know a gentle and powerful 7°, and we can also get to know a 701 who is still kind-hearted even though his fate is bumpy and he encounters many hardships. I love this story! The firm choice for each other, never allowing misunderstandings to stay overnight, and the firm protection of both parties make people feel soft-hearted... It is very warm and beautiful! Be sure to check out ww.

It's super good-looking. The author's concept is great and the three views are correct. It unfolds from the male protagonist's perspective but is completely a female-oriented story. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are both very good people. The hub is good, 966 is good, and the stories in each plane are also very good. Anyway, this article is really good. You will know the charm of this book as long as you read the first plane. The first plane perfectly constructs the personality charm of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the settings of each plane are also very intentional. Thinking about it, 7⁰ is a very good person. Before the relationship was established, he was a person with good values and good character. After the relationship was established, he was even more like a wife. I feel sorry for the experience of the 701 baby in the original world. The heroine baby is really kind and a blank slate, but she also has her own thoughts. I like this kind of character very much. One of my favorite settings is that every time the paranoid 701 takes her own revenge in the story of going off the track, it is very friendly to readers about breast cancer. Looking forward to the extra episode!

Full marks, it's too sweet. It's actually a rare male-perspective quick-travel story. Exploding lights! If you don't watch it, you will really miss it. The female protagonist is so cute and the male protagonist has such a positive outlook [crying][crying][crying][crying] It makes me, a non-love person, want to fall in love. I will support you as the king!