Casual Cultivator: Breaking into the World of Cultivating Immortals Starts with Making AK

Review your own book first. This book is so good and has the qualities of a great master! ! I have a question for you fellow Taoists. The pace of this book is relatively fast, and it was written in the early 100,000 words to the golden elixir stage. What do you think? Is it a little too fast? Fortunately, this book is a novel about cultivating immortals. There are many realms, and there are many more to write about.

It's okay for the protagonist to be a lone ranger, stop meddling in other people's business, put your interests first, if you don't have enough strength, just hide behind the scenes and do things, don't be warm, don't have so many conspiracies and tricks against the protagonist, be more decisive in killing, and eradicate the enemy, write all the heavens

This is a very fast novel about upgrading to immortality. Although the realm breaks through too quickly, the reader's mentality has not changed. However, it is undeniable that this novel is simple and decisive.

It's good to watch, but the protagonist is just like the Son of Destiny. Things happen wherever he goes. The overall plot is about practicing for a breakthrough, running away when encountering danger, and then practicing for a breakthrough after reaching a new map, and then running away again. However, the author's writing is very good and the connection is very appropriate. There is no repetitive feeling. It is worth watching [Like] [Like]

Pig's Feet is cautious and decisive. He doesn't interact too much with his surroundings. He doesn't write too much about alchemy and weapon refining. He gives a spiritual stone mine and gets it right in one go. Later, he should write more about the secrets of protecting the way. He can't rely on cannons and atomic bombs😰. He concentrates on improving his own cultivation.

Wonderful! Wonderful! It's really wonderful! ! Ah ha ha ha

It is deeply loved by old bookworms. It can be written well and has a world view. Decisive and ruthless.

Come on, come on, come on [eat melon]

Very very beautiful

Beautifully written!

Why is no one watching?

To write about the style of Han Laomo, it is just that the upgrade is too fast... There are too few words, so I will write a million and then upload it...

The writing is good, the most important thing is that without the Holy Mother, the killing is decisive, and the heroine cannot be a eunuch.

Come on, the author has written a good Gou Dao protagonist, and he can level up quickly without being forced to level up. Currently, there is no female protagonist.

This book is very good, it develops steadily, and there is no detail about getting to the top in one step.

The subject matter is very novel, no resources are wasted, and he knows how to run away very well.

It's so well written, don't stop! There's nothing wrong with going fast. It's very exciting and compact, and it's still unfinished. Keep going.

It's okay. It's a bit similar to the writing style of Chen Laozu and Lao Niu, but it doesn't have the sense of belonging that Chen Laozu does.

Very good-looking, decisive in killing, retreating when necessary, truly a man of the highest standards.