Naruto: Immortality Begins with Building a Village

A cool story without CP, invincible in the mid-term, no abuse points, so you can enter. At first, I was attracted by the rebirth of the original characters in the text. As a result, the main plot was surprisingly well written and I enjoyed reading it. Although there are some bugs that are inconsistent with the original settings, and the protagonist's combat power increases too quickly, it can be ignored. This article does not focus much on the battle plot, but on infrastructure, people's livelihood, ninjutsu development, etc., So it is good as a daily leisure article. In addition, the most attractive part of the text is rebirth. I was originally looking forward to seeing the plot of the original characters being slapped in the face and pretending to be bad, but the rebirth only took up a few chapters, and only Fugaku and Hiruzen were included. I can only say that the most attractive point in the copywriting is the least highlighted, which is very regrettable.

There are very few development novels in Naruto that are not blindly copied and pasted. So far, they all deserve this five-star rating.

Overall, this book is really enjoyable! ! ! When I saw Chapter 145, there was only one small drawback, that is, the author had to match Tobirama with the protagonist's secretary. It felt like the author had nothing to write about, so he had to find a female secretary to match Tobirama. In the original work, Tobirama took on the responsibility of protecting Konoha but had no intention of falling in love. Now that Konoha is the strongest, it is normal for Tobirama to get married, but this is too sloppy. In the previous chapter, the protagonist saw that the female secretary often went to the laboratory, and then discovered that she had feelings for Tobirama. In the next chapter, it was written directly that Tobirama also had feelings for her, and then they got together directly. Since the author wanted to give Tobirama an emotional line, why did he make such a simple pairing? It's a bit like matching literature. The older female secretary next to the Hokage is paired with the Hokage's closest teacher who is older and has not gotten married. If the author wants to write this emotional line, that's no problem. You can lay the groundwork in the first few chapters, for example, if you find that the female secretary has been staring at Tobirama, Tobirama sometimes can't help but glance at the female secretary beforehand, or find that Tobirama often talks to the female secretary, etc. There are some emotional foundations and foreshadowings in the previous chapters for readers to accept, instead of "You love me, I love you, let's get married together~"

The writing is very good, and it is quite relaxing and comfortable to read.

This novel has shortcomings and unreasonable places, but I think some of the conjectures are very good. Why can ordinary people abuse Hinata and Uchiha on the street? The author's explanation here makes me feel bright. The hook is not too big. The disadvantage is that it starts too early. It is almost 60 years since the plot started. After thinking about it, I know that the protagonist has long been invincible. I don't know how to write about Otsutsuki after that. But it is also very good. It is my favorite type 5 [Love]

I feel that the author wrote it very well, but when the male protagonist received the C-level Hinata card, did he miss out on Hinata's guardian gossip? Remember to protect the Bagua, it seems that it was awakened when Hinata was 12 years old, right?

This is the first time the author has written a book, and it is already very good to be able to write it like this. The first half goes until the killing of Madara and travels through the timeline. They are all very well written and will be crushed all the way. It is worth reading, and the author will continue to work hard to create greater glories.

It's very good. There is no plot or water battle, no stallion, no suppression, and the system is good. In the later period, I traveled through the Naruto world with my imagination and wrote this world like the origin of Naruto. It's just that the ending is so fast

To be honest, this is the first time I read about this situation that changed the ninja world from beginning to end, and even the entire ninja world was upgraded in the end. It was very interesting. This is what I think time travelers should do, overthrow those deformed rules and regulations, overthrow the daimyo rule, and achieve a comprehensive improvement from agriculture to commerce to construction to technology to spiritual practice [Send Heart] is a good idea for those who love this type of novel. It was the last time I traveled back to the original work and wrote about ten chapters in four stops [smile]

In fact, the author's original structural design is pretty good, and the perspective and point selection of the entire work are also very good. It is considered a relatively good Naruto fanfic. In the end, the author also reflected on the shortcomings of this book and was very sincere.

It's very beautiful. I don't know if you feel that way. Anyway, I think it's very beautiful. It's very beautiful. [Shy] You are a handsome and charming author. Please be merciful and update it ten times a day! ! ! ! ! !

It feels great! ! ! The author doesn't need to apologize. Really, I feel that the original outline was not written out and it makes me feel happy. The author is really nice. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][like][like][like]

Become Hokage directly, without giving F4 a chance, directly reform the entire Fire Country, and the plot will not be delayed. This is very good. Keep it up, write more plots about reform and development, how strong it has become, how many ninja armies have been added to the Fire Country, how many more Kage-level masters have been added, and finally challenge Uchiha Madara and Otsutsuki to unify the ninja world.

This book looks very enjoyable, the basic IQ is online, and the character design cannot be considered collapsed, because the overall environment has been changed and the cards have been reshuffled. It also completes various regrets, making it suitable for those who like Naruto to read. Wall Crack Recommended. Of course, if you insist on not caring about the problem of not having a heroine... After all, if you are powerful enough, even if you have a heroine, you are just a companion (as we all know, the stronger you are, the more difficult it is to reproduce). Besides, it doesn't matter if you don't have a heroine, there is one... Hehehe [laughing evilly]

It looks good and the output is quite high. I hope to always be able to update three times a day. And please don't stop updating or unfinishing it. I hope I can write thousands of pages. I will keep chasing it. Five-star praise. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It is a light-hearted fanfic, but because the protagonist's strength has increased so quickly, the pace is very fast. In addition to a few chapters about the Fourth Ninja War that can be written without using your brain, the end is not a casual one, and it ends decisively.

It's rare to watch it all, it doesn't matter if it hangs up, as long as the plot is smooth enough and not boring, it will still work. However, as a newcomer, my level is limited, and it is difficult to achieve a great level of play without losing control due to the need for more content.

The entire article is about the measures taken to achieve a peaceful life. From individuals to families to villages and countries, the characters in the author's writing are very three-dimensional. The character bond is also very touching.

Xingzhuo and Yuuto's CP is really good hehe~ It's good-looking, it's really good-looking, and you won't lose money if you invest in it

It's very interesting, but it's not finished yet, and I'm worried it will collapse later. First of all, I want to make a wish that there will be no heroine. If there is one, I hope that I will explain it in advance. It is very embarrassing to have a harem. If I want to open a harem, I hope that I will explain it in advance.

The protagonist's combat power has soared very quickly since he obtained the system. This has led to the fact that in the later period, he can punch Otsutsuki, kick and kick the entire ninja world, and can travel everywhere. So overall, this is a super cool article, cool!

Super super super super beautiful

I really, really like this kind of subject matter, and I'm obsessed with Konoha F4. Does anyone have a book of the same type?

This is the best fan novel I think. It is not exaggerated, has connotations, and is fast-paced. Although the author said that he was in a hurry when writing it, so the details were not handled well, but I personally think it is just the right ending.

It's a cool novel that I really like. I was originally looking forward to a second part, where I would travel to other worlds and kick over unsettled lunch boxes. However, the author felt that the protagonist was too strong and solved all the difficulties in one fell swoop, so he couldn't write an ups and downs plot. Hey, I'm really looking forward to the second part with Xingzhuo as the protagonist.

I love you, don't stop, I haven't seen enough yet

There are not many authors of the third update at the moment, please protect them. Also, the self-created characters are well written and their characteristics could be more distinct.

There are no good reviews for the heroine, the plot is not draggy, and it is worth watching!

The update speed of 6,000 words per day is considered very conscientious in Tomato.

Although there is no female protagonist, it is a very enjoyable novel, and I have made up for everything that needs to be done.