Old Nine Gates: Hidden Moon

The author's writing style is really good. Along the way, there is not only the tension of escaping, but also the emotion that a love like Solang can still appear in that place in Tibet. Unfortunately, it is not worth it in the end. I feel sorry for that little beggar. I don't know how much hardship he has endured. He has been homeless since he was a child, and in the end he became a substitute for others. Finally, he finally got a little warmth and died in pursuit of this warmth. Why was his death so light? Because he had no bloodline. Because he didn't have anything important on him. It was as if he saw himself.

The content is very attractive and the heroine is also good. Come on, keep updating.

Jue Jue Jue is really good-looking. It's rare to see fanfics starting from Baima with such exquisite writing. Most of them are Ultimate Notes. I really like the heroine's character. She has a golden finger, but she's not omnipotent, wise, or aggrieved.

It's very interesting. The heroine sticks to her heart, is brave and resourceful, and has not been assimilated by that era that cares little about human life. The author's writing is really good. The first part is very good, but the second part... I feel that the arrival of the heroine is of no use. She just fell in love twice suddenly, and got involved with Zhang Qiling? Is there any difference between the plot line and the original work? No difference…

The heroine is smart, very beautiful and very real

Damn, your writing is really beautiful. I like the character of the heroine very much. I am curious that the first one is Zhang Rishan, followed by Chen Pi. Is it because she broke up with Zhang Rishan?

It's kind of pretty. It's the kind of thing that's um... A little bit flawed, right? But it's very attractive. The author's writing style is very good. When I teamed up with Tangerine Pi for CP, I felt invincible.

I feel that the previous part was quite exciting, and the journey from growing up to escaping was quite exciting, but the time spent at Chen Pi's house was a bit long, and it wasn't that exciting. I feel that Zhang Rishan, as the first wife, why would he be broken up? Firstly, he is a member of the Zhang family. Secondly, even if he doesn't care about the Zhang family, if the heroine does something that threatens Zhang Qishan, then Zhang Rishan and the others will always break up.

It's very well written, with the customs and customs of Tibet in the old society, the heroine's tough and smart personality, and the friendship with Baima.

I have read a lot of Tomb Raiders fanfics, but few of them can give me a rating, especially a five-star rating. I really think this book is really interesting. No one has thought of renaming the girl, but it is really the first time that the heroine renames her, and it is also the same for taking Baima away. Really really pretty

It's good, good, and worth watching, but it's missing a bit [pinch]. The heroine has a strange life experience, went through ups and downs, and finally escaped from Tibet, but had to go back because she was poisoned when she was young. The female lead CPs currently include Zhang Rishan and 🍊Orange Peel. I don't know who else will come next. The female lead is too long-lived. The heroine has a good background. All animals like Goldfinger have a good feeling for the heroine. She drives and senses danger. However, her self-protection ability is still too poor. She has no force value and she is not very good at using poison. Wouldn't it be much better if there was someone who was good at using poison? If you are not strong yourself, it is too frustrating to always ask for help from others. I still prefer to be strong and have your own destiny in your own hands. The ending is a bit rushed, but it should be the author's intention for the second part. Now I'm reading the second part and it's over 80,000 words long. Give it a try.

It's really good-looking. The perspective is different from other Pirates fandoms. It makes the image of the heroine more three-dimensional. Even if she is separated from the main plot line, she is still an excellent independent individual. Her vitality is really attractive. The plot of this book maintains this rhythm. It is very good, but the update speed must be accelerated [Please update]

There are two movies that are quite interesting in terms of major themes. The author's writing is very good. The protagonist's experiences should be what ordinary time travelers would do. Goldfinger helps the protagonist a lot, but basically it only works on himself. I think his golden finger has more room for development. After all, this is the Republic of China, an era when current events create heroes. Regarding the emotional issues of the protagonist, the male protagonist in The Stolen Story is too innocent. Almost all the main male protagonists who have no formal relationship fall in love with the protagonist. But overall it is still recommended.

I have read a lot of Laojiumen fanfiction, and the starting point of this book is from the Tibetan area. It is really novel. There is no huge golden finger, just the perception of danger and the affinity for animals. I like this very much. But a huge unacceptable point is the male protagonist [laughing awkwardly] Chen Pi, as a younger brother, is written together with the lieutenant's deception. These two are not very easy to deal with. However, I saw the author's remedies in these pictures, and I wanted to write more about Chen Pi and the lieutenant's kindness to the heroine (do you want us to fight?), But I couldn't accept it from the beginning, and I can't do anything about it now. And there are more updates! ! !

Super beautiful, highly recommended I hope Baima, Brother and Zangyue will meet soon and Zangyue will regain all her memories. By the way, I hope Zhang Rishan can still have a relationship with Zang Yue. I really like them [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The friendship between the girls is really good. When they escaped from Tibet together, people wanted to cry. The cp I wrote was a bit difficult to write, it always felt weird, a bit difficult to write, and the emotions came very suddenly.

This is the first time I've seen a fanfic describing Baima, and it's very interesting. The friendship between the heroine and Baima is very tear-jerking, especially when they escaped from Medog. Although Baima and the man named Zhang still did not escape their destined fate, it was much better. I just don't know whether Baima lived well in the end. The heroine is also brave and resourceful, and her journey has been full of ups and downs, but she has never been defeated.

It's so good-looking, the heroine isn't too popular at all, and each character's personality is well written. It's just that Zhang Rishan left the production too quickly! ! ! I was fascinated by his face when I watched the TV series Lao Jiumen before. I know that he and the heroine have not been together for a long time, but it was so fast. One second he was laughing and his aunt was laughing, and the next second it broke Lao Tie's heart.

The heroine clearly knows what she wants, cp Chen Pi, but it is a pity that the two of them missed it due to their life span and the Kangbalo Gu worm in the text. There is also a relationship with the adjutant, but the adjutant's deception about Baima's pursuit separated the two, which just gave Chen Pi a chance. The heroine always regarded Chen Pi as a younger brother in the early stage, so it was the little wolf dog who coveted her sister and finally succeeded in taking over [laughs]

The writing is very good. What do those who say they want to go back to be young priests think? The heroine obviously wants to escape from there.

It's a very novel article, so far it's very good, I hope I can get into the important plot soon. I hope the heroine will be interested in Modo Modo!

Nice! ! ! I saw it on a recommendation before. I was a little hesitant when I saw the cover and rating, but it is really good-looking. The heroine's golden finger is not exaggerated but super useful. The description of the appearance is also very natural and not exaggerated. I think it can be rated as a nine or above!

Why is such a beautiful book only rated 7.7? He is one of the more awesome second creations I have ever seen, and the plot is very good. It is also very novel. The heroine is down-to-earth and does not have the feeling of having a golden finger to do whatever she wants with some books. There is a golden finger, but it is not particularly strong and requires the heroine to work hard on her own. I like it more. The heroine is also very clear-headed and does not have to be grateful just because some men like her. So far, the man who shoots Tibet and Zhang Qingshan are like this. It is a very good book. I hope the author can publish more similar books. I really love it.

It's okay. The heroine can rely on herself or with a girl named Baima. She has the charm of the heroine, but when there is a man to rely on, she becomes the kind of spoiled wife. For example, in Chen Pi's house, the spoiled wife's methods are completely different from those of Cuscuta who has killed people.

It's quite good. Maybe it's because I stayed up all night and was confused. I don't know how to evaluate it. Anyway, I finished it except for the extra part, and also watched the next part, but... I couldn't stick to the next part. I couldn't watch it until there were about ten chapters left.

I can guarantee that this is the most interesting fanfic I have ever read. The concept, writing style, and plot are really novel. You can read it even if you don't connect it with Laojiumen (I have not read Laojiumen and Tomb Raiders Notes).

Super super pretty! Among all the fanfics that include Lao Jiumen and Baima, Mommy's is the only one that I can read! Not only is the plot reasonable, the characters are not very OOC, and the plot direction is not very Mary Sue either! ! Highly recommended! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The writing is so good, the heroine is smart and alert, the characters are not OOC, the plot develops reasonably and the transition is smooth. When I saw the ending ending abruptly, I thought it was a mess. When I went to the work section, I discovered that there is also a second part, "The Flowers Bloom in the Hidden Moon." I'm going to watch the second part. I'm super happy.

It's good to read [Congratulations] As an old bookworm, I have really picky tastes. I'm almost out of books. If it weren't for Tomato 🍅, which is supported by a few authors who like to write Tomb Raider Notes and fan fiction, I would have been out a long time ago.

It's very interesting to watch, the characters are fresh, the plot is good, and the heroine has high emotional intelligence. It's really good-looking, has high emotional intelligence, has a golden finger, is not too strong, and is not too complicated. When I saw this article for the first time, I thought it wouldn't be ugly, right? Unexpectedly, my eyes lit up when I saw it at the end. It is so beautiful and I love reading it so much. It has been added to my biggest bookshelf. I check every day to see if there are any updates.