Meatpunk: I Reincarnate as Cannon Fodder Clone from the Start

As a new author, this book is very good, but the Flesh Technology + Stallion novel is not popular in Tomato, and as a novelist, there is no traffic. This is a problem with Tomato, and the problem with the author's writing style is because the structure of the article is relatively simple, that is, one planet follows another, one crisis follows another, the story is relatively flat, but the good thing is that he has positioned himself very well in this book. Chang clearly understands that this is a novel for novices, and Tomato's very small amount of flesh and blood technology is quite attractive. The simple structure means that the plot is not easy to write, and the niche of flesh and blood technology means that it is highly sticky (after all, no one writes about niche themes, and most of them are just a bunch of stuff. This book is relatively normal), so it can be recommended to new readers, book readers, and Akaishi Sennin.

Good book. The author would like to make a suggestion. I think Huang can make it mid-range and melee. Lan feels mid-range and long-range are more suitable. Hong can support and assist. Huang's genes can provide defense against melee combat, and then add a certain amount of mid-range attack, and then immunity to various types of controls and toxins. Lan can give some agility, and then those things like invisibility and sneaking. Rainbow can provide treatment defense and logistics research, plus a short-term attack to save lives. In this case, the three-person team works perfectly together. Now I feel that the main development direction of the three protagonists of this book has not been determined, so it seems very messy. After all, no matter what kind of thing, he must have a main development direction. Otherwise, the main shortcomings will be directly fatal. Here are some of my little suggestions, I hope the author can take a look at it and think about it?

Very good, huge potential

I've read Chapter 19, Flesh Evolution, but I feel like some chapters were skipped. 😁😁😁

Brother, I guess I think it looks pretty good. But can we write it a little more... In detail? Come on

A book with great potential 👍