Super*************

I finally have a normal outlook on things. The rest traveled to the Yan family and immediately showed their filial piety. How can you, a modern person, really tolerate this kind of family? What Yan Laokou did was simply to buy out your gift of childbirth, and tmd also provide you with your pension.

Great, keep writing.

So far, it is a very refreshing book. The author has written new ideas and interesting things. I hope the author can work hard and keep writing the character of the protagonist. A few more suggestions: 1. Don't change the character of the protagonist. It's best if the grievances and grudges are clear. Don't write it down and it will become a big deal for the Yan family. 2. The protagonist is the soul of a book, and the article should focus on the protagonist. There are too many subplots and narrations, and if there are too many, the article will appear to be weak. People who watch Siheyuan basically understand the plot. Your excessive explanation will only bore the readers. 3. Don't mix too much with the author's own private goods. Too much and it becomes preachy and can be off-putting. In addition, you'd better not write about some hidden backgrounds, because there were really a lot of surprises during that period. If you are not careful, the book will be gone, you have wasted your efforts, and the readers have also lost a piece of happiness. Come on, good reviews + updates + bookshelf, I look forward to your updates!

I hope to write more about the protagonist, after all, which supporting characters support the protagonist.

The details are described very realistically and the plot is very interesting. I highly recommend it. Ha ha. After getting to know Lou Bancheng, the plot started to get weird.

I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. Not far away, we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She looked much prettier in the photo, and she was my favorite type. She also recognized me. I didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and down. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process She was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she held my hand when we walked out of the restaurant, and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Not bad, but it feels like a little white text.

Other plots are average, but this book has an accurate positioning of Yan Laozhe's character. It looks good. Yan Laozhe is cold-blooded, greedy, timid and selfish. He dares not make big plans externally and is timid. Internally, he will plot against you. Compared to many authors who are keen on whitewashing the Yan family, the actions of Yan Laozhe in this book are in line with Yan's character.

Is this about to be cut? It has not been updated for so long. Is it time to practice the Sunflower Manual?

It's worth watching, the connection between the protagonist and the witch clan is interesting. 1. It is very interesting to solve the injustice in the courtyard. 2. The protagonist's golden finger is not particularly exaggerated. 3. The character of the protagonist has not collapsed yet [laughing]

Who knows, you, a wizard in the wizard system, are the witches of the ancient ancestral witches.

Very good, but some of your words are too redundant. You don't care whether you can stand listening to the book or not. You just skip and read it frequently. I hope you won't waste so much talking in the future, otherwise it will be a one-star review.

Come on, come on, come on

What a pity. . . . The author has been locked up by the police for some reasons. What a pity that I will never see him again.

What's going on, what about the author?

How do you see what happened after waiting for several days? Why did it stop updating? What's going on? Why is it the first one? Didn't Yan Yan Jiefang write it? You might as well open a new book. It's a pity. This book, adding this one, seems like this book is useless.

It's okay, there are too many narrations, it's a novel, don't mix too much knowledge into it.

Sitting thoroughly, it was too boring in the later stage. Very nice

A very nice novel!

Good, good, good, good

What's going on? I'm entering the palace [angry]

There are too many worlds to integrate into. The author needs to grasp it carefully and don't stop.

This is one of the few that I can keep up with, and I don't feel like I'm getting tired of watching it and can't get into it.

The story is good and has been used in many other movies and TV series. The more I wrote, the more outrageous it became, so I stopped reading.

After reading so many Siheyuan fan stories, it's rare to see an author who has found out the background of the era so clearly.

Come on, come on, come on! ! !

Write faster. Write faster.

Don't say anything awesome

Beautiful, five-star praise

Enjoyable, enjoyable, enjoyable

Go back to the courtyard to clean up the situation [Thinking]