Naruto: Two-Way Redemption Between Me and Obito

Overall, it is a good book [Eating Melon]. I also like the character of the protagonist, haha. He is good at cooking but also gentle. I like the wifey flavor. She is like a male mother. In the early stage of Obito, the little tsundere and the big dog also like to cry. Hehe, [Exploration] There is no system, so the gold finger is a bit too wide. After all, Naruto's mortality rate is extremely high, so it's okay to open it a bit wider. [Eating Melon] And the author updates pretty quickly. I hope the author doesn't give up, updates well, and works hard [shy][shy]

At present, there is no poisonous point. To be more serious, the protagonist's hang-up is a bit too big, and I am worried that it will collapse in the later stage. I originally read it as a sketch, but up to this chapter, the plot arrangement is pretty good (generally, I don't have any hope for the plot in this kind of novel). As long as you can control it well and don't let the protagonist's plot completely collapse later, it won't be a big problem. However, it is a bit dangerous to turn it into a plot. After all, the plot is too difficult to control. Videos can bring intuitive visual effects through the screen. It doesn't matter, but text can bring this kind of impact to the test of penmanship. Good writing is naturally hearty, but if you don't grasp it well, it will become a soup with too much salt and water. This is also an important reason why many times I would rather watch Naruto fics without plot than to give up the plot and focus on Naruto fics. Too many people write that they can't control it at the end, and they start to open a harem to raise the ceiling like a story about a proud stallion who got up early. From my point of view, Naruto is a more serious one among the three major migrant workers. I might feel better if this kind of operation is placed in One Piece. It is really inexplicable that this kind of thing appears in Naruto. If you want to write this kind of thing, you can just open the fantasy framework and write it. There is no need to use this IP. I have to say more, because it is rare to see an example of a cookie story with a good plot arrangement. I don't want it to fall apart in the later stage and have one star rating left to finish it. After all, this kind of story break is the number one enemy.

Ahhhh, why haven't I read such a beautiful book before? ! ! The daily routine written by Mrs. Regret is so beautiful. Update soon! ! ! Emmm, it's nice to watch, but I feel like emmm, the plot is a bit too short and too comical? [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Come on, madam, she's really beautiful

So pretty! ! I also like Obito very much, but I have never been able to find any articles about Obito before. Now I have found this article by the author, which is really good! ! ! ! (Licking the screen) [Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] @

Very nice, but Kakashi's father doesn't seem to be named White Fang White Fang is the name of his weapon (should be)

I have read so many Naruto fanfics, and this is one that I like very much. The protagonist is basically invincible or semi-invincible. In short, come on, the author (ง•̀_•́)ง, please update more and more.ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ

It's my first time to see such a prolific author. I'm so happy! There is another question, is the protagonist going up or down?

Everything about this book is good, but there is one thing that is particularly bad about it, and that is: why does the author write so well but now only has this little bit? It's so appetizing, and not enough to read. [Cry][cry][cry]

Very beautiful, so cute But there are still big shortcomings. I want to criticize this point. The update speed is too slow and I can't even watch it. What's wrong? It would take twenty or thirty chapters a day to barely read it, right? I hope the author will work harder and not take advantage of others [please update]

Ryota is my 🍐, overall it's very good, the daily writing is good, but the pace is a bit slow, the two kids are too young, but there's no big problem, mainly because I like to read Shota's posts

Author, you updated another new book, why did you stop updating this one? ? I have read this book twice before, and it is definitely the best Naruto fanfic on Tomato. Although the brotherhood has gone bad, there is nothing outrageous about it. No one is dependent on the other, they are all helping each other, and the brotherhood is deep. The protagonist, Senju Shiro-Hikoko, is really cute. She does not rely on others. She works hard on her own practice and meets Obito by the river. The two practice together, eat together, live together, and go to school together. The two of them have grown from ignorant children to emotionally rich teenagers. Both sides think that the other side is a beam of light illuminating themselves, but they do not know that both sides are their own salvation. While performing the task of blowing up the Kannabi Bridge, Tsuchiko was stabbed in the heart by an enemy. Yuhiko exploded with wood escape to eliminate all enemies. He exchanged hearts with Obito with a chakra scalpel and seal scroll, and relied on the vitality of Senju to keep his heart active. (Author, do you really dare to write this, please change it for me.) I never imagined that the two of them would really give their hearts to each other from then on). Madara captured Obito and used a genjutsu to show Obito the scene of Yuhiko transplanting a heart in exchange for his life. When he learned the truth, he opened his kaleidoscope in anger and almost turned black, but later discovered that Yuhiko was still alive. Amehiko lived in the Land of Rain and befriended Konan, Yahiko and the others. After recovering from his injuries, he found Tsuchiko and returned to Konoha. The two who returned to Konoha regained their strength, gained support from everyone, worked hard to practice, and stood up when other ninja villages invaded the border of the Land of Fire. After being questioned, they directly A combo of Big Buddha and Susana shocked the ninja world... Uhiko and Tsuchiko, a Senju and an Uchiha, perfectly made up for the entanglement between the two races who fell in love and killed each other during the Warring States Period, and fulfilled the wishes of Naruto fans for Hasi Hot Mom and Madara, becoming the ultimate shining point of this novel. (Hashirama: pleased; Tobirama: frightened by the evil Uchiha@_@) In short, this book is so well written, the author no longer considers updating qwq?

I feel so good after watching it. Obito is like a little dog walking around Amahiko. Amahiko and Obito are always blushing. It's so cute😗

It's really, really beautiful. [Learned] [Crying] [Crying] Just... I have a little question, that... Is Tuzi on top, or Ayan on top? ! ? [Learned]

May I ask, Obito, is it the bottom one or the top one?

The confession part is my favorite! I really like it when I see two little ones keeping each other warm and running in both directions!

I love it, and the author is great. And I also like the dual male protagonists‼ ! Fell in love with

There are many good books in the middle section. I particularly like Brother Tuzi, but I have never been able to find a good book [face covering] The author loves you so much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Don't stop.

It looks great. I love it. Obito is really cute. I like it very much. But I don't know when Obito will eat meat. Hehe.

嘤嘤嘤大大拉我进小群带土和雨彦太好嗑了

Update soon! ! ! I hope to write a long novel of more than 500,000 words. Although the update speed is very fast, I still can't get enough of it, it's so beautiful. 500,000 Is not enough, I hope to increase the number to over 1 million for a long novel. The third addition? ? ? Why is it abnormal that the score is so low?

The author's writing is very nice. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come faster. Nice angle and novel ideas.

Is Obito left or right?

It's nice to read. I hope the author can keep up his efforts and write higher quality articles, and don't have bad endings and knives [laughs]

Highlights from Shuangnan Fanfiction

Okay, okay, don't stop. The writing is very similar.

A bond of mutual redemption? It's really nice (although I'm not sure if there's a knife in the back), but maybe I shouldn't have such a thing

As a late shotacon I can only say: xnh race high! O(∩_∩)O!

Super invincible and good-looking (personally think

Beautiful and warm. I like it most every day [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Who is obsessed with Obito's jiojio [laughing]