Traveling Through Another World: I Was Hailed as a Heartthrob by the Vests

The characters in this book are all well drawn, the protagonist has brains, and the personality is quite likable. However, as a novel with the theme of Infinite Flow, which is famous for its reasoning and death, the protagonist and the official organization in the original world are not very powerful. First of all, the protagonist of the original world cannot recognize his identity, and then there is the super insensitivity of the official organization. I don't know if it will change in the future. In summary, although it has flaws, it does not prevent it from being a good book [laughs] (The above is just my personal opinion, welcome to add)

It looks good, come on Narcissus... Narcissus is the best... You can only believe in yourself, let us like this Narcissus (๑> <๑) Until I read it now, I think the writing is good. You can tell the background of the story in just a few chapters and describe the general plot in one or two sentences. The interaction between the characters is also extremely good. No character will be overly eccentric, and the protagonist will not be too aggrieved. At least I think An'er is not aggrieved, which is highly recommended | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ An'er is simply the master among masters... An'er An'er, we like you✨

I saw a lot of lightning protection comments saying that the protagonist of this article suffered too much, felt depressed, and persuaded the protagonist to quit, so I wanted to share my views. What I have seen in this article is that the protagonist's early setbacks are never deliberate abuse for the sake of abuse, but necessary foreshadowing for the character's growth. There is no bottomless accumulation of suffering. Every difficulty promotes the transformation of the protagonist's character and ability, and all difficulties and ups and downs are the indispensable cornerstones on his way to the top. Suffering does not mean malicious abuse of the protagonist. Suffering is just a means of shaping the character. If you cannot accept a little setback, it is actually difficult to understand the complete arc of the character. The protagonist should not control and love the perfect doll who has everything going smoothly and everything goes smoothly, but a living person who still sticks to his true heart despite hardships and makes progress step by step in desperate situations. The sense of proportion in this article is actually very good. It would be too one-sided to label it as a lightning protection simply because the protagonist has to go through hardships. I highly recommend readers who can accept growth-oriented plots to calm down and read it. Everyone's standards for "abuse" seem to be getting lower and lower. It seems that the protagonist cannot bear a little grievance, and will completely deny the article if it goes wrong. But the character of a smooth sailing character is flat. It is these ups and downs that make this character three-dimensional and powerful. People who really like the protagonist will appreciate his unyielding resilience in desperate situations, rather than just watching his smooth journey. Blind avoidance of lightning and persuasion to quit can easily mislead readers. The rhythm and character creation of this growth story are very good. There is no need to directly label lightning avoidance because of the setbacks that the protagonist must go through in his growth. I sincerely recommend that readers savor it carefully.

We are from the Council of Dawn! Narcissus is better than Narcissus. The creation of each character is actually very three-dimensional. In the early stage, because it was a dungeon, the one who appeared the most was the puppet master, and then it was fine, and then everyone could come out. I really like things like the Old Gods. Especially the feeling that I am not committed to anything but you. Immortal product ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

This book quite surprised me, it really impressed me XP (narcissus₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑) This book does a good job of avoiding the trap of some internet policemen. There are many shining female characters in the text. (Like Xuanzhi) Each character has a relatively complete story background and distinct personality characteristics The characters are not repetitive, each has his or her own merits, and there is a sense of group portraits. (What I prefer is that everyone is happy) The character of the protagonist is good, and the original protagonist is also very motivated. (I think the protagonist is very nice) The content is also quite enjoyable, and the point of tears lies in the past and passing away. During the reading process, I found that the author was thoughtful in answering readers who had questions. (It can be seen that the teacher likes my writing very much) The review atmosphere for the entire book is also very good, and I haven't seen any smoky atmosphere for the time being. This book is very pretentious. It is very popular to read. How else can it be pretentious? No surprises so far Do fewer chapters count╮( •́ω•̀ )╭ All in all, it's not a loss to get into the trap. (I'm really looking forward to the following content!!! Teacher, you are a good cook, please cook more)

A very cool pseudo-narcissus heartthrob, with multiple vests that connects with his true self, and he supports his true self unconditionally. No one loves himself more than himself! As for this AL protagonist, I am obsessed with it—— The protagonist is very capable. He awakened his spiritual power on his own and unlocked the split-line operation function of the vest. He has his own pursuit and moves forward firmly. The dungeons and weird descriptions are also wonderful, and the dangerous atmosphere is very immersive. There are many narrative descriptions in the article, and the interspersion of different timelines complements the overall setting. Five-star support, looking forward to unlocking more vest illustrations|･ω･)ﾉ

Generally speaking, there are not too many bad points, the plot is smooth and the writing is excellent, behind-the-scenes and micro-group portraits. What is a bit poisonous to me is that the ink is too thick. Many unnecessary supplements can be explained briefly, and there is no need to make it into several paragraphs. People who are impatient may not want to read it (in fact, I wanted to give up when I read the first chapter, but I thought about it and started reading it from the third chapter. The latter part is actually quite interesting) Come on, author [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] The author is very cute, give me five stars [laughs][laughs]

Very well written! ! ! I really like the atmosphere of getting along among the clones. It's great to trust each other. Don't underestimate the feeling of bonding between me and myself. I am at the level of a director of puppet master. Mother of Dust gives me a sense of fun but does not overdo it. Chen Xiu has a sense of being a social animal but is really reliable [heartfelt]. Baby Yaoqing's growth has threatened 078! Looking forward to the follow-up plot (I can't even find a meal replacement...) Ps: I'm talking nonsense, don't take it seriously. So, Mr. Nanbian Tavern, let's play a game that will update 100 chapters in ten minutes! ! [Please update]

Narcissus is as high as Narcissus, Narcissus is as high as Narcissus, Narcissus God Sect will last forever, okay? I can only say that the author's writing is very good. The avatar and the main body are very easy to get along with. The avatar also loves the main body very much. Now he is updating the first world. This novel should have a lot of words in the future, because the first world is not finished yet. The author also said that the next world will be longer. The author is still very active and will reply to some words. The only drawback is that the update is too slow [I almost cry] Can't the author really make an update? It's really beautiful, I can't get enough of it

Super nice writing. I have recently fallen in love with the horse-drawing novels. This one is good. Hehe, the author's writing style is good. You can read it with a micro-mind. Every horse-drawing is very delicious. The gentle puppet master, the mysterious subject, the mother's evil god, the e-human heavenly master, the cute but poisonous sister, and the void played by the main body are all very delicious hhhh

Tags: Heartthrob/behind the scenes/doppelgänger/narcissus casually knock Beautiful, incomparably beautiful. The protagonist travels to another world and plays different characters to gain role play value. The author's updates are stable. First of all, there are various characters to play, with different personalities and different behavioral habits. The common denominator is "loving the main character." Main characters currently playing: Mother of Dust_Hecate (the evil god with a lot of bad taste) Puppet Master_An'er (boy mother, boy mother) Office Worker_Chen Xiu (a worker, a male mother, a hard-charging cow) Tianshi_Xuanzhi (Sister, kill me!) Micro-shengke (beauties with white hair and poisonous tongue) Singer (Little Bamboo Leaf Green!) If there are any omissions or typos, don't worry about them. Easy daily emotional lines to write. The small amount of plot is also smooth, without any lag or embarrassment. Protagonist mm. Grandma. Highly recommended.

Each character is very well created, and they all have brains. The Speaker is really a succubus! I like the tone of the whole article (at least until now). The relationship between Ma Jia and Yao Qing is also very good. The feeling of never betraying is really refreshing. It has a sense of CP. The Speaker is a heartthrob, and he also fascinated me [admiration]. There are many advantages, but this book has a small shortcoming, that is, the author does not update much. I hope it can be updated twice a day. Of course, one update a day is also acceptable. I hope the author will continue to update, and we will all support him. Finally, I hope more readers can read this super nice article. Narcissus race high! That's it, bye (`･ω･´)ゞ Mr. Speaker, Mr. Speaker, hello, boss, can you have a little more? It's really not enough. TAT...

This is my favorite setting. The behind-the-scenes vest flow + the succubus speaker, only you will not betray yourself, the vests have single arrow bodies😋, the omnivorous party said: Narcissus and other things are also delicious😋 It's about to tie up (sad) (whisper)

The author's book is really logical and very beautiful! (What I like most is that when the author writes about a female vest, he does not describe too much about the body parts of the female vest, but focuses more on the story behind her. Also, when the author describes the characters in his text, he does not pay special attention to describing his gender. Because I listen to books, I often only have When I heard the accurate description of gender, I suddenly thought, oh, this is a person of a certain gender. There are many excellent women, and it doesn't need to be described too much, and it makes me feel that girls can be so good.)

Hmm, the writing is okay. Heartthrob can't tell. I guess I didn't read carefully? It's true that there is no cp. Well... The supporting roles account for more roles and the protagonist roles are relatively small. I guess this is the behind-the-scenes flow? The front is a little slow. I prefer stories where the protagonist has more roles. I always want to skip reading guides for supporting characters to complete the game. Maybe I miss the plot for this reason? However, the description is quite beautiful and the image description is also quite good. It's not my type. I'll give it a fair and just rating. It's above average.

Hey, I'm halfway through and leave a comment. It's the first time I've read this kind of unlimited streaming horse-drawn novel. I really like it. The author is so interesting but not too dramatic, and he's so diligent in updating (but I still can't get enough of it). Author, don't be tired, but don't be idle either! The setting of Yao Qing is so interesting, and it reminds me of the current situation of some cows and horses (he). This is a great acting experience! Life is like a play. What's wrong with loving acting? What I like more is that the characters other than the protagonist have a strong sense of life, and they have not completely lost their personality just to pave the way for the protagonist. Each character has its own characteristics in shaping. Relatively speaking, the characters are full-bodied. I feel that the author is treating every character in the book with care! Looking forward to more stories!

The language and plot feel very natural, which is still very precious in Tomato. The timing of Shuangdian's appearance is quite appropriate, and the rhythm is well controlled, making people want to watch it. Although the title of the book is quite cliché, there are no shortcomings in this book that can be easily seen by throwing away your brain. On the contrary, some of the twists and turns show that the author has put in some ideas in order to write well. All in all, there is a slight sense of refreshment and it feels like it has great potential. Maybe it's because I like heartthrobs (although this should all be "me"). Such heartthrobs with enough charm from the original owner make me want to read more (*^ω^*). I hope the author can stick to it for more.

It's particularly beautiful, with group portraits and a growing protagonist (?). The world view is quite large. At present, does it belong to the slow-travel genre? I remember writing that I would go to other worlds. Does this count as slow travel? If so, I probably plan to write a lot in one world (I really want to read the ending, otherwise I will feel uncomfortable holding it back). If I continue writing like this, I estimate that it should be 1 million words. The characters are well written, not fully fleshed out but they feel pretty good. As for the plot, except for the first dungeon, it's pretty ordinary (?) In addition, I think the dialogues in the first few chapters of the system can be revised? Just those before the time travel, and some settings and the like. It's a bit confusing if they are all thrown together. You can insert them in other places.

🔥🔥🔥Falling in love with the Speaker is as easy as breathing: The Speaker is really, sword-shaped eyebrows and starry eyes, fresh and handsome, straight nose and red lips, handsome and graceful, ancient carvings, looks like Pan An, smiles through the fan, handsome without casting, unparalleled elegance, handsome face, face like a crown jade, both talent and appearance, exquisite face, jade metallographic appearance, jade tree facing the wind, Xugong in the north of the city has a face like a crown jade Outstanding talent, extraordinary appearance, a gentleman, both talent and appearance are unparalleled in the world, clear eyebrows, radiant spirit, amazing talent and elegance, romantic talent, elegant and profound, straight nose and thin lips, calm and elegant, elegant and generous, beautiful and handsome in the prosperous age, elegant and fair, Throwing Fruit Pan An, eyebrows and sword eyes, bright eyes and white teeth, fresh and refined, elegant and peaceful. Majestic and majestic (this is copied and pasted)

Serious tie. I saw a lot of people saying that the protagonist suffered a lot of frustrations, but I felt fortunately that it was not as serious as they said. There were foreshadowings, slaps in the face, pretense, and humor. I felt so comfortable watching it. The heart-throb quality is more prominent between the vest and the main body. All the vests are thick arrow main bodies, and there are also many non-vested indigenous thick arrow vests and main bodies. Some of the scenes written are also very touching (read the details for yourself, I won't spoil them). The selfish setting of the system is also good, everyone has ten thousand intentions, and the aboriginal characters are also very good. The author is really good at character creation. But since there are so many characters, I often forget who is who, and I feel like I can take notes.

It's really good to watch (although I came here after seeing the event, but it doesn't matter, I just brought my evaluation with it). In fact, I felt a little confused at the beginning. There were many characters with many names, and I really couldn't tell them apart. But at the end, it was very good. The author portrayed the characters very well, allowing me to clearly distinguish who is who, and who is related to whom. Moreover, the characters have distinct personalities and characteristics, and the plot is compact and interesting. Each one is very good. The vests all have their own stories and characters. The author will also listen to the readers' suggestions and improve them. The sense of immersion in the later chapters is okay. Although it does not have the feeling of being on the scene, it is also interesting to read with the plot. The vests are like a big family. I used to think that this kind of vest novel is no different from schizophrenia. I am a big family by myself, but after reading this book, I feel that I am a big family. After the individual split into many vests who were different from me but cared about and helped me, I felt that it was not a schizophrenia, but a big family, with the sunny, cheerful, lively and generous Xuanzhi, the smart, handsome and gentle puppet master, Sersi who was good at making sweets, and the Mother of Dust who had a bit of a bad taste and made Yaoqing almost assimilated during the experience. Everyone was very good and not as deliberate as in other novels. I don't think it's very deliberate in Xuanzhi Blush's CP of the wheat bran group. I think the reaction of other souls split from one soul to that soul is normal. At least it's not like seeing the main body and just ignoring the persona and the character mentioned above. Let people take a bite of industrial saccharin. It's good now. Keep it up and keep working hard. It may not be a good book. There are still a few chapters now. Keep up the good work, author!

It's almost tied. I personally feel that it is mainly gb, and there are more female characters. The one with the strongest sense of cp is the mother of dust. Yaoqing and the mother of dust have the feeling of parental love, sweet, and very stable emotions. The queen and the kitten?, The others are more about friendship and affection. In comparison, Yaoqing and others have no feeling of love. Some characters have a high concentration of single arrows? But there is little interaction, and the interaction is also I don't have the feeling of being a friend. This is the first time I've come to BL and I'm a GB type. It's a little hard to accept. However, this pair is so delicious, especially the extra scenes with the Mother of Dust. The cps of Yaoqing and the Mother of Dust are so amazing. The cps of Yaoqing and the others feel almost tasteless. , I wonder if there can be more interaction between Yaoqing and other people later on (if you want to see the main bl, you can withdraw it. It can be planting or pulling weeds.

No, it looked beautiful to me, so I decided to write a long review to calm my mood. When I first read the early part, I thought it was just like other ordinary role-playing novels, and a little boring (I like role-playing novels, but recently I have read too many and they have become a bit boring). But the more I read, the more I like it. , It is different from ordinary role-playing articles. I really like the author's setting of the clones here. Although the clones themselves are still Yaoqing themselves, they have different characteristics and unique stories. The most important thing is that no matter how they change, Yaoqing will always be their roots, even if they change. They are confused in the performance, but the destination they can see when they look back is the sun that all living things follow. The clones were born because of Yaoqing, and the clones also gave Yaoqing a unique preference. You can choose this bond, of course, it is still the same person in essence. There is indeed no CP, and the author's writing is great. Every pair is so well matched that I fell in love😋, whether it is the gentle An'er, the evil god Hecate, the fun-loving Hertos, or the mad dog Ye Hanlai, the characters are all very cool, please Modo Modo [shy] In terms of plot, I think it's pretty good and not too draggy? (Scratching my head) 🤓 Mainly because I feel that the protagonist has a lot to do. He has to recruit new people, improve the Dawn Council, and recruit new people to earn performance points. He is so busy and the time is always tight. It feels like everyone is struggling 🤓 I am also looking forward to the opening ceremony, the appearance of the Speaker and the subsequent plot 🥰 I also like to watch the preparation layout before the competition, so Regardless of whether the author speeds up the pace of writing the game or not, I am very excited to look forward to it. [Sending my heart] Also, the author's descriptions of some of the supporting characters are also very impressive. I still can't forget the idea of turning ashes into dice, as well as the e-man's plaything Xiao Li, and the miserable director of the bureau. The characters described by the author are really unique and interesting. The author's writing is really good. The more I read, the more it suits my taste. I like it very much. Moreover, the author is also very fond of readers. I highly recommend it! ! ! 🫶🫶🫶

I watched it a few months ago and had forgotten the plot. But what I remember clearly is that the author started to prepare for the competition from more than a hundred chapters, and continued to prepare for nearly two hundred chapters. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist's actions, thoughts and even the author's words revealed a message to me: this competition will be very interesting. Dozens of chapters of foreshadowing raised my threshold and expectations very high. But after the competition came out, I was very disappointed. Yes, the competition has filled in some of the previous pitfalls and also developed new settings. But I just don't feel the passion or the blood. It's like the food I've been looking forward to for months. People keep telling me it's delicious, but when I put it in my mouth, it feels bland. Maybe because of my constant waiting, I invisibly added a taste to this food that didn't belong to it. When I tasted it, I found it was not what I had imagined, and I immediately felt resentful. Four stars is a consolation to the author who stayed up late at night and worked hard to type.

All are refreshing, all are the most refreshing! No rebuttal accepted [laughs][laughs][laughs] Needless to say, the writing style, in one sentence, is so good that I have nothing to say. If you don't know, you would think some big shot is playing a trumpet [face covering] I like Yao Qing very much. Really, I feel sorry for him. Suddenly a knife comes. You are such a meticulous author [laughs] I'm very lucky to have you all. Yaoqing actually gave me the feeling that I had a mental illness before the system came. With the arrival of the vest, it felt like the negativity that had been accumulated for a long time suddenly burst out, forcibly tearing open the superficial scars, and then applying medicine to him. He was really healed bit by bit (see Taiyin's words for details). I like Yao Qing, and I also admit that the people in this article are the most lively people in all the MJA articles I have ever seen. He/she/they seem to be real. Really, the charm of each character is too strong [face covering]... It feels like it can affect me in reality [cool] [laughing] [blowing kiss] Finally, emphasize it again. All members of the Dawn Council are simply succubi! The Speaker is the succubus among succubi! ! ! Speaker Speaker, you are a kitten. Speaker Speaker, you are so lovely. ——Sir Speaker! I declare you (broken sound ––)! ! ! [Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It is a rare good article in Tomato that is written fluently and not awkwardly. However, there are still problems. And because I like the setting of narcissus + vest, I have read a lot of articles of the same type, so I can still feel some gaps with better works. My personal opinion is that the story is cut into too many pieces. It was okay in the early stage because there were few characters, so it could control the rhythm of the story and retain readers. However, in the later stage, as more and more vests appeared, it made people feel that the perspective switching was too fast and too frequent, and one thing moved on to another before it ended. Although the author should have planned the development of each line, as a reader, a large number of branch lines unfold in the middle and late stages, and n lines run in parallel without partial closure. It is actually more difficult to read. Even if you can remember the plot of each branch line, the rapid switching of shots will often cause emotional disconnection. But for now, it's still a good thing on Tomato, and I look forward to the author's future growth つ♡⊂

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's very interesting. I hope the author won't stop updating or unfinishing it in the future. The story direction and character settings are very good, the plot is relatively coherent, and I also like the character of the protagonist very much [shy] The author, please keep up the good work (I hope you won't stab the protagonist in the future [eating melon]

It's super, super nice, especially the author's depiction of the vest and body. It feels like they really exist, lively and independent to me. They "respect" each other and understand each other. But there is an inherent trust and unconditional support with the ontology. Some vests have their own separate story lines, and they are a fast-travel story. My favorite is the first vest puppet master! ! ! ! ! The interaction between the puppet master and the doll, as well as the oh my god, it's so delicious [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] towards the original body. The following are some excerpts. During the long wait, everything in the town was still black and white. Without that person, the world would have no color. When the eternal silence was broken by outsiders, she naively held out hope again: Will he wake up to a different day? But she didn't wait for her god, just like countless failed wishes. But it doesn't matter, I'll take care of my sour heart. At least let me preserve his peaceful sleep until the end of my life.

This book is very beautifully written, the narrative is very smooth, and there are no greasy or embarrassing plots. Reading it made me feel a slight sense of refreshment (ᐥᐜᐥ)♡︎ᐝWho can not fall in love with Yao Qing? There are many vests in there, with different personalities, but they all have their own characteristics. For example, [Mother of Dust] Hecate loves to cause trouble, [Tianshi] Xuanzhi is cold on the surface but is lively and cheerful and loves to tease people, [Evil Spirit] Ye Weijin is a poisonous speaker, and only thinks about killing, killing, killing, [Candy Witch] Circe is super cute, [Fantasy God of Harmony] is a pure fun person, everything is just for fun... The introductions of the vests are very poetic (˘ ³˘)♥I personally like these introductions Moreover, this book can be eaten casually between the main body and the vest, whether it is CP or CB. This feeling that I will never betray you is very painful to me. The vests will always stand behind Yao Qing and always support Adhere to Yao Qing and indulge Yao Qing unconditionally. Every Ma Jia wants to spend more time with Yao Qing ๑>ᴗO๑ Yao Qing and Ma Jia have the same mind. Yao Qing can know Ma Jia's thoughts at any time. This desire for control is so satisfying ε (๑> ₃ <) з Yaoqing is super capable. She survived the assimilation of the Mother of Dust on her own, successfully captured Hecate, and started the path of cultivating spiritual power with her own abilities (♡>𖥦<)/♥ But Yaoqing also feels a bit delicate, so she is such a good mother. The female characters in this book are very attractive. For example, Xuanzhi is very powerful. On the surface, she is cheerful and lively, but she is also a foodie. It is very contrasting and cute; Cersi, you are an angel. You use your own ability to poison a whole village to avenge your mother. You like to use some bad ideas to make pranks. The other female characters who appear are also very distinctive ♡=•ㅅ＜=) The author is very good! From time to time, we hold smaller events. I am very fond of fans. Basically, they will listen to what they say. There will also be small theater drops, which are very delicious. I eat them all (♡,,•₃•,,♡) and the atmosphere in the comment area is very peaceful. There is also delicious food in the book circle. The disadvantage is that it is a bit slow during serialization˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅