A Passer-By in the Female World

It can be said that I am a fan of time-travel documents in the old system. This book gave me the best feeling. I usually don't comment on these. I will make an exception this time. The plot is very rich, some old routines, but also novel, such as those with added points and so on. This is completely different from the usual ones. The plot transition is also very good, but it is a bit flawed. The protagonist's personal pua is actually a bit too much, maybe because I read too many cool novels, but overall it is good. I just saw Adoption... How should I put it? It's a big flaw. I don't understand it when you add it in.

This is a world of strong women, and the male protagonist's gender is obviously reversed. I wonder if you have ever seen the reverse harem in Japan's medieval fantasy magic world. The female protagonist is a country girl who was born with a rare light magic. She has a carefree personality. This year's lv99 drama, that story The female protagonist in the game setting, the male protagonist makes me feel like that kind of female protagonist, so the male protagonist is also the "protagonist?", But I just looked at the urban dragon king Shenhao and estimated it, so I didn't realize that this is not a typical plot of a country girl who has good grades and deliberately stays away from the class people but attracts the group of people to excel.

As an ordinary ordinary person, my appearance and figure are not outstanding, so I feel some empathy. For me, external conditions are not my criteria for choosing a spouse. I prefer beautiful spiritual qualities, just like Jane Eyre. The protagonist's characteristics are indeed well created. I think if I were the heroine in the book, I would be attracted to him. But there is also a fly in the ointment. The female protagonist blindly falls in love with the male protagonist. Even if the protagonist has outstanding personality and charm, he will not become a heartthrob [Chigua]

It's not bad. I hope the male protagonist can really be consistent with his appearance (that is, the author should not make the male protagonist contradictory) What can I say about this book? It's mediocre. I'm restrained if I like it. But I can keep reading and it feels good. Why give it 5 stars? Because I like the description of the male protagonist. In terms of appearance, it's best if the male protagonist is handsome. If he's not handsome, it's okay. As for the heroines, the descriptions of the heroines are okay, and they are gradually being developed. I hope the author will write well. This book has potential. Come on. In the end, if I take this book seriously, I would give it 4 points. Although it is bland, it is quite comfortable for now, but if it continues like this, it will be too boring, so (3.5 Points is about the same)

Although there are some flaws, the future is promising. It's not that the other female novels are not good-looking, but this one is more fresh. The protagonist's reflex arc is as long as ever. Not believing that anyone likes him is a classic lie. Give Yuchai a computer and he can code out an interesting novel. If you give him another chance to publish, he can update twice a day. Even I, who is far away in the United States, said that I was used to reading conventional green tea heroine novels, but when I read this novel, I had a completely new experience. If my soldiers were asked to review your book, they would all give it high approval. If they are given another chance to push for an update, they can do anything. Please watch the large-scale documentary, "Passengers in the World of Female Sovereigns".

Good or bad, I feel like the male protagonist will be locked up later if the heroine is sick, and will be locked up repeatedly, and then he will get bored [what]

Very good, better than most heroine novels This book by the author is also getting better.

It's a good watch, but to be honest, I can't tell how inferior the male protagonist is. Instead, he is as slow as the male protagonist in Japanese comics. He is Riddler for the sake of Riddler. After the protagonist is adopted, I feel that the protagonist's personality seems to be a different person.

Shennong's review: The writing is fluent, and the plot basically has no big problems. ⚠️There is a classic misunderstanding between the male protagonist and the adopted sister. Friends who are not very receptive to sadistic stories will find it weird💩, so watch it with caution, but the regret part later is very enjoyable. Overall, this is a relatively good novel about a female protagonist. There may also be yandere elements in the subsequent plot, so I recommend you watch it.

It's enough for fantasy novels, but in fact, even if the men and women are reversed, the rich second generation still spends a lot of time and likes good things.

How can I put it this way? I like the character and setting of the male protagonist very much. It is different from other novels of the same type. The male protagonist looks ordinary and attracts the female protagonists purely by his personality. The description of the interaction between the male and female protagonists in the book is very innocent and reminds me of my three years in high school. The only fly in the ointment is that the plot of Lin Lengxue was cut off before it even started. She is my favorite among the three heroines (the sworn sister in the book avoids lightning, so there are three).

Come on, come on, it's pretty good-looking, but it's a bit small for your weight. Please update it soon. Thank you, the author.

Very pretty. , The writing is more realistic. I think the main reason is that this kind of progress is very suitable for me. , Unlike others. From the very beginning, he was imprisoned and so on.

It's an interesting novel, but it's more everyday. At first, I thought it would be more fun to be a passer-by in a novel about a female figure named Long Aotian. Then from time to time, the male protagonist would accidentally get involved in Long Aotian's face-slapping incident. Then the male protagonist would use his normal outlook on life to compare with Long Aotian's unnatural outlook on things. It was a bit bland, but still pretty good.

This is a strong woman, not a domineering woman. Please ask the author to change the title of the book [awkward laugh]

It was a bit hard for me to accept being adopted later, since I was already 18 years old🙁

I like it very much, I like it very much, I like it very much, I like it very much, I like it very much, I like it very much [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

I have written everything, I hope it will be a complete ending. Of course I have to write a novel about a real harem [Adoration]

It is a very ordinary novel, or a good emotional urban article, with some yandere stories in it. As for the heroine, there is not much description in this article and it cannot be reflected. In other words, the storyline is similar to that of a normal emotional novel and does not highlight this feature. The article is simple and unpretentious, but the story line still has a bit of uniqueness, which is worth reading when you are bored.

Maybe you can resonate with reading novels. Compared with various invincible novels, this daily type is easier, because like the male protagonist, I am an ordinary person, not outstanding, and a little inferior. However, the male protagonist's character is a detractor for me (for me, don't argue), because it is too gentle. Like the great teacher, I hate gentle people...

It's pretty good. I just like it in my daily life [laughs]. It's not too bad, and the writing is pretty good. [Like]

Later on, the plot where the younger sister was suddenly adopted felt poisonous.

I have read 8 chapters so far, and I think it is like a female channel book. The style is too similar. Although it has a bit of a male channel style in it, it still has the flavor of a female channel. It is similar to the female channel books I have read before [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]

It's a very good novel about female heroes, but the relationship between the sister and the sister doesn't feel very comfortable. It would be better if it could be changed😊

It's so good, a new kind of female virtuous literature. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Yes, it's just that in this world of female supremacy, it would be more perfect if it were a boy.

There is absolutely no awkwardness or discomfort like other female characters. [Laughing]

It's okay, but the author's new book will inevitably have some shortcomings and pitfalls at the beginning, but it won't be particularly ugly👀[Chigua]

I think it's okay. I've seen a lot of people say that the male protagonist is stupid sometimes, but I think it's normal. The male protagonist was originally designed to have good academic performance, high IQ, but not high emotional intelligence. Didn't he create a character with low emotional intelligence and low self-esteem? His emotional intelligence is not high, so his personality is built around low self-esteem.

The writing is quite good, and it feels very real. It's my favorite type. But I don't know why it doesn't look like a heroine?