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The writing was quite good at the beginning, but later on I felt that the character was about to collapse, and it didn't go in the direction I wanted to go in the beginning. My idea was that the female protagonist wanted to be the male protagonist, and then the short stories between them. Now it seems that the author wants to write more normal harem stories, but it is still a good subject. I was not interested in tomatoes at first, but this book still attracted me. I hope the author will update it soon!

It's very good-looking. Author, please keep working hard. Even if they say it's not going to collapse, I think it's pretty much the same. However, there are some places where I feel it's not that good. For example, the conversation between President Fang and the male protagonist has many parts. The male protagonist shouldn't choose to be famous, but it's already very good. I will always choose to pursue it. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I haven't read this kind of light novel in a long time. The process is not rigid. Other light novels are generally fan fiction and have a stiffness in their bones. On the contrary, this light novel has a very smooth feeling. The writing is really good, and it has a smooth feeling that is very comfortable to read.

I'll give you one less point so you won't be proud. I think some of the words that are more subtle can be more obscure. I don't want to lose them halfway. Rating: Worth a read

It's really good to read, it has the feeling of being young and the writing is generally good. I kind of regret finishing it in one go. I feel like it still needs some time to read. After looking at the back for a while, I felt that the further back I went, the more I felt like it was a waste of food and a pity to abandon it? It's a pity that the previous writing was quite good…

Chapter 28, okay! Regarding the protagonist's thoughts, just don't act on the idea of ​​bringing together the original CP. I saw that Chapter 81 was poisonous and it was indeed very poisonous after reading it! Let the protagonist write a song or two casually? What does it have to do with the protagonist? How much does a song cost? He writes a sentence for free? Let him use it for free? The matter of a class is not the protagonist's personal matter! Wouldn't it be nice to sing an old song! Is it possible that this kind of class activity will directly allow people to create new songs for you for free? And looking at the plot of Chapter 81, the protagonists should all be famous composers. No matter how you think about it, it's impossible for people to prostitute themselves for nothing! —— Forget it, stop thinking! Come on!

Come on author, it's very interesting! !

It's very good. This book has greatly enriched my mind.

I can't read enough new books, and I forget about them as I read them.

My evaluation is broad! It's just that the update is too slow. Although the collection of the harem is really slow, the process is still very good. Come on, even though I am a prostitute.

Come on, the author, the writing is good. The one next door has been too popular recently and the pace is slow. The pace of this book is very good, not so dragging, and the character development is also very good. Just update it normally.

The plot is novel and nothing to say. Although sometimes I was stunned by the language and felt that I had made typos, but I think I can't get enough of it. Basically, I didn't find any shortcomings in the plot, so the author worked hard. In my mind, this novel should not only have a score of 70, but more than 80-90.

Objectively speaking, it's quite good. In terms of plot, the rhythm is very reasonable considering the strange world view. If you don't have a strong aversion to this genre, you can give it a try. It should be pretty good for those who like Japanese light novels.

Not bad, the heroine is well portrayed

Quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, update. Chapter 72 currently, still Chu Nan

I'm curious about how to fill the trap of a homeless heroine. After all, it will be clear later that the spiritual companion who accompanies the wanderer will look like this. He should be a direct degenerate [eating melon]

The rhythm is very good, the plot is not broken, the female characters are well described, suitable for two-dimensional viewing, very h

Please be sure to finish writing this novel [laughing evilly]

Everything about the book is good, except that the author didn't tell us where to download the original prototype game. As a result, readers can only make assumptions. If there is a prototype game and look at the illustrations in it, the characters in the novel will feel more immersive. If there is no prototype game, can the author provide a design proposal, and then go to XXX to find a master to customize one? I don't dare to say that I can earn a lot of money, but I will still be able to have enough food and drink in my next life. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Yeah, yeah, yeah, okay

It's pretty, feels good

Nnd, there were two chapters a day before, and then one chapter a day, Nnd, you just stopped updating it now, right [crying]

Very good-looking Riqing

Author, you have to persevere and work harder to code.

It's good-looking, but it's not enough. I want to keep it as a book. I say it's a post but there's no real one at the moment. It's better than ordinary yellow-haired articles [Like][Like][Like]

There is no need to update the one about Tokyo Zombies, so just concentrate on updating this one. The subject matter is more popular, and it is obvious that the author's writing style has improved between the two books [Like]

All the good-looking books have been banned by Tomato. Where is the author writing novels now?

Yes, he is a principled person. Compared with other specious yellow hairs, it is fresh and refined. [Think]

It's pretty good, it can be regarded as a harem story wrapped in yellow fur. Although the front is a bit unreasonable, it looks okay behind just some minor poisonous spots. It's a good book that I found in a book famine. You can read it.

I don't understand so many people who criticize me. Anyway, I like it very much. I don't write reviews very much, but I really like this book.