The Buddhist Direct Descendant Fujin Who Was Favored by the Fourth Master Qing Leng

Overall it's OK. The female protagonist is super rational and has good friends. The male protagonist is also very kind to the female protagonist in the later stage. Although I understand why there is Yuqing's Hongli, I still feel a little uncomfortable with it. I feel that in the end they don't really understand each other, and they don't give me that kind of heart-to-heart feeling. Why do you want the heroine to have a child in the end? At that time, the heroine must have been an older mother... I don't understand why there was such a long window of time without giving birth, and the heroine was not particularly busy. This article gives me the feeling of writing whatever comes to mind, and then I suddenly think of someone else and add the plot of that person, here and there, and it feels a bit messy. I'm not used to it, but it looks good. Personal opinions are for reference only, please do not comment! Don't spray! Don't spray! Thank you so much

It's very beautiful, I like it, come on, the author is great

There are no weird points in the whole text. Why is the score only 6.1? Fortunately, I didn't give up and took the initiative to read it.

It still feels very good. The lives of the related brothers have also changed, and it shows that it is unreasonable and inappropriate for women to be virtuous without talent. Women can also hold up a whole world.

The fourth master's house in the front is very warm, there is no fight to the death, and the fourth master is written in a different way😘But in the later period, when Yuqing and Hongli were introduced, it was a bit awkward.

Very well written, very good

I like it very much. It's really sweet. It's rare to see such a cute fourth master.