Witch************

Overall, it's good, the writing is okay, and the plot logic is good, but the protagonist has no growth line and keeps standing still. However, the setting is Gao Wu. Some of the shortcomings in the fantasy novel can be explained. However, I still hope that the protagonist's strength can be increased, such as the skill that the heroine wants to practice in the previous article (just a suggestion, but I think The author must have wanted to rely on this), the characters are distinct, especially the heroine, unlike in Wu Nao Shuang, who is easily conquered and then devoted to the hero. This is very well written, and the description of the master is not very clear, and it feels like it has not existed before. It may be the author's foreshadowing, so I won't comment too much. I will wait for the update. The writing is quite good.

It's pretty good. The male and female protagonists have distinct personalities and are very interesting.

It's pretty good. The emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are neither too fast nor too slow, and the main storyline is okay and acceptable. But the difficulty may be a bit high. I can't figure out how the Zheng family can survive if the killer organizes an attack. The character of the male protagonist was okay at first, but later he became a bit yandere for no apparent reason, but he jumped around to bring the yandere back, and then he became a bit yandere again, just jumping around repeatedly. Then there is a little bit of narrative about the protagonist's family and the master's family. The master's family can understand it, but they still don't know the status of the Zheng family. And then it seems that there is only the Zheng family in that city?

When can we allow female protagonists to practice Kung Fu so that they don't end up being prostituted for nothing?

I feel pretty good about myself, and the content of the whole book is also very exciting.

Even though it sucks, the book is still quite funny!

Good books need no words

The writing is quite good, but it feels a bit like a female video. Has the author written this before?

It is a very good book, and it captures the reader's inner feelings (here I mean myself). The content can also be said to have no peeing spots. It is very smooth to read in one go. The author's thinking should be clear. (Anyway, I can't stop it), I hope the author will work hard [blowing kiss]

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

A good book not to be missed [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

If you like this book so much, please don't stop updating it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Broad, wide, and the speed of the car are all good.

Hehe (shaking his head, drooling) It looks good, it looks good. (Cross-eyed, mouth open and drooling, thumbs up)👍🏻👍🏻

I feel like there are a lot of comments and it's quite good. I read it when there were no ratings, otherwise I wouldn't have known this book was so good.

It looks good and can speed up the progress

It's okay, give me five stars for encouragement.

Funny humor funny

Evaluate it, it's good

Currently giving 4 stars.

It seems ok so far, I'll give it five stars first.

It's okay, but Lin Xiaoke looks a little uncomfortable there. Pretty good. Um! Do you wish the protagonist could be stronger? The author should take it easy and don't seal the book.

The free and loose cool breeze can cure the messy bad mood

Yes, the current situation is neither Long Aotian nor too stretched. It has the flavor of the previous immortal novels, plus I really like the heroine (feet) [laughs]

Overall, it's pretty good, but the male protagonist's strength rises too slowly.

The writing is good and the author is careful. Set comparison details. The author is capable.

Dude, just read the book and have fun, the author just don't judge it

It's still pretty good. If you like reading romance novels, you can give it a try.

Come on, I like it when it explodes like this [laughing][laughing]

It looks good, can you please update it soon? One chapter a day is not enough