Ocean Survival for All: One Shot Enters the Soul and Reveals a Miracle

Raft Survival: Start fishing for mermaids Hanging the sail in the early morning There is nothing particularly new about ordinary raft survival novels. The mermaid should be a cute feature, but it wasn't written much. The protagonist's image is also average, and his psychological growth is a bit naive and naive. Three to four stars, new book seedlings, round up.

Very good. I hope there will be more female leads. Li Lulu must not accept it. It's uncomfortable to watch.

Ah! Who is so handsome! It turned out to be me!

Okay, okay, by the way, when will the protagonist finalize his relationship with Xiaoying? If the author doesn't know much about the structure of mermaids, you can look at teacher Neonomaru's mermaid structure diagram as a reference, or I can just send it [sneaky laugh]

I told you in advance that I am here for the little mermaid. I don't care whether you have a harem or not, but remember to collect the little mermaid.

I saw Chapter 100 at 6:53 on August 7th. I had no emotion at all with the mermaid before, and there was no emotion after that, but overall it was good and acceptable. [Like] [Please pay attention] [Send my heart] Rating 7.5

Chapter 12 minus 1 star, the plot and writing can make people want to read more. The first few pictures would be fine without Chapter 12. Chapter 12 can be modified or deleted, but it will have no impact on the main story. The first chapter was okay, but it really won't work after 100 chapters. One person and one sword can cut off the sea. Also, this world is managed by managers. Only by killing the managers can you escape from this world. Later on, the protagonist's scenes became less and less, and most of them were confrontations between pirates and the organizations invested by the protagonist. Armor also appeared.

Come on, I hope I can read more than 1,000 chapters. Just write at the current pace and don't be too outrageous. I really like what I've written now. I'm still reading the King of Gifts after 300 chapters.

The narrative and rhythm are both brisk and clear, and the plug-ins are very powerful. However, there are no other novels of the same type that are full of supplies at the beginning and then unable to advance the plot. The characters should be described in multiple ways instead of focusing on the perspective of the protagonist. I think it is quite good and can add to the reality of the world. You can see many shadows of survival and construction games, which is very comfortable for an audience of this type. The sense of expectation is still very strong, but the plot has suddenly transitioned to the source of restarting the world. I think it is too fast. I feel that the plot has been a bit inflated since taking out the Hellfire. It depends on how the author arranges the plot next. I hope it can be longer. The author's writing is good. If this type of story cannot be written for too long, I will also look forward to the new work. Pay attention to it.

I've finished reading it, and it's quite interesting. The protagonist's plug-ins are similar to those in other articles. They are all items with a fixed output of quality +1, but this one is at sea. The bad points: When I first met the heroine in the early stage, the material transaction felt a bit awkward, but it became normal later on. There is a heroine and a mermaid, but I guess we have to wait for the mermaid to evolve, and now she can only cry. It's a pity that the xenogeneic plant is dead. I used to like the symbiosis between the man-eating plant planted by the protagonist and the pirate ship. However, in the latest chapter, this plant was written to death. I don't know how the author will deal with it in the future. The symbiosis between the xenogeneic plant and the machine feels quite good. There are currently no bugs, and it will look good if it is updated stably.

After reading it for a while, I felt pretty good. The main attraction of this book is that it is different from the main body of other books. It is not like the kind of books we usually read, and it is also well written. Overall, it's just a bit more novel. I have only read Chapter 131 now. It's hard to comment further. Come on, author.

To be honest, this is one of the better books I have ever read. There are no surprises. However, I felt that the character description was abrupt and the channel was incomprehensible (this is a common feature of this type of book). The summary book is okay, you can read it [Chigua]

I read this book to the latest chapter in one go. Ahem, I think this book is pretty good, at least from my own perspective, I quite enjoyed reading it. Why did the conversation between Su Yun and the protagonist make my aunt laugh... And the portrayal of the two fishes, Xiaoying and Xiaohong, as well as Xiaobai are very good. Next, it should be time for the male and female protagonists to meet each other. Please give your best, the author [please give me more updates]

I have read more than 80 chapters and there are no major criticisms. There are only some shortcomings in details. The word count did not pass the chat level. There is no villain. The villain seems brainless for the sake of the villain. The color that makes the reader shine is not Qingshui. The author is not a eunuch.

In the early stages of this book, the writing was a bit trivial and boring, and the development with the heroine was a bit too deliberate. However, as it slowly develops later on, the worldview is quite attractive. You need to be patient with it for a while until the protagonist hits the first island and it starts to look good. It's just that the development of the emotional line is really a bit slow. The Little Mermaid appeared as soon as it opened, but as of now, it hasn't been picked up and there aren't even many scenes. I hope it will be picked up soon. I'll give it a try first. All in all this book is okay.

For the survival stories that are common on the Internet today, although the ending of this book is not very novel, it does not follow the trend. I think it is much better than the traditional upgrading and killing monsters to become a god. The story is not long but the world view is relatively complete, but the story is a bit compact and not detailed enough. But it is definitely much better than most upgrades to defeat monsters and become gods, or upgrade to disaster shelters. Great support, author, I hope your writing skills will continue to improve.

Mermaids can't change their shapes, right? [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully]

It can be regarded as a relatively good survival story. At least there is no disgusting stallion poison. The only thing that is not to my liking is that the vehicles are basically disposable and cannot be upgraded, but the content is generally acceptable. How do evolvers and transformers upgrade? I haven't seen it yet

It's particularly beautiful, and the character creation is better than most books. In Chinese terms: vivid and vivid!

Why choose mechanical ascension, minus 1★

After reading more than sixty chapters, I feel it's okay

It's pretty good-looking, so far [Like]

This is really nice

So far, it looks good.

Score more and protect seedlings

The content is informative and interesting.

Collect more harems, hurry up and collect the mermaids

In the future, the protagonist should be developed to fight the regulator, right?

It's okay, but it's too similar to the one on the island next door.

The whole book was okay, but the mermaid scene was a bit small. How will Su Yun end? Will you have children later? The author gives a good afterword