The Rebellious Cultivator

It's a very nice book, with vivid and interesting characters and an online plot design. The only problem is that sometimes there are too many descriptions of irrelevant things, such as writing several chapters about a fight, which has no nutrition and is a waste of time. The rest is all nonsense, just repeating the previous chapters, wasting the reader's time. I guess the author has also lost his memory or is suffering from juvenile dementia.

It's very interesting. It has a sense of old-age novels and comedy. The plot is relatively coherent. It is recommended to watch.

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The author writes great! It also feels like a little bit of talent! This novel is very suitable for the dreams of otakus. Modern people work from 9 to 5, and sometimes often work overtime. After finally taking a day off, I tell my true feelings. I don't want to go there, so I just stay at home and watch the world of immortality and find something to do for myself, because living is too realistic and too tiring. Modern people really need to travel to the world of immortality to relieve themselves in the real world! I hope the author can continue...

The world of Xianxia, ​​which is more in line with my understanding, is not a mindless and miraculous push for everything, but the fate of the characters, the grievances of the previous generation and the cause and effect of the new generation are intertwined between the struggles and contradictions of each incident. The plot is foreshadowing and turning, and the turns are intertwined and fascinating. Unlike traditional novels, there are no formulaic and copy-based upgrade routines, and the characters' experiences are vivid and really good-looking. The part where the leader erected the monument really made me choke up with emotion [covers face].

It's so well written. This is the world of cultivating immortals in my mind. There are no messy exercises and messy elixirs. Everyone starts with the same exercise, seniority is respected, and there is a logical struggle of interests. It's great [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Overall, it feels pretty good. First of all, the overall atmosphere tends to be humorous, so it's unlikely that you'll find it uninteresting. The fun plot that pops up from time to time can attract readers to continue reading. The second point is about the truth about the original protagonist being killed and buried alive. From the beginning of the story, we constantly add foreshadowing, step by step to get closer to the truth of the story, and finally show the cause and effect of the whole thing. The plot structure is very smooth, and the arrangement of events is also very compact. What is finally shown to the readers is a story that is long enough, attractive, suspenseful, and has a beginning and an end. This is a big bonus. And this incident indirectly led to another incident, which was the original life experience of the male protagonist. This incident also involved the grudges and resentments of the older generation, opening the next chapter in disguise. I am still looking forward to the follow-up development, but the emotional line is currently relatively vague. Several female characters are currently in an ambiguous state, but this state may or may not work. I hope that the follow-up emotional line, whether it is a single female protagonist without a heroine or a harem, can have a clearer direction to show readers.

With 460 chapters, this is another difficult book to rate. First of all, this book has many advantages: the writing style is very clever and has a sense of substitution. The characters are well created, and several key supporting characters stand out. The story is particularly well conceived, with multiple costumes and human nature. The small stories within the big framework constantly pile up baggage and main threads. The problems are also very prominent: first of all, the story line is flawed, and the early timeline does not match up. The timeline was corrected after about two hundred chapters, but it still doesn't match up. Secondly, some clever writing methods were used in the early stage of the story to attract readers in a relaxed and funny way. But by chapter 200, this writing method will still conflict with the main line of the story. Half of each chapter is used to set up some funny little stories, and the main line of the story is protracted. There are two hundred chapters of the sect competition. In the middle, there are several important subplots, several story lines that need to be connected, and a lot of nonsense. The book is good, but the problem of not getting good ratings is also obvious. My initial rating is 8 points. But I recommend that book lovers take a look, there are many highlights. Chapter 576 abandons the book, this book should be controversial. As mentioned above, the advantages and disadvantages are obvious, and it all depends on personal taste. I personally don't like this work. It's like I went to a noodle shop and asked for a bowl of beef noodles, and the boss gave me 88 side dishes. I thought it was pretty good when it was first served, but I was full of side dishes and the noodles hadn't been served yet. The boss was very enthusiastic and kept introducing how good the side dishes were, but I just wanted to eat beef noodles. Readers who don't pay attention to content and just want to kill time can read this work. But my personal evaluation is only 8 points.

The writing is really good, and even bookworms of decades can read it. The back part is really too long, there are more than 400 chapters, and the novice village has not been released yet. Can you speed up the progress? I have already written almost 200 chapters for the competition. Write less about romance. The matter of the previous leader has been solved in a few chapters. I am really not interested in their affairs. They are too stupid. They are all over the water.

There are very few interesting articles in Tomato novels nowadays. This is my favorite time-travel novel that is humorous and a little suspenseful. Thank you for letting me encounter such a good novel. Very strange point First, it is over 500 chapters now. When the novel is about 200 or 300 chapters, there is a strong sense of separation between the stories. For example, one day they were doing things together, and the next day when they meet, they treat them as complete strangers. It feels very strange that there are no micro-expressions described. The second point is that the story is a bit delayed. It is now chapter 500, but the things caused by the death of the protagonist have not yet been resolved. The birth of the protagonist is explained from the beginning of the novel and the death process is explained in the middle, but the great uncle has not written about it or who the murderer is for a long time. Summary: More than 500 chapters. The murderer has not been confessed, the relatives have not recognized each other, and the two major issues of the sect (spiritual veins and new sect leader) have not been resolved. However, many characters and stories have been introduced, and now three time-travelers have been introduced. It can be seen that the author wants to create a very majestic and majestic world view, but every problem point is not written to the end, which makes the article a bit messy and the content is delayed. But these subplots are still interesting. Flaws do not hide the advantages, five-star praise Come on, come on, start adding book reviews. Looking at it so far, it has changed a lot and there is no feeling of delay. But a new situation has arisen, and it feels like the author has changed his writing style. In the early stage, he may write novels mainly based on stories, but now he will intersperse "the thoughts that the author thinks the characters may have at the moment" or some interpretations of the characters' behaviors in the novels. It is quite clever. This method can lower the reading threshold, but it may make some readers who have open-ended ideas and want to explore on their own feel a little disappointed. Let's see how the author weighs the balance. Generally speaking, it is better than before. The story is compact, there are twists and turns in the plot, and the hydrological situation is there, but it will be much better than before. In my opinion, it is not that serious. Maybe I am the kind of person who fattens up the article before reading it, so I think it is okay for me to explain what needs to be explained. Five stars, come on