Immortal Cultivator and Rebel Boy

It's a very nice book, with vivid and interesting characters and an online plot design. The only problem is that sometimes there are too many descriptions of irrelevant things, such as writing several chapters about a fight, which has no nutrition and is a waste of time. The rest is all nonsense, just repeating the previous chapters, wasting the reader's time. I guess the author has also lost his memory or is suffering from juvenile dementia.

It's very interesting. It has a sense of old-age novels and comedy. The plot is relatively coherent. It is recommended to watch.

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The author writes great! It also feels like a little bit of talent! This novel is very suitable for the dreams of otakus. Modern people work from 9 to 5, and sometimes often work overtime. After finally taking a day off, I tell my true feelings. I don't want to go there, so I just stay at home and watch the world of immortality and find something to do for myself, because living is too realistic and too tiring. Modern people really need to travel to the world of immortality to relieve themselves in the real world! I hope the author can continue...

The world of Xianxia, ​​which is more in line with my understanding, is not a mindless and miraculous push for everything, but the fate of the characters, the grievances of the previous generation and the cause and effect of the new generation are intertwined between the struggles and contradictions of each incident. The plot is foreshadowing and turning, and the turns are intertwined and fascinating. Unlike traditional novels, there are no formulaic and copy-based upgrade routines, and the characters' experiences are vivid and really good-looking. The part where the leader erected the monument really made me choke up with emotion [covers face].

Overall, it feels pretty good. First of all, the overall atmosphere tends to be humorous, so it's unlikely that you'll find it uninteresting. The fun plot that pops up from time to time can attract readers to continue reading. The second point is about the truth about the original protagonist being killed and buried alive. From the beginning of the story, we constantly add foreshadowing, step by step to get closer to the truth of the story, and finally show the cause and effect of the whole thing. The plot structure is very smooth, and the arrangement of events is also very compact. What is finally shown to the readers is a story that is long enough, attractive, suspenseful, and has a beginning and an end. This is a big bonus. And this incident indirectly led to another incident, which was the original life experience of the male protagonist. This incident also involved the grudges and resentments of the older generation, opening the next chapter in disguise. I am still looking forward to the follow-up development, but the emotional line is currently relatively vague. Several female characters are currently in an ambiguous state, but this state may or may not work. I hope that the follow-up emotional line, whether it is a single female protagonist without a heroine or a harem, can have a clearer direction to show readers.

It's so well written. This is the world of cultivating immortals in my mind. There are no messy exercises and messy elixirs. Everyone starts with the same exercise, seniority is respected, and there is a logical struggle of interests. It's great [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

With 460 chapters, this is another difficult book to rate. First of all, this book has many advantages: the writing style is very clever and has a sense of substitution. The characters are well created, and several key supporting characters stand out. The story is particularly well conceived, with multiple costumes and human nature. The small stories within the big framework constantly pile up baggage and main threads. The problems are also very prominent: first of all, the story line is flawed, and the early timeline does not match up. The timeline was corrected after about two hundred chapters, but it still doesn't match up. Secondly, some clever writing methods were used in the early stage of the story to attract readers in a relaxed and funny way. But by chapter 200, this writing method will still conflict with the main line of the story. Half of each chapter is used to set up some funny little stories, and the main line of the story is protracted. There are two hundred chapters of the sect competition. In the middle, there are several important subplots, several story lines that need to be connected, and a lot of nonsense. The book is good, but the problem of not getting good ratings is also obvious. My initial rating is 8 points. But I recommend that book lovers take a look, there are many highlights. Chapter 576 abandons the book, this book should be controversial. As mentioned above, the advantages and disadvantages are obvious, and it all depends on personal taste. I personally don't like this work. It's like I went to a noodle shop and asked for a bowl of beef noodles, and the boss gave me 88 side dishes. I thought it was pretty good when it was first served, but I was full of side dishes and the noodles hadn't been served yet. The boss was very enthusiastic and kept introducing how good the side dishes were, but I just wanted to eat beef noodles. Readers who don't pay attention to content and just want to kill time can read this work. But my personal evaluation is only 8 points.

The writing is really good, and even bookworms of decades can read it. The back part is really too long, there are more than 400 chapters, and the novice village has not been released yet. Can you speed up the progress? I have already written almost 200 chapters for the competition. Write less about romance. The matter of the previous leader has been solved in a few chapters. I am really not interested in their affairs. They are too stupid. They are all over the water.

There are very few interesting articles in Tomato novels nowadays. This is my favorite time-travel novel that is humorous and a little suspenseful. Thank you for letting me encounter such a good novel. Very strange point First, it is over 500 chapters now. When the novel is about 200 or 300 chapters, there is a strong sense of separation between the stories. For example, one day they were doing things together, and the next day when they meet, they treat them as complete strangers. It feels very strange that there are no micro-expressions described. The second point is that the story is a bit delayed. It is now chapter 500, but the things caused by the death of the protagonist have not yet been resolved. The birth of the protagonist is explained from the beginning of the novel and the death process is explained in the middle, but the great uncle has not written about it or who the murderer is for a long time. Summary: More than 500 chapters. The murderer has not been confessed, the relatives have not recognized each other, and the two major issues of the sect (spiritual veins and new sect leader) have not been resolved. However, many characters and stories have been introduced, and now three time-travelers have been introduced. It can be seen that the author wants to create a very majestic and majestic world view, but every problem point is not written to the end, which makes the article a bit messy and the content is delayed. But these subplots are still interesting. Flaws do not hide the advantages, five-star praise Come on, come on, start adding book reviews. Looking at it so far, it has changed a lot and there is no feeling of delay. But a new situation has arisen, and it feels like the author has changed his writing style. In the early stage, he may write novels mainly based on stories, but now he will intersperse "the thoughts that the author thinks the characters may have at the moment" or some interpretations of the characters' behaviors in the novels. It is quite clever. This method can lower the reading threshold, but it may make some readers who have open-ended ideas and want to explore on their own feel a little disappointed. Let's see how the author weighs the balance. Generally speaking, it is better than before. The story is compact, there are twists and turns in the plot, and the hydrological situation is there, but it will be much better than before. In my opinion, it is not that serious. Maybe I am the kind of person who fattens up the article before reading it, so I think it is okay for me to explain what needs to be explained. Five stars, come on

The author's writing is very strong👍It is rare to see an article with good logical writing. Around chapter 440, it was hard water for eight chapters [smile] [smile] [smile] I forced my wits to fall, I can't remember that the little green hair can hunt for treasures, right? [Smile] [smile] [smile] If you don't bring such water, I found a cave entrance to find it for eight chapters, it's really 6

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. I haven't seen it in a long time. The characters are described so vividly and vividly. I must give it a thumbs up!

1. Super upright views, 2. Humorous and witty, 3. Vivid story and character descriptions 4. Suspense and thought-provoking, 5. Super sweet sense of love, so it must be given a five-star rating. Come on, author.

The overall style is humorous, and the vivid descriptions of the naughty boys and the good girls often make people laugh. I guess the author must have been beaten by a group of girls before. The feeling of pain, itching, and wanting to cry and laugh was particularly interesting (because I have also experienced this kind of experience), so the scene was written to be lively and interesting. The author's description of women's mentality is also very thorough, and men can't help but smile knowingly when reading it. Moreover, the author humbly accepts readers' comments and responds positively, which makes people feel good. Recommend five stars

The general structure of this book is quite interesting, the writing style, and the daily plot descriptions are very good. There are many pitfalls in it, and there are many inexplicable individual groups. The immortal sect structured according to the current official system is indeed good, but I don't know how to fill these pits later.

Not bad, it's rare to read a fairy tale without a system Later the protagonist becomes seriously mentally ill

It's been a long time since I've seen a male protagonist with such personality. In a sense, he's a true "mortal flow". The hero's mentality as a small citizen after traveling through time is vividly depicted. The character image and identity background seem very different, but they are consistent with the personality. He is lustful, innocent, arrogant, and smart, but he can think when he is calm. He has many shortcomings, but he has the most basic kindness. He has the beauty of a "college student" [face covering]

Funny, suspenseful and engaging

Listen to Chapter 166. Traveling through time and cultivating immortality. A more traditional fairy tale novel. The story background is similar, the plot is relatively coherent, the writing is acceptable, and it is light and interesting. Shan did not inherit the memory of the male protagonist's predecessor, and spent many chapters filling in the gaps, which was a bit lengthy. I feel that the novel is called "Diaosi Travels Through the Realm of Immortal Cultivation" which is more appropriate. I hope that the male protagonist can be more polite, and of course, the coquettish moves should not be less. Come on, author. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

Relaxed, humorous, and quite interesting. It's quite relaxing to watch. It's suitable for reading when you want to relax. The protagonist has a very cheerful personality. I personally find it quite likable. Yulong's real character is also quite likable. Although there are many old routines, you can directly guess the ending when you see the beginning, but it is also well written. I hope there will be more twists and turns in the future, and it will be more predictable, so that the old tree will bloom with new flowers. After reading about fifty chapters, the only bad thing is that the logic is a bit poor. Maybe this is also the style of this book. The author said it is nonsensical style. Come on, author

I feel that Yulong Zhenren has the flavor of Sword and Fairy, Wine and Sword Fairy, the male protagonist's grandparents are a bit like Jiang Qing and Yue Rouxia, the Sword God Ancestor is a bit like Feng Qingyang, and Shuang'er's character is a standard heroine template for novels. However, this book's immortality cultivation system setting does not apply to Qi refining, foundation building pills, Yuanying, and Shen transformation. . . Rather, the author himself conceived a new system and settings for cultivating immortality, which I quite like.

It's a good book. It doesn't have any old-fashioned pretentiousness. The plot is slightly suspenseful and the logic is clear. The characters are well drawn and give people a sense of reality. It can be regarded as one of the few good books on Tomato.

Overall it's pretty good, with a lot of funny moments. I've read 366 chapters so far. The reason I deducted one star is because what I'm reading so far is not like a novel about cultivating immortals, but more like a novel about power struggles. The protagonist has fought very few times so far, and it doesn't give me the feeling of cultivating immortals. Instead, it's all about power struggles. The struggle forces the protagonist to take sides, and there are too many forces in the sect. Later, I find out that the person who killed the protagonist is a third-party force, and so far, the protagonist's realm is a bit confusing. Until Chapter 366, I don't know whether the protagonist is in the early stage of the God-controlling realm or at the peak. Another point is that he is a god. Tianqi's emotional line is very abrupt. When he was 14 years old, he met the 3-year-old protagonist once, and then reacted later when he learned that he and the protagonist were engaged. Then in Houshan Zuci, he was forced to tell the truth that he liked the protagonist. It was very abrupt and there was no emotional line at all. Then he and Yun Shuang The children begin to be humble to each other, which is very fascinating, but overall the whole book does have a lot of laughs. The plot has the emotional line of Shen Tianqi. There is no big problem. Overall, I can give it 3.5 Stars. I will take a look at the subsequent plot and may comment again in the future.

After reading it, I still give it four stars. I originally wanted to give it three stars, but after I finished reading it, I felt that I was lowering myself. The story is good and the plot is very funny, but sometimes the protagonist is really stupid, like Xiaobai, but the background is a 30-year-old soul. Another point is that the author is not good at writing battles, and there are no details of battles at all. The plot is okay, with a lot of emotional lines. It is a story about the second generation of ancestors cultivating immortals and is invincible. It is funny and light-hearted. So far, the three female protagonists are not too much and not too little. It is a refreshing story and has a lot of laughs. Those who like online IQ, decisive killing, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers should be careful 😂

It's a pretty good novel, but it has nothing to do with cultivating immortals. It's more like a Gong Dou Wen with a background of cultivating immortals. The description of events is very detailed. The consequent disadvantage is that the plot advances too slowly. After a few chapters, it may still be wandering around in the same place. It is equivalent to describing what different people are doing in the same time period. Not bad

This novel is quite interesting. The interesting thing is that it is a book about the struggle over succession within a sect. The characters in it are distinctive and the dialogues are interesting. It is a rare masterpiece in recent years. Different from the system flow and the crazy cultivation flow, this is the biggest highlight of this novel.

There are many characters with well-depicted personalities, and the plot has reasonable twists and turns. It has little relationship with Earth at the moment, but may have a close relationship in the future. I hope there won't be too many episodes back to Earth in the future. Reading novels about cultivating immortals is to break away from reality, but it's so awkward to be woken up while daydreaming. Chapter 1843 The result of Tianjian Sect's handling is not satisfactory.

I personally thought it was very interesting. After watching the plot, I think Ye Feng will have to make a choice later on whether to come to the sect that he has traveled through time or to be a family member with blood in his body. I personally think that Ye Feng is very likely to kill Linglong and the others with a sword during the decisive battle. Yun Shuang'er may also break up with Ye Feng or kill her mother with Ye Feng, but it's extremely difficult. It may be a breakup to make it more interesting, and then the two of them work together in the finale, and Yun Shuang'er dies. It may also be a hppyend (personal speculation, the author's own writing shall prevail. I still hope that Yun Shuang'er and Ye Feng will not have the plot I mentioned.) It's good to see the author hurry up and update the book. It's more tiring to follow it every day. I wish the author a fortune of over ten thousand. So what is the main reason why Shen Tianqi left Ye Feng? I am very curious whether he will come back in the future. It is most likely due to the influence of the Golden Eyes of the Ancient Buddha.

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I saw the end of three months of guarding the mausoleum in one breath, and Ye Feng was "released after serving his sentence". I gave it five stars regardless of it, haha. Although there are no gorgeous words and fierce competition, the various scenes and characters are still very interesting. The protagonist is not boring to cultivate immortality, and there are delicious food and beauties. It is interesting. I looked at the progress bar, but I still haven't read half of it. I hope the author will continue writing. By the time I finish reading the second half, the progress bar will have a large section empty. Otherwise, I will give a negative review if I follow up every day.