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It's well written. Because I rarely read similar books, it's difficult to give any suggestions, but I do feel that writing this book is to my liking. Suggestions: 1. The female body's senses should not be so dull (because girls' bodies are always more sensitive). Just adjust the body sensitivity to normal. 2 Then, while sharing the perception, do not affect the coordination of each other's bodies (if the female body is affected by relatively strong stimulation and affects the male body, others may see something is wrong). 3 For novels, smooth logic is very important, so don't be too brainless when writing novels. The above is just my opinion, please don't criticize if you don't like it. Then, offer ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

It's very interesting. It's different from some titles that claim to be one soul and two persons. In fact, it's about two people. It's just too little. It's less than fifty chapters. It's not enough to read. Please give it a try first.

So far I feel pretty good. Compared to the previous book, the structure of the story is less abrupt. The transition of the story in the previous book felt a bit too fast, and sometimes I felt really confused. I think the author's emotional line in the latest chapter is quite realistic, as if he has experienced it personally [laughs crookedly] However, the emotional line is a challenge, and the relationship between Uemoto's emotional line is almost as complicated as this. In this novel, the relationship with Shen Siyue and Lin Yu is handled very well. In the previous version, the relationship is with the male protagonist. In short, it feels like the male protagonist has been begging to torture the school beauty [sneaky laugh] and is obsessed with it.

I like it very much. I feel very good so far. I hope I can write more.

Dear author, can you write something particularly exciting? To be honest, writing about emotional entanglements is boring. I would rather see the protagonists feeling like they are a perfect match. What is tacit understanding? 1+1>2, When boys and girls mediate with the same attitude in their respective social networks, and when they give the same answer to the same thing and the same person, I think I will think about it for a long time, "Because, we have the same mind."

I don't know how to put it, it just looks very comfortable. If there is anything that can wash away my bad mood of the day, it is probably this novel that I like [Sending Hearts]

As a novel about one soul and two bodies, it is definitely in place. The perspective of both bodies is shown, which is good, but it may not be too emphasis on it. Sometimes I feel that the roommate next to the male protagonist is similar to an NPC, but that is normal. After all, there is not much emphasis on it, and the speech is okay. It makes people feel real (don't tell me secretly that it is untrue and unreasonable, the novel makes people feel real and good, immerse yourself in it), it is very comfortable to read, but there are still too few of them at present, five stars is a bit high, but I gave five stars because it is a new book, I will not give four stars, come on Hey, hasn't the lockdown been lifted yet?

This is a very good work, and all kinds of praise will be omitted here. What I want to say is that this novel can bring me my own understanding that is different from other novels. Have you ever thought about the relationship between your consciousness and your body? You look at your body and you see your hands and know they are your hands. Your legs know they are your legs. Usually think of them as part of you. But if one day I want you to look at these parts of your body from another perspective. Your consciousness is your consciousness, but your body is an object… How would you feel? The main difference between this book about male and female protagonists and other books of the same type is that one person no longer controls two bodies as he should. Instead, there is the concept of main and secondary bodies, and this concept is more obvious. When you look at another body, you feel looking at it like a precious Sony Ericsson object, a reflection that brings us back to our perception of self. How do you view your own body? Will you cherish it, not as much as you cherish yourself but as your most precious and precious item? After all, your body is the only thing you bring with you from birth to accompany you until death. ————Written during a serious illness.

So far so good. So whether it's more or less, the introduction ends with a single female protagonist. In the latest chapter, the relationship feels a little complicated again. The person the male likes is a lesbian and he also likes the female, and there is a tendency to stay with the male just to make the female regret. But this relationship will break down sooner or later. I personally don't like this complicated process. I prefer sweet love. Because I have no love experience, I prefer sweet results and don't like tortuous processes.

Dear author, why don't you change the platform and continue writing?

She is so beautiful, why was she banned?

It's a bit interesting, and it perfectly reflects the behavior of adolescent boys towards the opposite sex. This expression of broken love feels like the author's personal experience [learned]

When I first read the introduction on the page, I was quite intrigued. It is a genre that I have never seen before. It is novel. It is different from other novels where the male and female protagonists are paired up. The male and female characters are the same person. Although the soul is the same, the personality is inconsistent. As a result, there are many humorous places. It is neither monotonous nor too refreshing. I really like it. This type of ending with two souls in one body should be difficult to write, but I still hope that the author will not marry the male body and the female body in the end, which is a bit too lonely. This is just a suggestion, but I am still looking forward to the author's final ending. I hope the author will continue to write it.

A very interesting novel, the best One Soul Two Bodies I have ever read. The protagonist is an ordinary person who has his own worries and feelings, but he is not mentally retarded or cowardly. It is different from other novels in which the protagonist settings are different. It has a different feeling. Looking forward to the protagonist's greater growth.

The writing is very good, and the psychological journey of the characters is written out in a reasonable way. This is the best bilingual text I have seen in all my years of reading. I hope I don't have a harem.

The twin setting is very interesting

I can't understand it, so is it Narcissus? After watching the subsequent plot, I don't know how to evaluate it. Suddenly I feel like it's okay again

Has the author read Amaterasu's Bloody Smoke (My Rhapsody with Her After Transformation)?

Why isn't this better yet? Are you going to be banned for life?

After reading Chapter 45, my curiosity was really aroused. The changes in the promise and the perspective of thinking about the female body made me laugh to death. It's really good to give the promise for free [laughter]

The types of books I read before were all in the dark room, but this one won't be, right?

It looks good. I hope the male body and the female body can be together. What I read in this type of novel is the stimulation of immorality [Adoration]

I'm very curious about the ending, is it a self-marriage? Still a new storm.

Just take a look at it in general

It is already very good among the two-body novels I have read. I personally think it clearly introduces the protagonist's mental process. And it reflects the characteristics of the two bodies: the difference in a person's attitude towards the male body and the female body. Now looking forward to the follow-up development [please update]

Very good and fun

Tomato is a platform that limits your performance [laughing evilly]

Author, [I learned], have you written down your experience of failure in confessing? What about the author….

Jiang Lin is Nanda? Jiangning (Nanjing) University?

When will it be released? [Crying][crying][crying]