"No system" + "Not brainless" + "Group portrait" + "Drama"
Since ten years ago, major evil disasters have entered the high-walled city, and the infection disaster that caused the human body to crystallize has struck again.
After traveling through time, Shi Yan survived a large-scale disaster that killed more than 10,000 people and became the "sole survivor" and "absolutely immune individual".
——His blood is a special vaccine against the disaster of crystal disease.
Hiding the identity of the immune, the mysterious system, and the transaction invitation from the female boss.
The war between mankind and the world started again. However, Shi Yan, who became a survivor, would not have thought that he would be a "survivor" from beginning to end.
"But no matter what, life will eventually find its way out."
He said this.
Reader comments
Very nice! The character creation is very interesting, and the most important thing is that it is not brainless. It is obviously something that I want to express. After seeing the world view unfold in more than 30 chapters, I am really amazing!
The setting is very interesting, and the group portraits are advanced in multiple lines. Come on, the author!
It's beautiful, it's really good, I'm not exaggerating, it's better than Zhanshen (no intention of starting a fight)
Well, how can I put it, if you have to find faults, the combat description is still poor, and the author should think carefully about the physics, especially "absolute zero only causes frostbite", hahahaha, I am quite speechless when I see this, [face covering], but overall it is well written, the setting is also very novel and interesting, especially the character creation is really excellent, and the "sense of contrast" is very strong.
This paragraph is a bit nit-picky, and of course it's just my personal reasons. The main reason is that I really don't like the feeling of the protagonist being led by others. Maybe it's because I didn't write it like this in the early stages. But I always feel that this sense of déjà vu is a "tool", a feeling of doing work for others.
Hahahahaha, of course, this is just my personal reason, and it only represents my personal meaning. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.
Generally speaking, there are still some things that need to be corrected. The first is the segmentation. Some paragraphs are too long, which is not acceptable. Also, the ability setting does not need to be too complicated, but it must have highlights. There can be more psychological activities of the protagonist, and the motivation and main line of the protagonist must be clear.
Very nice! The character creation is very interesting, and the most important thing is that it is not brainless. It is obviously something that I want to express. After seeing the world view unfold in more than 30 chapters, I am really amazing! The setting is very interesting, and the group portraits are advanced in multiple lines. Come on, the author!
It's beautiful, it's really good, I'm not exaggerating, it's better than Zhanshen (no intention of starting a fight) Well, how can I put it, if you have to find faults, the combat description is still poor, and the author should think carefully about the physics, especially "absolute zero only causes frostbite", hahahaha, I am quite speechless when I see this, [face covering], but overall it is well written, the setting is also very novel and interesting, especially the character creation is really excellent, and the "sense of contrast" is very strong. This paragraph is a bit nit-picky, and of course it's just my personal reasons. The main reason is that I really don't like the feeling of the protagonist being led by others. Maybe it's because I didn't write it like this in the early stages. But I always feel that this sense of déjà vu is a "tool", a feeling of doing work for others. Hahahahaha, of course, this is just my personal reason, and it only represents my personal meaning. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Generally speaking, there are still some things that need to be corrected. The first is the segmentation. Some paragraphs are too long, which is not acceptable. Also, the ability setting does not need to be too complicated, but it must have highlights. There can be more psychological activities of the protagonist, and the motivation and main line of the protagonist must be clear.