If I take the wrong tonic, scold me again. I will never write disgusting plots again! Already honest! ! ! Just treat it as fun for everyone! My writing is bad, but Tonic doesn't want to scold me again!
Reader comments
This book is amazing😋
The male protagonist and Xiao Hong are just two little beasts licking each other's wounds. So far, in the 35 chapters, they have basically never separated in every picture. It's so sweet. The relationship is confirmed quickly, but it's not rushed or strange. It's like it should be like this, they are a couple in themselves.
The male protagonist is sensible but not cold, and there are no ambiguous plots with other female characters, nor various bizarre misunderstandings. Only in front of the female protagonist will he show his childish and weak side. It is so sweet, trusting and protecting each other, and sleeping in each other's arms in a small space.
What's more, the male protagonist is two years younger than Xiao Hong. This is too clichéd. The relationship between the two is not relatable at all. This is a sister-brother relationship. But if you suddenly think of this small setting while watching it, and it happens to be when Xiaohong is holding the male protagonist and crying, it is too clichéd. And when the male protagonist is holding Xiaohong and crying, it is even more censorious, because this is the essence of the sister-brother relationship.
The male protagonist's external indifference and internal tenderness are like a barrier between everyone and the small family. People can clearly feel the cruelty of the devil's world, and can also clearly feel the warmth and sweetness of this small family.
Enough has been said, I hope you all will see it for yourself.
I just hope that the author will write about the kissing and training, and then improve the male protagonist's combat power. After all, it is still very difficult to survive to the end with this kind of combat power, and there will be no bloody misunderstandings.
Finally, I would like to remind everyone that you must keep smiling while reading. I know this is very simple, but don't forget it😋
I'm an author. What's wrong with giving my own book five-star reviews? ? Tough
🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰So sweet🥳So sweet🤩So sweet😘So sweet🥵So sweet😋So sweet😤So sweet😆So sweet Ah😙It's so sweet😘It's so sweet😍It's so sweet😋I haven't read such a sweet article in a long time😇At least I haven't read it so far I've been to the knife😁There is only the light of the male and female protagonists' mutual attachment😊It almost scares me in the gutter🐭 to death😭At the moment, it is identified as a super sweet article🤩The author has a very good vocabulary🤓👍but there are too many metaphors and adjectives in the early stage😦It makes me a little tired😢
The author has a match with Fujimoto Shuyou
The knife hidden in the cake is a breath of fresh air in Yang Persimmon's Chainsaw novels. The writing focuses on the emotional description of Qin Jun and Xiao Hong. It is not a popular formula-based novel that makes fighting exciting. It is not eager to promote the plot, but in the plot, Qin Jun has a great personal charm. He is not a male protagonist or a soft-boiled man, but a living protagonist with complex emotions like ordinary people. He has a strong sense of substitution. Come on, author, but if you want to be a Fujimoto tree, I will find you, I will!
It's still good, it can reach 3.5 Points.
It has mixed strengths and weaknesses. The protagonist is well portrayed, but the character in the front is a bit too strong, and it feels a little bit out of place with the one in the back.
Overall good, the emotional line is also pretty good
The author's writing is good, and the characters are very vivid. Although there are not many daily plots, the descriptions are very detailed. However, there are too many descriptions of Dongshan Xiaohong's psychology and other descriptions in each small scene. He constantly emphasizes that it can indeed shape the character, but this seems a bit stiff. Moreover, the audience of this book should be readers who have read Chainsaw Man and must be familiar with the characters. Under this, there are too many descriptions of Xiaohong's inner interpretation of her panic and fear, etc., Because when I read this book, I felt that it was okay. But listening to the book is very tiring, and the repeated descriptions are boring. The descriptions of Xiao Hong in the manga can be deleted appropriately. The focus should be on describing her emotions and inner changes that are different from those in the manga. Such contrast may create different effects (but remember not to forget the origin). The character's inadvertent little movements can also perfectly reflect the psychology. Also, the relationship between Xiaohong and the protagonist is a bit too fast, and it feels a bit like seducing an unexperienced little girl [Code]
And then... I wish Xiaohong Qinjun 99 (always see him as Taijun)
Even though it scored 6.7 Points, the writing is very good and the poisonous points are very small and can be ignored (which is considered good in the track of Chainsaw Man). It would be perfect if the original characters could be rescued. Overall, it is a book with great potential.
I don't even know how to describe it, wc, the emotional description is so delicate, it makes me empathize deeply, it feels like the author is like a big boss playing a trumpet, and although I haven't read many Chainsaw Man fanfics with a single heroine, this one written by the author must be on the list, and it must be ranked first among those I have read.
This book is so delicious, I must recommend it to my friends to taste it together, [laughs] (If Xiaohong and Qin Jun don't care about falling in love again, then I can only take away the cute author in the corner)
Come on, big brother who writes fanfics!
It's good. It writes about the thoughts between two people under the world view of Fujimoto Shu. This is the first time I have seen this kind of subject. The author will update it quickly. I have already seen you on the recommendation list.
Not bad. Although I haven't read much of Chainsaw Man, I feel that the author's writing is pretty good. It's just that in the first few chapters, too many modifiers are used. But after all, considering that it may be to reduce the number of words, but overall it is not bad. In fact,
It's better than other Chainsaw novels. Although there aren't any big scenes or bloody plots, it's very comfortable to read. I also feel that many of the characters are well-drawn and there are no OOC situations. The most important thing is that it's not like most other novels that only follow the plot lines related to the original work.
On a daily basis, you can see me laughing all the time
It feels like a slow-paced novel written in the millennium. It is different from many fast-food novels nowadays. Is this a novel I can read for free?
Wow, this book is so sweet🥳So sweet🤩So sweet😘So sweet🥵So sweet😋So sweet😤So sweet😆So sweet😙So sweet😍So sweet😋I haven't read such a sweet article in long time Go out
It's wonderful😋, it's the first time I can read a book and feel like I'm being hugged. I feel safe every time I read a few chapters before going to bed. The only shortcoming may be that the description is a bit excessive, and some people may find it boring, but for me it is just right. It is the constant emphasis on the relationship between the two that is the source of security.
The author connects his inner world with Xiao Hong in his own way to bring us a different Chainsaw Man fanfic. The dependence of Qin Jun and Xiao Hong on each other is really touching [crying]
It's good-looking, not toxic at all [OK] Also, it's very sugary, too sugary [Admiration] Those who have withdrawal reactions after reading the original novel can use it to detoxify [OK]
The writing is very good, the reading experience is smooth and there are many delicate descriptions, the plot design is also very good, the setting and plot development are quite attractive, anyway, I read the latest chapter directly from the beginning. Come on and update, Fujimoto sapling, you must not die.
There are currently 24 chapters. The author's writing style is really touching. The most attractive thing is the emotional line. In fact, it is like writing a comic. The emotional lines of supporting characters in other works are not simple, because this kind of character itself is mentioned in the original work and will not be explained too deeply. To write it well, you must grasp the parts that express the character's image and expand based on it. However, the performance of Xiaohong's original work is also very eye-catching, but this book made me discover the delicate emotions that I did not find when reading comics, like Dongshan Xiaohong peeking into another parallel world.
The plot is comfortable, and the author's writing is very delicate, especially the description of Xiao Hong, which has a strong sense of comics and is very vivid. Unlike other Chainsaw Man fics, the focus is on the excitement of combat, and it is too much to do more than to neglect the other. This book is both everyday and super sweet. All in all, highly recommended, excellent work (⌒.−)=★
It's very sweet and beautiful. The emotions between the two are well described. It's a great book. Although I don't know why the rating is a little low, I probably won't forget you, Wan Xingyuan. You must continue to write hard for me!
I go for pure love! Great, great, great! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]
They confessed to each other in more than ten chapters, but there was no abruptness at all, and the connection was very smooth. The daily writing is also very good, not embarrassing at all, and very sweet, making me spin in bed.
Give me a bookshelf! The author came over and asked me to kiss [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]
It's very sweet, but there are too many descriptions and metaphors. In the early stage, I have been describing the inner world of the protagonist and Xiaohong. I have written too much and have been emphasizing "redemption". To be honest, this does not seem very natural. You can write more about daily life and hide the sugar in daily details. There is no need to deliberately describe the heart to sensationalize (the author must work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง must keep writing)
This is a good book. The author's writing style is delicate and can resonate with readers. I highly recommend it. It is really worth reading and will not waste your time.
Don't look at the current rating, it will definitely increase in the future, it's so sweet! This kind of sweetness, which is not like industrial saccharin, really impressed me. Reading the author's writing is as delicate as watching "My Wife Came from 1000 Years Ago"
Good book, rare to see [Thoughts]
Don't read the bad comments about how beautiful and sweet they are, they are all malicious comments.
Okay, no eunuchs, I'm looking forward to this story
Author updates please hurry up and don't make me kneel down and beg you🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
High sugar, you thunder
Editor 2: I finally met Xiaohong, but I didn't think it was sweet enough. I'll forgive you for the knife in front of me.
Editor 3: Okay, okay, it's very sweet. I died of happiness watching it.
This... Is... Real pure love...(But if there is Dao Xiaohong, I can only give it a seven-star rating. Pure love means living together for the rest of your life, bastard!!!)
This book is amazing😋 The male protagonist and Xiao Hong are just two little beasts licking each other's wounds. So far, in the 35 chapters, they have basically never separated in every picture. It's so sweet. The relationship is confirmed quickly, but it's not rushed or strange. It's like it should be like this, they are a couple in themselves. The male protagonist is sensible but not cold, and there are no ambiguous plots with other female characters, nor various bizarre misunderstandings. Only in front of the female protagonist will he show his childish and weak side. It is so sweet, trusting and protecting each other, and sleeping in each other's arms in a small space. What's more, the male protagonist is two years younger than Xiao Hong. This is too clichéd. The relationship between the two is not relatable at all. This is a sister-brother relationship. But if you suddenly think of this small setting while watching it, and it happens to be when Xiaohong is holding the male protagonist and crying, it is too clichéd. And when the male protagonist is holding Xiaohong and crying, it is even more censorious, because this is the essence of the sister-brother relationship. The male protagonist's external indifference and internal tenderness are like a barrier between everyone and the small family. People can clearly feel the cruelty of the devil's world, and can also clearly feel the warmth and sweetness of this small family. Enough has been said, I hope you all will see it for yourself. I just hope that the author will write about the kissing and training, and then improve the male protagonist's combat power. After all, it is still very difficult to survive to the end with this kind of combat power, and there will be no bloody misunderstandings. Finally, I would like to remind everyone that you must keep smiling while reading. I know this is very simple, but don't forget it😋
I'm an author. What's wrong with giving my own book five-star reviews? ? Tough
🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰So sweet🥳So sweet🤩So sweet😘So sweet🥵So sweet😋So sweet😤So sweet😆So sweet Ah😙It's so sweet😘It's so sweet😍It's so sweet😋I haven't read such a sweet article in a long time😇At least I haven't read it so far I've been to the knife😁There is only the light of the male and female protagonists' mutual attachment😊It almost scares me in the gutter🐭 to death😭At the moment, it is identified as a super sweet article🤩The author has a very good vocabulary🤓👍but there are too many metaphors and adjectives in the early stage😦It makes me a little tired😢 The author has a match with Fujimoto Shuyou
The knife hidden in the cake is a breath of fresh air in Yang Persimmon's Chainsaw novels. The writing focuses on the emotional description of Qin Jun and Xiao Hong. It is not a popular formula-based novel that makes fighting exciting. It is not eager to promote the plot, but in the plot, Qin Jun has a great personal charm. He is not a male protagonist or a soft-boiled man, but a living protagonist with complex emotions like ordinary people. He has a strong sense of substitution. Come on, author, but if you want to be a Fujimoto tree, I will find you, I will!
It's still good, it can reach 3.5 Points. It has mixed strengths and weaknesses. The protagonist is well portrayed, but the character in the front is a bit too strong, and it feels a little bit out of place with the one in the back. Overall good, the emotional line is also pretty good
The author's writing is good, and the characters are very vivid. Although there are not many daily plots, the descriptions are very detailed. However, there are too many descriptions of Dongshan Xiaohong's psychology and other descriptions in each small scene. He constantly emphasizes that it can indeed shape the character, but this seems a bit stiff. Moreover, the audience of this book should be readers who have read Chainsaw Man and must be familiar with the characters. Under this, there are too many descriptions of Xiaohong's inner interpretation of her panic and fear, etc., Because when I read this book, I felt that it was okay. But listening to the book is very tiring, and the repeated descriptions are boring. The descriptions of Xiao Hong in the manga can be deleted appropriately. The focus should be on describing her emotions and inner changes that are different from those in the manga. Such contrast may create different effects (but remember not to forget the origin). The character's inadvertent little movements can also perfectly reflect the psychology. Also, the relationship between Xiaohong and the protagonist is a bit too fast, and it feels a bit like seducing an unexperienced little girl [Code] And then... I wish Xiaohong Qinjun 99 (always see him as Taijun)
Even though it scored 6.7 Points, the writing is very good and the poisonous points are very small and can be ignored (which is considered good in the track of Chainsaw Man). It would be perfect if the original characters could be rescued. Overall, it is a book with great potential.
I don't even know how to describe it, wc, the emotional description is so delicate, it makes me empathize deeply, it feels like the author is like a big boss playing a trumpet, and although I haven't read many Chainsaw Man fanfics with a single heroine, this one written by the author must be on the list, and it must be ranked first among those I have read.
This book is so delicious, I must recommend it to my friends to taste it together, [laughs] (If Xiaohong and Qin Jun don't care about falling in love again, then I can only take away the cute author in the corner)
Come on, big brother who writes fanfics!
It's good. It writes about the thoughts between two people under the world view of Fujimoto Shu. This is the first time I have seen this kind of subject. The author will update it quickly. I have already seen you on the recommendation list.
Not bad. Although I haven't read much of Chainsaw Man, I feel that the author's writing is pretty good. It's just that in the first few chapters, too many modifiers are used. But after all, considering that it may be to reduce the number of words, but overall it is not bad. In fact,
It's better than other Chainsaw novels. Although there aren't any big scenes or bloody plots, it's very comfortable to read. I also feel that many of the characters are well-drawn and there are no OOC situations. The most important thing is that it's not like most other novels that only follow the plot lines related to the original work. On a daily basis, you can see me laughing all the time It feels like a slow-paced novel written in the millennium. It is different from many fast-food novels nowadays. Is this a novel I can read for free?
Wow, this book is so sweet🥳So sweet🤩So sweet😘So sweet🥵So sweet😋So sweet😤So sweet😆So sweet😙So sweet😍So sweet😋I haven't read such a sweet article in long time Go out
It's wonderful😋, it's the first time I can read a book and feel like I'm being hugged. I feel safe every time I read a few chapters before going to bed. The only shortcoming may be that the description is a bit excessive, and some people may find it boring, but for me it is just right. It is the constant emphasis on the relationship between the two that is the source of security.
The author connects his inner world with Xiao Hong in his own way to bring us a different Chainsaw Man fanfic. The dependence of Qin Jun and Xiao Hong on each other is really touching [crying]
It's good-looking, not toxic at all [OK] Also, it's very sugary, too sugary [Admiration] Those who have withdrawal reactions after reading the original novel can use it to detoxify [OK]
The writing is very good, the reading experience is smooth and there are many delicate descriptions, the plot design is also very good, the setting and plot development are quite attractive, anyway, I read the latest chapter directly from the beginning. Come on and update, Fujimoto sapling, you must not die.
There are currently 24 chapters. The author's writing style is really touching. The most attractive thing is the emotional line. In fact, it is like writing a comic. The emotional lines of supporting characters in other works are not simple, because this kind of character itself is mentioned in the original work and will not be explained too deeply. To write it well, you must grasp the parts that express the character's image and expand based on it. However, the performance of Xiaohong's original work is also very eye-catching, but this book made me discover the delicate emotions that I did not find when reading comics, like Dongshan Xiaohong peeking into another parallel world.
The plot is comfortable, and the author's writing is very delicate, especially the description of Xiao Hong, which has a strong sense of comics and is very vivid. Unlike other Chainsaw Man fics, the focus is on the excitement of combat, and it is too much to do more than to neglect the other. This book is both everyday and super sweet. All in all, highly recommended, excellent work (⌒.−)=★
It's very sweet and beautiful. The emotions between the two are well described. It's a great book. Although I don't know why the rating is a little low, I probably won't forget you, Wan Xingyuan. You must continue to write hard for me!
I go for pure love! Great, great, great! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love] They confessed to each other in more than ten chapters, but there was no abruptness at all, and the connection was very smooth. The daily writing is also very good, not embarrassing at all, and very sweet, making me spin in bed. Give me a bookshelf! The author came over and asked me to kiss [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]
It's very sweet, but there are too many descriptions and metaphors. In the early stage, I have been describing the inner world of the protagonist and Xiaohong. I have written too much and have been emphasizing "redemption". To be honest, this does not seem very natural. You can write more about daily life and hide the sugar in daily details. There is no need to deliberately describe the heart to sensationalize (the author must work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง must keep writing)
This is a good book. The author's writing style is delicate and can resonate with readers. I highly recommend it. It is really worth reading and will not waste your time.
Don't look at the current rating, it will definitely increase in the future, it's so sweet! This kind of sweetness, which is not like industrial saccharin, really impressed me. Reading the author's writing is as delicate as watching "My Wife Came from 1000 Years Ago"
Good book, rare to see [Thoughts] Don't read the bad comments about how beautiful and sweet they are, they are all malicious comments.
Okay, no eunuchs, I'm looking forward to this story
Author updates please hurry up and don't make me kneel down and beg you🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 High sugar, you thunder Editor 2: I finally met Xiaohong, but I didn't think it was sweet enough. I'll forgive you for the knife in front of me. Editor 3: Okay, okay, it's very sweet. I died of happiness watching it.
This... Is... Real pure love...(But if there is Dao Xiaohong, I can only give it a seven-star rating. Pure love means living together for the rest of your life, bastard!!!)
Great, no need to say more😏