Stay Alive and Keep Away from the Male Lead

It was very interesting. At first, I was addicted to the relationship between the heroine and the heroine, but I was also wowed by the interaction between the merchant and the heroine. The most heroic moment for me was the part where the merchant wanted to make the person the heroine likes into a medicine man. I laughed to death. The author's writing style makes me feel comfortable reading. I found that I really like to use simple words to describe a scene, which is also very atmospheric, such as "Outside the carriage, Shang Gui, who is driving the horse, holds the reins in his hands. Through the curtain that is occasionally blown up, he looks at the exquisitely dressed Jiang Nan with a gentle expression, "Jiang Nan, can you give me a piece of it with a kerchief? "Ahhhhhhh, I feel like I can't tell you why. The male protagonist is like the moist and lingering rain in the plum rain season. It gives people both the silent gentleness of the moistening rain and the damp and dark coldness. What a wonderful character! In addition, many supporting characters also have great personalities, such as Mr. Fu who is dedicated to the livelihood of the people, the gentle but loyal Shi Chuipeng, the "scheming" but resourceful Shen Yizheng, and Xu Shen. What impressed me the most was Cui Jiu. At first I thought he was a complete villain, but now I see that he is not that bad. A flesh-and-blood character cannot be defined simply as good or bad. The author did this when he created them, and the characters came alive. All in all, this book is worth reading and waiting for! Finally, I would like to express my condolences to the author, update quickly, the child will starve to death.

It's very well written. I like this type of story very much. I hope it will have a different ending. I have read it before. The female protagonist goes back in time through the male protagonist's photos and sees that the male protagonist was 8 years old, 25 years old, and 17 years old. The last two people were together. The specific plot has been forgotten for a long time. If this book is a BE, Shang Gui's sentence "If you don't come back, I think I will die..." It is very tearful. But the cruelty of life, which is similar to the social life of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, always makes me feel that if the heroine will not stay in that world, then what is the opportunity for her to fall into the dream and come to the hero's side?

The writing is great, but I have a few comments to make. The first one is that there were so many characters that appeared in the beginning that I couldn't remember the one who started to die without a memory point. I didn't even remember the name, so it just failed. The second thing is that it can be revised. The heroine should not say at the beginning that a strong young man will make a country strong. If you cannot guarantee your own safety, do not over-express your opinions (that is, open your heart), otherwise you will be a little stupid. Do not do excessive behavior, just do not take the lead. In a strange dynasty, you have to weigh the pros and cons of everything you do. Emotionally, I haven't seen it yet 🤦. In the end, I wish Bao Bao's books will get better and better hahahaha

So far, I think it looks pretty good, but I'm very curious about how it will develop in the future. The second time we met was ten years apart, and the third time? What about the fourth time? In addition, I don't want them to develop emotional lines. It would be cruel to them. They were born and grew up in different eras, and the education and ideas they received will be somewhat different. If you really like the other person, you are cruel to them. If the heroine travels back to the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, it is impossible for the hero to come to modern times. I don't really want the heroine to leave her current job, money, and status just to fall in love with a boy in ancient times, so it depends on the author's follow-up arrangements. This one will be brilliant if it is well written [smirk] [smirk], but if it is not well written, it will be very confusing, so you have to look at the author's writing skills 🍉 🍉

Let me share some of my shallow understanding [I understand] (If there is a problem, it's my fault, don't be disrespectful) The writing style is very good, and the logic of the story is also very clear. It is interlocking and the foreshadowing is buried deep. It has not been completely solved yet. This line also runs through the entire text. The Shen family, or the previous traveler, treats the world as a large "playground", just like the time traveler in The Three-Body Problem is a farmer in a slaughterhouse, and everyone else is a turkey that is about to be slaughtered. In fact, it seems quite sad. Both the heroine and the hero are carried forward by the torrent of history. They want to change the world, but their power is weak. I really hope that if we fast forward to the end, both of them will become stronger. At the same time, I quite understand the female protagonist's feelings for Shen Yizheng, because the male protagonist is still young after all, and who doesn't admire strength. I quite like them both, but Shen Yizheng has too many things to carry, and his purpose at the beginning was not pure. He is too smart and too calm, and is destined to be fruitless, alas😔 Now I see the heroine's third time travel. Every time the heroine comes, she witnesses a turning point in history. Now the third time travel is not over yet. Oh, I really hope it will progress faster. The author will give me more encouragement~ 😘[Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The full text is a bit brain-burning, and the setting is novel... There is a character Shen Yizheng in it, which may be difficult for many people who have seen it. I scolded him many times in the early stage... But he is indeed very powerful, and he should not be a bad guy... He has set up many games, and he has even started playing chess before the male protagonist was 7 years old. However, after his death, the chess he played during his lifetime is still meticulous and plays a huge role... How should I put it, he and the female protagonist originally had a crush on each other... But he could not and did not dare to be with Jiang Nan. ... The whole text has 599 chapters in total... He died in Chapter 298. Each subsequent chapter can highlight his wisdom and the plots he laid. In fact, the heroine who took advantage of him several times in the past could not believe him and blamed him, but later there were many traces left by him during his lifetime... I couldn't stand it. The character was portrayed so well... His death was like rain constantly soaking the wall... The depression of the slowly rising moisture... In fact, I still hated him a little before. ... Because I think there are still many ways for the two of them to be together... I thought at the time that Shen Yizheng didn't love Shen Yizheng enough. The background of his character was to use... But then when I read the chapter of redemption... I suddenly discovered that when a person's life and death are supported by countless people's lives... Every step he takes is not just for himself. Life is not quantifiable, but looking directly at the passing of life and beauty around us... With eyes blurred by blood and flesh, revenge becomes the only way. So I can gradually understand him, and no longer feel that his character background is exploited... But I can't say that he is right... Because the further he goes on this road, he also materializes life a little bit... I think Jiang Nan is very good... Because when life is materialized and quantified... Then every life is no longer alive... (So everyone must be a socialist successor rich in socialist core values) Closer to home, the writing style of the article is pretty good. The biggest highlight is the novel setting! It's spirited, and the portrayal of some characters is relatively full... But one thing that's not good is that the writing style of the first time travel is a bit naive... The order of the characters' appearance is a bit too tight, which makes it difficult to leave a deep impression on the readers and also difficult to retain the readers (I didn't remember it when I first read it...( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू) If you pay more attention to the flow of readers, you can refer to it. I will slightly change the scenes and the appearances of the characters. Of course, it is already very good, and you don't need to change it. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶) …Of course, looking back, it will still improve a lot!! Also looking forward to the next article! So hurry up and catch my new little fan (=^▽^=) Finally, I wish your writing style will get better and better (*^▽^*), and this article will be a big hit!!! I brushed it twice. T^T It's so pretty. I can't do it anymore. I really liked Wen Suiyi when I first watched it I like it even more after the second brush. As a supporting character in an unpopular book, she only appears in one of the few chapters in Chapter 599, but we can get a glimpse of her style. Under the flamboyant red clothes is a calm character and a delicate soul The tribulations of time did not bury her in the wind and sand But to have a more resilient nature of life "Fire tests gold, adversity tests the strong" Wen Suiyi, your innocent heart shines brighter in the dirt.

Nice! Real! I read a few chapters before, but I stopped reading because I wasn't very interested. But today I was bored and read it for a while, and then I couldn't stop reading the latest chapter. I can only say that the author is really good at writing, the plot setting is creative, the writing is not a novice, the characters are full, and there are still some foreshadowings that have not been completed. I am very much looking forward to the next plot!!!

It's very interesting, the subject matter and setting are novel, the characters are well-developed, the emotions between people are vivid, the background and plot are grand and logical, the timeline is relatively clear, there are also a lot of foreshadowings in the article, and some of the principles and concepts in the article are not only thought-provoking, but also touching the soul [Sending my heart] Come on, author! The writing is great, please update soon 😢

It's so beautiful. ❤️ The characters of Jiang Nan and Shang Gui are both very good. They are both such gentle people. Shen Zhengyi is both good and evil, making people love and hate him at the same time. The plot is so good, the emotional scenes are delicate, and the investment is not a loss. The writing is great. If you can write, write more. Come on, come on! ❤️

It's well written and quite mind-blowing, but sometimes I can't figure out the relationship between the characters. There are too many characters. Maybe it's because I read intermittently. The overall view of the whole book is very good. Compared with the male and female protagonists, each character in this book has its own highlights.