I Wanted to Practice Seriously, but the Beauty Was Too Alluring

It looks good, I hope the author can finish it

Although you are writing about the world of immortality where you and I are cheating, I don't think the villains you wrote are very smart. 😂😂

It's very interesting. I read the first part and listened to the second part. I used to fall asleep while listening to the book. The plot of this book is very compact. I listened to it in one breath the night before and couldn't fall asleep at 2 a. M. [Face covering]

It looks okay so far When I first saw the names of the two female protagonists' constitutions, I thought they were some kind of furnace constitution (I really don't like this constitution), but luckily it's just the Yinzi constitution of the elixir of life.

To be honest, as a new author, he is already quite good. The theme and idea structure are actually very good. I just need to strengthen the details, the logic and the writing style. Come on＾0＾~

It's just not bad [laughs evilly] It's just a little short.

The author can read "Online Game: Legend of Shura" before writing. It may be helpful to you.

The plot is natural, the protagonist has almost no desire to be a bitch, and the character creation is also very good. I look forward to the protagonist taking down all the masters and sisters [laughing]

It's beautiful, that's really beautiful.

Not bad. It looks good. I love watching Emperor Uncle.

Beautiful, so beautiful Beautiful, so beautiful

It's not bad. Master, I wish I could get it as soon as possible.

The early morning sunlight shines through the mist and onto the bluestone floor of the courtyard, leaving mottled light and shadow. The air is filled with the faint fragrance of grass and trees, and occasionally there are a few birds chirping, making it look particularly peaceful. Ye Qingqing, dressed in white outer disciple uniform, waved the iron sword in his hand in the open space. Her movements were not proficient, and her sword moves seemed a bit disorganized. It was obvious that she was still in the introductory stage. Despite this, she still practiced seriously, with beads of sweat on her forehead and a few strands of hair sticking to her cheeks, but it did not affect her concentration at all. (This fan setting is Ye Qingqing's special physique that was discovered only after he joined the inner sect to apprentice with Ye Yunqing. Otherwise, it would have been discovered during the entry test that he would have been captured by the old monster to refine elixirs) Ye Chen approached slowly, his steps were light and he didn't make any sound. He maintained a just right distance, which would not appear abrupt and allow Ye Qingqing to notice his presence inadvertently. As the distance got closer, Ye Chen began to look at Ye Qingqing carefully. Maybe it's because she hasn't bloomed yet, so her appearance is not stunning, but she is still pretty and pretty. A pair of bright eyes revealed a certain innocence, and the long eyelashes trembled slightly, like two small fans, gently brushing the cheeks. Her skin is fair and delicate, with a faint luster under the morning light, like fine suet jade. Perhaps because of the exercise she had just done, her cheeks were slightly red, making her even more delicate. Ye Chen's eyes moved down and landed on Ye Qingqing. Her figure is slender, but she does not look thin. Instead, she exudes the youthful vitality unique to a girl. Although the white outer disciple clothes were simple in style, they could not hide her beautiful figure. As she swung the sword, her sleeves swayed slightly, revealing a section of her white wrist. Her fingers are long and her nails are neatly manicured. It can be seen that she is a woman who pays attention to her appearance. The corners of Ye Chen's mouth raised slightly, revealing a gentle smile. He adjusted his breathing to make his voice sound more friendly and natural. "Junior sister, your swordsmanship is quite unique. Who did you learn from it?" His voice was not loud, but it reached Ye Qingqing's ears clearly. Ye Qingqing was startled when he heard the sound, and the sword moves in his hand suddenly stopped. She turned around and saw a man wearing a green robe standing not far away with a gentle smile on his face. The man has a handsome appearance, an outstanding temperament, and a pair of eyes as deep as a pool, as if he can see through people's hearts. Ye Qingqing had never seen such an outstanding man before, and was stunned for a moment. Her heartbeat speeded up unconsciously, and her cheeks became even more rosy. "Senior brother... Hello." Ye Qingqing's voice was a little nervous. She quickly put away the iron sword in her hand and saluted Ye Chen. "I... My name is Ye Qingqing, and I am a new outer disciple. My swordsmanship is... I learned it by myself. I don't have a master yet." Her voice became lower and lower, and she seemed a little embarrassed. Her eyes were evasive, not daring to look at Ye Chen, and her hands were twisted together unconsciously, showing her inner nervousness. Ye Chen smiled slightly and walked up to Ye Qingqing. The green Taoist robe on his body fluttered gently in the morning breeze, and the cloud patterns on the corners of the clothes were looming, which further highlighted his aloof temperament. He walked to and stood in front of Ye Qingqing, keeping a just right distance so that he would not appear too close and still allow her to feel his presence. His eyes were gentle and focused, as if he was listening carefully to Ye Qingqing's every word. "It turns out she is a new junior sister. No wonder her swordsmanship is still a little rusty." Ye Chen's voice was still gentle, with a hint of encouragement. "However, it's pretty good to be able to explore this far on my own." He paused and continued: "My name is Ye Chen, and I am also an outer disciple. If junior sister doesn't mind, we can learn from each other and make progress together." As he spoke, the corners of Ye Chen's mouth slightly raised, revealing a charming smile. His smile was just right, sincere but also mysteriously attractive. Ye Qingqing raised his head and glanced at Ye Chen, meeting his deep eyes. Her heartbeat quickened again and her cheeks grew hot. She had never seen such a handsome man, let alone been treated so tenderly by a man. For a moment, her mind went blank and she forgot how to answer. The morning breeze blew gently, lifting a few strands of hair on Ye Qingqing's forehead, and also blowing the corners of Ye Chen's clothes. There was silence in the courtyard, with only the sound of wind and distant birdsong. Ye Qingqing's eyes fell on Ye Chen's face and couldn't move away for a long time. His smile, his voice, and his eyes all made her feel an unprecedented attraction. There seemed to be a deer bumping around in her heart, making her both nervous and excited. Ye Chen looked at Ye Qingqing quietly without urging her to answer. He knew that his charm was beginning to work. He just had to wait, waiting for Ye Qingqing to fall into the trap he carefully weaved step by step. The corners of his mouth raised slightly, revealing a confident smile. Everything is under his control Ye Chen, the holy son of the Hehuan Sect, is good at the art of enchantment, and practices the Yin-Yang Mutual Economic Scripture of Hunyuan Qi Yin and Yang (Double cultivation with others can quickly improve one's own cultivation level. The higher the qualifications of the dual cultivation partner, the more significant the improvement effect.) Possessing a mind-controlling jade, it can confuse the mind and arouse lust. It is extremely effective when combined with the charm technique. The acacia bell is hung around the waist (it emits a breathtaking ringing sound when shaken). Now the disciple of the outer sect of Yaoguang Holy Land, his main purpose is to eliminate Ye Xuanlin. Go back a few days ago Ding! Just as Ye Chen was using the unique power of the Holy Son within the Hehuan Sect to provide guidance to dozens of young junior sisters who had newly joined the sect. Suddenly, a clear and sweet voice sounded in his mind. Then came a mechanical, emotionless, artificial voice. "Ding! I have noticed that the demon Ye Xuanlin from outside the world is about to awaken the system! Now issue a heavenly execution order for him." "Congratulations to the host Ye Chen for being favored by Heaven and getting the Heaven System. A gift package for newbies is now released. Can you open it immediately?" "Who is Ye Xuanlin, what is the system, and what is the novice gift package?" "Ding" "Ye Xuanlin is an extraterrestrial demon, and his origin galaxy is extremely powerful. If he is allowed to grow and ascended, he will consume a huge amount of blessings and source energy in this world and will not be able to receive feedback from the upper world. At that time, the coordinates of his own plane will be exposed within the sight of his home star. If the interface is swallowed, all living creatures in this world will be extinct and will never enter reincarnation.

I don't know why the score is so low. It's obviously very impressive.

Very interesting, looking forward to the next content

It's very good. It's very enjoyable to watch. I'm tired of watching other movies. Suddenly it feels good to watch something like this.

It's good to watch, the plot is good, but I just can't get enough of it. I hope the author will add more.

Come on! The writing is pretty good. The characters are all well created [please update]

Good luck to the author!

Good to watch, love to watch, support

Looks good, Alibaba likes it

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Base understands happiness

It looks good, I love watching it, come more [laughs evilly]

Mu Yong questions the good-looking ones

Very nice, why is the popularity so low?

Good, good, good, good, good