The Start Makes the School Beauty Cry, Kaleidoscope and You Are Mine

I don't understand why the score is so low. When I read a book, I usually don't read it if it scores less than eight points. But the type of this book is very suitable for me, and most of the reviews are positive, so I tried to read it. I felt that the score of the book written by the author was completely inconsistent. It is a very good book. The writing is quite interesting. The author also interacts with book friends. There is also a lot of suspense at the beginning. I don't know if I can make up for it. The heroine is not bad and she is not a drag. This book can be rated 8.5 In my heart. It is not even comparable to other books with the same rating as him, so work hard, author. I believe you can become popular [laughs]

The slight irritation at the front is not a big problem, but the description of details is a bit lacking. There are still a lot of pitfalls but there are not many small pitfalls. After all, it is a matter of enjoyable writing. If you are not smart, don't bring too much. After all, it is fun for you and everyone is happy. Ahem, cough, cough, the author still has to work hard!

The author needs to work harder on the fighting scenes. There is also the human emperor body part. If one person and one beast are unlocked, the later fighting will be a big weakness. It can be changed. I think you gave too many Bankai points in the first sentence of Chapter 142. In Chapter 143, those asymmetries The above are all personal opinions Come on, the author, maybe Kuo Yihuo [laughs] Just don't end it. I've seen a lot of these and a lot of them ended up being unfinished. The Su family and the Xiao family are about to disappear. Is it because the author is [something] and the Li family?

The author is so active, almost every comment can be seen

Not bad, although there are still some flaws, is there any divine power behind it?

Not bad, but I'm fine where did the magic go?

[Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] Come on, seeing as you are a novice author, don't care, five stars [Chigua]

It looks good, I love watching it, I smiled while watching it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Rich and colorful content

Author, you are working too hard! ! ! !

Not bad, pretty good-looking

The ultra-dreamous text organization outlines the literary comics of the dream era, providing readers with a dreamlike visual feast!

I just finished reading The Knife and read some cool articles to change my mood.

Although I feel the writing is not good at the beginning, the writing at the end is very good. This is just a personal feeling.

The author himself is very nice, and he will reply when he sees the comments, which is very interesting. 🌚

The author, I love you. You wrote things that I never dared to think of. You really help us Naruto players realize their dreams! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's still pretty good-looking, but the writing style is a bit lacking. The author will continue to work hard.

A very nice book that makes you forget to leave

The plot is novel and the creation is clear. I hope the author will continue his efforts.

It's pretty good to watch, but the heroine's presence may not be fully reflected because of the small number of words.

Second brush, some parts are wonderfully written and attractive enough.

Love reading, please keep writing, author

Come on😊! Very well written! [Praise]

It's really good and cool

It feels pretty good

The plot is good, very interesting

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking

It's such a good-looking book but it doesn't get a high score. What's going on with Tomato?

After reading more than 180 chapters, I saw the author of Cthulhu, Lao Zhanshen [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

I really like novels written by villagers