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It's great that there are girls with light-sounding who give it five stars no matter how good or bad the writing is, and they haven't joined Yukinoshita's club yet.

The plot is quite satisfactory, the emotional line is okay, and the relationship with the heroines is well handled. However, judging from the current plot, "multi-heroine" is indeed multiple heroines, and the rain and dew are equally affected, but there is only one person who has truly established the relationship. It may be like "Fifth Bride" and you will only choose to be with one person in the end. The author's writing of the protagonist and the sword may also be hinting at this plot. The protagonist kills his readers, and the author kills us. Halfway through writing, the author was kicked out of the studio. This book can be said to be a eunuch. After 120 chapters, the author was changed. Multiple female protagonists, Wen Qiang, was replaced by a single female protagonist. The male protagonist changed his mind from now on. Please read with caution.

It has been updated and the word count is now small, so I don't have any recommendations. But there is no other way. After 100,000 words, it will become popular if it starts to be recommended. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] Come on, author, don't give up! It really won't work after changing people.

Good review, Qingyin Girl, the icing on the cake in daily life, just don't have any bitterness or hatred later [smile]

The full score is 120. Before, the plan was to have a harem, but after changing the author, some readers in the comment section said that it was forced to have a single female protagonist. [Thinking] A single female protagonist in a comprehensive comic? Why do I watch comics? That's why [face covering] The single heroine of the variety comic accepts the studio and dares to think about it

These five stars are for the big brother in the first half. The serious plot is very interesting. This is for the sequel. I have already moved to my grandma's house. The more I watch, the more boring I become. All that's left is to pick up girls.

So far it feels very good, but I still can't figure out who the heroine is? Are there any book friends who know about it? Go high and low, things were fine in the front, but I couldn't stand it after agreeing to Shiyu's confession (personal feeling). He had obviously agreed to date Shiyu, and he said he wanted to be single-minded, but he still continued to have affairs with other girls. Neither refuse nor agree, the main theme is one-sided, and I read this book as if it had a single heroine (the heroine is a little golden retriever)... Now I can't stand it anymore, so I'm leaving, I'm leaving

Can watch It's really good. The beginning is similar to a normal manga, but it just sets the stage, and then the writing is different. The writing style can be said to be top-notch among mangas, and the plot is quite comfortable to read.

It is indeed a very classic manga, and I don't feel it has any bad points at the moment. If I want to continue writing later, it will depend on the description of events and the further shaping of the relationship between the characters. Most of the ones I read before were sent because they were messed up as I wrote them (because they were daily and had no main thread).

As long as it doesn't collapse later, it will definitely be a masterpiece among light novels. I hope the ending of the author's book will be a harem-style ending that includes everything or an open ending that doesn't include everything.

This is a rare comprehensive manga copybook (although I don't know why copywriting makes me depressed), but apart from a few typos, it is also very interesting.

Not bad, the writing is smooth, even a picky person like me can read it, come on

So far it seems to be very good. I can draw lessons from previous life novels. Just read the previous words. The main character came to Neon because he had an inextricable relationship with his parents. He is not dead. I hope the author can handle it well. Otherwise, if the main character gets rich in the future, his parents will come over and give us a disgusting quote, or it would be best not to arrange for his parents to appear. You can read Chapter 272 first. I'm not sure whether to follow it or not. The protagonist is a writer of novels, and then he goes to play chess. In the end, he becomes a Japanese teacher, and he kneels down to worship him. I have nothing to say.

This book is better among other books of the same type. I just don't know why so few people watch it. It may be that there are too many similar themes, or it may be that the themes are no longer popular. All in all, I think this book is quite good.

It's very beautiful, very easy to read, the writing is also very good, and the content is coherent, but it's just a bit unreadable. Come on, keep updating! Also, don't stop updating! ! ! Will always support. Totally not enough [crying][crying][crying]

It's good-looking, ordinary daily life, warm and relaxing, but it's okay to have more female protagonists, but not too many, otherwise the emotional lines will be a mess, and I feel that the rating will drop ([please update] I will update the book soon.)

It's good to read. I found another good book. I'm so happy [laughing][laughing]

It's rare to see this kind of comprehensive comic on Tomato. After all, we all know that Tomato is not friendly to newcomers. I hope the author can stick to it. This book is very good. As long as the next book doesn't collapse, that's fine

Comprehensive comics belong to the first echelon in Tomato. The rhythm is just right, and the emotional portrayal is also very delicate. Each cartoon character is very full and not brainless. At present, it is almost non-toxic. I hope the author will do more and keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like]

It's so pretty! This is what a comprehensive comic novel should be like! Really good looking! How many years have passed since then? I still remember reading novels such as The Girl's Great Summoning, and watching anime and playing games adapted from the anime! Sometimes I also fantasize that this novel can be said to satisfy my love for comprehensive comics. It is really good. Come on, author, come on! I'll keep watching! Sparasi! The author, I sincerely hope that you can reach seven or eight hundred chapters and finish one thousand chapters, that would be the best! Really good! It's been a long time since I've seen a novel like this, so I'm quite emotional! Come on, author, [like][like][like] By the way, I forgot to mention that there are not enough chapters to watch. Really, more chapters should be more enjoyable for all of us to read [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I generally read it for many hours before commenting. The overall impression is very good, the logic is strict, there are no trial loopholes, no character flaws, and no character collapse. It has surpassed 90% of similar writers in anime. The whole text uses Wenzhao Gong as the main line, and then distributes the branch lines of each character. To be honest, the connection is very good. If we comment on the characters, the biggest highlight is that the character design has not collapsed. The protagonist's personality is closer to the public. As a harem stream, it doesn't hurt. As far as my personal feelings are concerned, I prefer single female protagonists. I was originally trading stocks, but I didn't expect Hou Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu to directly take the initiative. It really made me a little unable to cope with it for a while. After all, I was trading in Daiwei stocks. There is one thing that I have always felt unclear about. From a comprehensive perspective, the protagonist should be a relatively professional character. After the first heroine confessed, I couldn't imagine how he would enhance the relationship with other heroines and establish a relationship, because neither your original anime character nor the protagonist's character set by the author would accept the harem flow. Does the author want to write a bunch of losers? If there are a bunch of losers, many readers may (ꐦÒ‸Ó). If it is a harem style, it may lead to the collapse of the character. I really want to know how the author solves this problem.

The biggest difficulty in merging the worlds of comics and comics is the rationalization and filling in the pits in the later stage. After all, it is an everyday world. So far, I think the plot is okay, but I am afraid that it will not end well because of too many fusions, so please work hard, author!

It's very beautiful. Compared with other novels, this is very good. So far, this novel is great. If you are used to watching other types of movies, it's nice to watch this one to relax.

I think this is the best book about Qingyin written by Tomato. It is not just for these people. Here, I feel that everyone is no different from the ones in the anime. It may also be because the author's writing is good and he spends a lot of pen and ink, but it is undeniable that the author really wrote that feeling! I hope the author can continue his efforts and his works will definitely get better and better. I will support you no matter when

It's a very nice comprehensive comic, but it was criticized by others before and the rating was downgraded. Otherwise, it could be better. Career and love are balanced, there are many female characters but not cluttered, and they are not stallions. Only two female protagonists have been confirmed at present. The emotional description is delicate, and both those who watch the movie and those who don't watch the movie can eat it with confidence. Highly recommended! ! !

A very good book, it does not incorporate supernatural animations, it is just a very daily and warm novel. The highlight of this book is mainly that it handles emotions well. It does not have the so-called love at first sight like a time traveler, and then sticks to it. It is a novel with a very comfortable pace, not hurried or impatient and feels soothing. Highly recommended.

The story is told smoothly and not laggy, but it fails to leave a deep impact on the readers. All in all, it can be considered a good article and worth reading. I would rate it 9 points. Also, the author is quite miserable. If you are interested, you can support me [face covering]

🎉Awesome two-dimensional fan fiction! · 📚First of all, the author's writing style is really amazing! The words are precise, the sentences are fluent, and the scenes and characters depicted are so lifelike that they seem to be standing right in front of you. The plot is also very attractive. The plot has ups and downs, is exciting, and makes people want to stop. · 🎨From character description to world view setting, they are all full of the author's ingenuity and innovation. The characters are distinct and have different personalities, making them unforgettable. The world view setting is also very unique. It has shadows of reality and is full of fantasy colors, making people immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. 👍Overall, this is a very good two-dimensional fan novel. Whether it is writing, plot, characterization or music, they have all reached a very high level. Highly recommended to everyone! - 🎁Finally, thank you very much to the author for bringing us such a wonderful work. Let's immerse ourselves in this fantasy world together!

It's pretty good, especially——" Wei: I'm the only one [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] From some readers' comments, it seems that the author has been replaced? It feels poisonous in the back

So far it looks pretty good. The progression of the plot is also okay. Unlike the other one I saw before, which was also about depression novels, the progress there was too slow. I only wrote two books with 200 pages, and there were too many branches in the middle. It was originally written with the title of a healing novel, but I only wrote two books with 200 pages. It felt a bit wrong. This book is very well written and I hope the author can continue to write it. Come on [blowing kiss]