Dragon Clan: the Boy Holding a Sword

The perspective of Shuangwen complements Jiangnan's sword. The plot design is very consistent with my idea of ​​he, but it also loses the dragon clan's focus on youth. At the same time, some of the original settings and personalities of the characters are slightly different, resulting in occasional dramas during the reading process. However, the author has a good understanding of some pitfalls in the original text, and has made bold innovations while continuing the plot of the original work. It is undeniable that the author's colleagues have made shortcomings for the regret of the Dragon Clan. Resetting the Jiangnan Old Thief's Knife is a great new book. I hope the author can maintain his expectations and yearning for beauty and continue to bring more and better works.

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful. What does Jiang Nan know? This is the original work. Jiang Nan is just a fanfic writer. This is Long Liu! The author should be careful not to let Jiang Nan copy it.

The writing is good, it's the best Dragon Clan fanfic I've ever read. How about you get back the copyright that Jiangnan owes you?

The same evaluation as the predecessors [sending heartfelt wishes] "Not the best, but the most enjoyable Dragon Clan fan." I was wrong. I only realized how good this one is after reading other Dragon Clan fanfics in the past few days [crying] True God.

It fills my mind hard, and the writing style is considered to be the best in Tomato. The storyline and characterization after time travel are good, at least there is no OOC. Come on, author, if you continue to update, I will continue to read!

It's really good. The writing style is very similar to Jiangnan, but the plot is not much better than Jiangnan's CS. I hope it can become popular and provide more motivation for the author.

The writing style has a Jiangnan flavor, and it feels like I'm back to the days when I secretly watched the Dragon Clan below during class. What's more important is that I have made up for all the regrets I had at the beginning. This is something I have always fantasized about when watching Dragons [Shy] Although the author has his own understanding of the dragon worldview, the details are not handled well enough and are somewhat flawed. But overall it's pretty good [eating melon]

How should I put it? It's an excellent fanfic, the second one among the many I've read. The first one is Reincarnation. The writing is excellent, the characters are perfect, and the completion of some settings is also wonderful. The only thing missing is that some of the plots are rushed and not as complete as the other one. Maybe that one is still a bit People are not saved, but leaving is very logical, and it is the choice those people would make. There are also small daily routines interspersed in it, as well as the last three weddings (Xia Mi briefly mentioned it in one sentence). The description is spot-on. There are some missing parts in these daily routines. Other than that, it is perfect and worth reading.

I hope the author can maintain this quality and update it. It can be seen that the writing style is not outstanding but it is surprisingly comfortable to read. By directly skipping some of the more repetitive plots, such as the chapters at the aunt's house that the original text describes in a large amount of space that do not affect the plot, it can make the original party very comfortable to read. If you persist and write a few more popular fan fiction and original cover books to accumulate experience, if you are lucky, you can write articles for a living. Come on.

Every character is very good, even Nono is well written, because most of the fanfics I have read make it difficult to describe Nono, although Jiangnan also ruined Nono's writing.

Chu Xia is awesome😡😡Chu Xia is awesome😡😡It's so beautiful. I wish the author will break through 100,000 people soon, and wait for 100,000 people! Wenyuan 😰 There are 100,000 Wu troops outside the city 😱😱 You 😱 actually want to attack 🤯🤯 The situation is broken here 😠 This is the opportunity to attack 🤓 The Wu army has just arrived from the expedition 🤔 The camp has not been organized yet 😎 The soldiers were exhausted😎Sun Quan was arrogant and careless🤪The key points of the Chinese army were exposed🤣🤣Yes😁😁😂😂Jiangdong is not good at land warfare🤣These camps and defenses are in vain😝✊I I want to lead 800 knights👉 to penetrate Sun Quan's heart👊to destroy his arrogance🥶Strengthen my army's morale😡😡Okay🤜🤛Wen Yuan charges though😸I will protect you🤓hehe Haha🤓🤓This plan works🤜🤛Hahahaha😁😁😁Let us kill each other😝😝😝😝No need to say anything today😤😤😤It's just a battle🤓🤓🤓

This is really awesome, I won't brag about it. There are no big problems with the plot, just some minor problems that don't have much impact. It also fills in the holes that the old thief didn't fill in with reasonable methods (so when will Dragon King II be released? 😡) It's great, kids.

It's a very good Dragon Clan story. The plot is relaxed and relaxed to make up for the regrets. However, the later setting is quite different from the Dragon Clan setting and there are some bugs. It is clearly stated in the original work that Odin is the Dragon King. During the Battle of the Far North, Macallan turned into Odin in front of Jormungandr and Chu Zihang. If Odin is really a god, then his monsters should be heroic spirits, not deadpools corrupted by dragon blood. In short, there is no reasonable explanation in the original work that Odin's heroic spirit is actually a puppet controlled by the dragon king with dragon blood. In addition, Odin is a god, which indeed explains why he pursues Nuonuo, but why he pursues the Chu family and his son is omitted. I remember that the original book said that Odin wanted the suitcase in Chu Tianjiao's hand. Later, some people speculated that the suitcase might be the ocean. The blood and bones of the King of Water (the Dragon King who died the most shameful death was killed by the Camarilla cannon), and then Odin gained partial power over the ocean and water, which echoes this part of the plot. Although these are also speculations, they are at least a more reasonable explanation. The setting that Odin is a god is difficult to explain... Assuming that the suitcase is really a dragon bone cross, what is Odin going to do? Keep it yourself? If it weren't for the Dragon Bone Cross, I wouldn't understand why Odin was so crazy and insisted on attacking Chu Tianjiao. It was obvious that Chu Zihang was cocooned by Jermunga? Want to strangle? That's not right! Jörmungandr's body is not dead yet. Just kill the cocoon and not alert the snake. Wait, there are still some problems with Angers' blood, and they may have been cocooned by the Dragon King. Odin is the fused form of the twin kings of sky and wind, similar to Hela, the king of earth and mountains. These interesting things disappeared with the setting that Odin is a god (you can see that I have a lot of objections to this private setting... Hehe) Finally, I would like to praise this book. The author has a very detailed grasp of the original characters. There is little or no OOC. I feel so comfortable when Lu Mingfei continues to pursue the senior sister. Right, this is Lu Mingfei. If he can really let go of the senior sister, that will be Lu Mingfei's biggest OOC. In addition, this book has been completed and everyone is welcome to read it. It is worth reading to make up for the regrets.

After reading Dragon 5, I read this Dragon 5 fanfic. To be honest, I feel that the writing is quite good. However, after Lu Mingfei was reopened, the other characters were somewhat broken. I felt that the IQ of other characters was described too low, and even the unreasonable parts were ignored. Those old guys in Kassel Academy are all human beings, and Fingel is not really stupid. , I feel that the front part is a bit deliberate and some of the logic is wasted. It's a bit annoying, but it's still pretty good among Dragon Clan fandom [exploration]

Although not many people have read it, it is really well written. Every regret has been made up for with almost no danger. The writing style is also very Jiangnan style. But author, you haven't updated for a week. Don't stop updating.

The writing is very good, just like the first three books of Lao Zai. I hope the author will practice more and strive to catch up with Lao Zai and surpass Lao Zai. (You just must not imitate him and stop updating)

It's so good to watch, dragon fans are ecstatic about WC, but I don't know if there is a knife in the back, but Eri Yi is alive, this is the original work

I found it in the afternoon and watched it in a few hours. It really made up for the Dragon Clan I watched when I was young. The weak Mingfei saved everything. I was very happy to watch it. I gave it a 4.9 Out of 5 points, and 0.1 For Ye Sheng and Aki. It was also a small regret for me at the time. Anyway, I highly recommend it!

It's really, really good. Natsumi, Eri, Old Tang... Made up for a lot of regrets. The plot didn't collapse, the characters didn't have OOC, and the characters' IQs were always online. I really still like happy endings...

This is not only a Dragon Clan fanfic, but also a grand redemption dedicated to all the regrets of youth. You can see the ingenuity and love that the author put into his pen - he perfectly inherited the writing style of Jiangnan Shaizai, integrated the structural logic of contemporary online articles, and personally reconstructed a Happy Ending for everyone in a world full of knives. Time passes and youth never grows old. This book is a tribute to everyone who has shed tears for Kassel College and for those of you who have been unable to sleep at night. This time, we have no regrets.

Looks good! As long as you, the author, give the order, we will immediately support you as the new Jiangnan [sending our hearts] [sending our hearts]

I highly recommend watching it. The ending is very happy, but the plot pace is too fast. If it were not a newly released extra episode, the rating may be lower. Moreover, it also lacks Mai Shutoku and Su Enxi. These two people are very necessary to appear, at least for me. Generally speaking, it is not bad.

I've finished reading it... I just happened to have finished updating the third volume. I wonder if I feel happy after reading it? ? But it's still hard to say, it feels too Jiangnan... It really feels too Jiangnan... The perfect ending, in which none of Shai Zai's friends really wanted to die, and made up for all the regrets (except Ye Sheng's pair). It was so perfect that after reading the third volume, I really couldn't regard this book as a fanfic. I really thought in my heart that he was the sequel to Dragon Clan. The language and text were so similar that I couldn't tell them apart! The words spoken by each character are also perfectly portrayed. I really wonder if the author is the trumpet of an old gangster from Jiangnan. The imitation... Is too similar. This time, the bad boy in the world is finally handsome. Every bad word in the book made me see the bad boy. The little monster is still there, and the senior sister has also survived. What surprised me the most is the author's addition and arrangement of the settings, such as the mysterious identity of the senior sister (I will not spoil it), and the fact that I borrowed the abilities of my classmates in school. After reading the novel, I also chatted with my classmates for a long time about the regrets of the dragon clan and the pit they dug. At the time of "Mo Tong", I also felt that the identity of the senior sister was written in the book. This was in line with my reasoning after reading the book (in fact, I also thought that Lu Mingze might be the Black King and the Black King's will), and the world view was very good. I really like this book (I still don't want to regard it as a fanfic). I hope I can write more in the future. Can I write about the daily warm moments on the timeline [laughs] Highly recommended! Urgent update! Perfect... The ending is perfect I just want to ask Jiang Nan, do you have any courage to write a sequel?

It's pretty good. I guess it's because it's not popular, so the rating is low. There are some settings in it that don't match the original. Maybe it's because the version I watched is different. At the same time, I also feel that everyone's characters have changed a bit.

Among Tomato's Dragon Clan fanfics, it's the best I've ever seen. Personally, I like it. I hope it can be finished! !

How shameless. I can only comment on the original work that Jiangnan and Herzog locked up. But the fanfic is really good-looking

It makes up for a lot of things, I won't say more, you can understand everything, the characters are very distinct, and the upper and lower connections are not contradictory. @Why not do it

The writing is very good, the logic is clear, and it is very good to make up for regrets. For those of us who like to read this kind of books, in addition to being unable to deal with the regrets in the book during our youth, we also fantasize about making up for our own regrets.

It's so perfect. It's so refreshing to watch. There's a feeling of emptiness being filled. This kind of Lu Mingfei is exactly what I imagined. However, things have changed a bit since the collaboration, but the writing in the early stage is really good.

It makes up for all the regrets of the Dragon Clan. Regardless of the writing style, I like the concept of humans and dragons coexisting without waiting for death. I don't like other Dragon Clan fans either because of the timing. Some started writing at Lu Ling's Black Swan Port, and some started writing at the original ordinary high school. This timing is just right. Either I just want to write a pair of CPs so that the regrets of the original book are not made up, or the make-up is too slow. This book directly puts forward the concept and makes up for the regrets in various places. Some of the writing and sentences in the book are slightly like Jiangnan, where the power of the dragon is fully displayed, and the blood of any king will end with the sword!