Aotu World: Twin Children of the Leijia Star

Finished spreading flowers! Looking forward to the new book! It's really super good-looking, the characters are well created, and I really cried to death at the two endings. The interaction between Lei Yi and Lei Shi was really both upsetting and tearful. Lei Yi, as a child who lived in an extremely cold-blooded family in his previous life, did not feel family and affection in the so-called "home" place. The so-called family brought him endless use and endless darkness. The abyss is filled with bloodlust and ruthlessness. He can only survive on his own. God gave this child a chance. While getting along with Lei Wangxing's family, he felt care, love and companionship. Especially the brother Lei Shi. Their presence made him feel the true meaning of "relatives". But at the same time, just like what YT said. "From the beginning, it was a redemption story between them." With the special existence of Lei Yi, the relationship between Lei Shi and his family is not as bad as in the main drama. At least, you can really tell they care about each other. Instead of falling apart like in the main drama. "No matter what decision you make, Lei Yi or Brayton will stand behind you." This is a sentence that I personally like very much, Just like Lei Yi said, he stood behind Lei Shi from beginning to end. ... Until death. Lei Yi's ending is regrettable, but judging from his actions, he is relieved and satisfied with his ending. It can be seen from the way he was shaped by Dada, Lei Yi is a person full of contradictions. He was always patient and gentle towards his own people. He kept his word, but only because he was unwilling and disdainful to go back on his word. Like Lei Shi, he has unyielding pride and unyielding pride. He will kill all the traitors and leave a glimmer of hope for Palos. Although the cost is himself. Lei Yi scorned Palos' atonement, so he chose to let Palos live and continue to pay for his sins. He is calm yet ruthless, ambitious yet compassionate. The above is my personal evaluation and understanding of the character Lei Yi. No matter what others say, the person who knows him best is the person who created him. @UserYT So if there is something wrong, it is mainly due to the big settings. I believe from beginning to end that the fictional characters in these books are really living in another world far, far away from us. The twins' story may be over, but theirs is not. Love can transcend long distances. We will meet one day. No matter where it is.

The writing is very good, and the emotional description is also very good. There is no ooc plot, which is good! (Lest you see the OOC plot and withdraw from the bookshelf on the spot) It also adds some settings that are not mentioned in the main drama, and also integrates some characters and their respective settings mentioned in the comics [Qiu defeated World of Warcraft, gained points, and improved the level], the concave and convex mobile game [Thunder King's Ancestral Hide and Seek Climbing Chandelier], and the Light-Seeking Journey [Yin Jue Yuanli Line Character - Xiao Naer]. You can also make more references later and fuse these lines together to write, although it will be more difficult... Hhh The competition chapter (after all, the main drama has not finished telling all the plot of the competition until the fourth season) is undoubtedly very long, but I am looking forward to the follow-up plot (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ Regarding this book, it is not just a single time traveler like in other novels. This point is actually quite novel (after all, some concave and convex fan novels are basically about traveling alone, most of which are soul transfers). There are very few large-scale soul travels like that (it can't be considered a large-scale soul travel, but I don't know how to describe it) Brayton Ray, the character creation described by the author has already taken shape. More details about the settings and character plots will depend on the subsequent plot additions. The author has written very well. This is the first book written by Tomato, and he has already skipped the common OOC and messy descriptions. (Not specifically targeting any authors) Come on, look forward to subsequent updates≧∇≦!

There are many good sentences in this book, and the writing is very beautiful, not harsh at all. Please believe me, and the writing is very good. The author's writing style is also very good. There are many good sentences in a few chapters, and the author (or she, because I don't know the author's gender) is very gentle and gentle. What's more, the writing in it has a somewhat real feeling, which makes people feel more immersed, and from time to time. Extras, extras will also make people feel good \(//∇//)\, and it can also make people's writing better and better at writing. Anyway, I really like this book. Among the many convex articles I have read, this book is one that I feel is pretty good (≧∇≦*), so if you are interested, you can also read this book. It is easy to understand, not complicated, and has explanations. I also like the protagonist in it.

It's really great and well written. It's really special among millions of books. I hope it will be updated soon. It's not enough!!

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

So pretty! Dear author, keep up the good work! 🥳🥳

Very nice author! The plot is also very good, I like it very much! It's just... I really can't accept it. There are other time travelers... Two books. Counting the author, there are two books in total! (๑óò๑) So I'm sorry... (๑óò๑)

The characters are very well portrayed, and Lei Yi's character of only caring about the people or things he cares about is well nailed by the author. Other characters do not have OOC, and there are a lot of foreshadowings in the article. For example, in Chapter 45, Lei Yi said, "With the stars as my witness, I, Lei Yi, swear here that if I can come back before ten o'clock in the evening, I will definitely come back before ten o'clock in the evening. If there are other itineraries, I will report my itinerary and coordinates to Lei Shi in time." This sentence appeared in "The Fall. IV". There are a lot of foreshadowings that I won't comment on here.

The characters are well grasped, and they caught up with me even though I was a quitter. I really like this kind of plot. It is non-judgmental, free of jokes and stereotypes, and everyone is taken care of. The overall impression it gives me is really good. I hope the writing will get better and better. I started to stir things up - I entered the bump pit in 19 years and retired from the bump pit in 22 years. As the bump popularity became more and more known to more people, the circle was really chaotic for me at that time. I joked without any scruples. The nickname joke always said that I quit completely. . I was so cruel that I quit mobile games, and it was really good to keep them for almost two years. In fact, my mobile game friends were either hundreds of days ago or a long time ago before I broke out of the cocoon. When I looked at those people, I thought I would never give up, but I still quit. Hh At that time, most of the fandoms were fan fiction, not to mention those who were obsessed with CP, and they were so chaotic that they jumped off the wall. But even though I quit, I still praise √ This is the first fanfic I've read since I quit. I'll pay for it first, and everyone can do whatever they want with the rest.

It's good to watch, and it can be regarded as a top-notch fanfic. The whole book contains a lot of knife content, and the ending is BE 😢 (the academy chapter can't save the heart that was hurt by the knife). In addition, it smashes the twin setting and raises the banner of orthopedics!