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Finished spreading flowers! Looking forward to the new book! It's really super good-looking, the characters are well created, and I really cried to death at the two endings. The interaction between Lei Yi and Lei Shi was really both upsetting and tearful. Lei Yi, as a child who lived in an extremely cold-blooded family in his previous life, did not feel family and affection in the so-called "home" place. The so-called family brought him endless use and endless darkness. The abyss is filled with bloodlust and ruthlessness. He can only survive on his own. God gave this child a chance. While getting along with Lei Wangxing's family, he felt care, love and companionship. Especially the brother Lei Shi. Their presence made him feel the true meaning of "relatives". But at the same time, just like what YT said. "From the beginning, it was a redemption story between them." With the special existence of Lei Yi, the relationship between Lei Shi and his family is not as bad as in the main drama. At least, you can really tell they care about each other. Instead of falling apart like in the main drama. … "No matter what decision you make, Lei Yi or Brayton will stand behind you." This is a sentence that I personally like very much, Just like Lei Yi said, he stood behind Lei Shi from beginning to end. ... Until death. Lei Yi's ending is regrettable, but judging from his actions, he is relieved and satisfied with his ending. It can be seen from the way he was shaped by Dada, Lei Yi is a person full of contradictions. He was always patient and gentle towards his own people. He kept his word, but only because he was unwilling and disdainful to go back on his word. Like Lei Shi, he has unyielding pride and unyielding pride. He will kill all the traitors and leave a glimmer of hope for Palos. Although the cost is himself. Lei Yi scorned Palos' atonement, so he chose to let Palos live and continue to pay for his sins. He is calm yet ruthless, ambitious yet compassionate. The above is my personal evaluation and understanding of the character Lei Yi. No matter what others say, the person who knows him best is the person who created him. @UserYT So if there is something wrong, it is mainly due to the big settings. … I believe from beginning to end that the fictional characters in these books are really living in another world far, far away from us. The twins' story may be over, but theirs is not. Love can transcend long distances. We will meet one day. No matter where it is.

The writing is very good, and the emotional description is also very good. There is no ooc plot, which is good! (Lest you see the OOC plot and withdraw from the bookshelf on the spot) It also adds some settings that are not mentioned in the main drama, and also integrates some characters and their respective settings mentioned in the comics [Qiu defeated World of Warcraft, gained points, and improved the level], the concave and convex mobile game [Thunder King's Ancestral Hide and Seek Climbing Chandelier], and the Light-Seeking Journey [Yin Jue Yuanli Line Character - Xiao Naer]. You can also make more references later and fuse these lines together to write, although it will be more difficult... Hhh The competition chapter (after all, the main drama has not finished telling all the plot of the competition until the fourth season) is undoubtedly very long, but I am looking forward to the follow-up plot (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ Regarding this book, it is not just a single time traveler like in other novels. This point is actually quite novel (after all, some concave and convex fan novels are basically about traveling alone, most of which are soul transfers). There are very few large-scale soul travels like that (it can't be considered a large-scale soul travel, but I don't know how to describe it) Brayton Ray, the character creation described by the author has already taken shape. More details about the settings and character plots will depend on the subsequent plot additions. The author has written very well. This is the first book written by Tomato, and he has already skipped the common OOC and messy descriptions. (Not specifically targeting any authors) Come on, look forward to subsequent updates≧∇≦!

There are many good sentences in this book, and the writing is very beautiful, not harsh at all. Please believe me, and the writing is very good. The author's writing style is also very good. There are many good sentences in a few chapters, and the author (or she, because I don't know the author's gender) is very gentle and gentle. What's more, the writing in it has a somewhat real feeling, which makes people feel more immersed, and from time to time. Extras, extras will also make people feel good \(//∇//)\, and it can also make people's writing better and better at writing. Anyway, I really like this book. Among the many convex articles I have read, this book is one that I feel is pretty good (≧∇≦*), so if you are interested, you can also read this book. It is easy to understand, not complicated, and has explanations. I also like the protagonist in it.

It's really great and well written. It's really special among millions of books. I hope it will be updated soon. It's not enough! !

So pretty! Dear author, keep up the good work! 🥳🥳

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

Very nice author! The plot is also very good, I like it very much! It's just... I really can't accept it. There are other time travelers... Two books. Counting the author, there are two books in total! (๑óò๑) So I'm sorry... (๑óò๑)

The characters are very well portrayed, and Lei Yi's character of only caring about the people or things he cares about is well nailed by the author. Other characters do not have OOC, and there are a lot of foreshadowings in the article. For example, in Chapter 45, Lei Yi said, "With the stars as my witness, I, Lei Yi, swear here that if I can come back before ten o'clock in the evening, I will definitely come back before ten o'clock in the evening. If there are other itineraries, I will report my itinerary and coordinates to Lei Shi in time." This sentence appeared in "The Fall. IV". There are a lot of foreshadowings that I won't comment on here.

The characters are well grasped, and they caught up with me even though I was a quitter. I really like this kind of plot. It is non-judgmental, free of jokes and stereotypes, and everyone is taken care of. The overall impression it gives me is really good. I hope the writing will get better and better. I started to stir things up - I entered the bump pit in 19 years and retired from the bump pit in 22 years. As the bump popularity became more and more known to more people, the circle was really chaotic for me at that time. I joked without any scruples. The nickname joke always said that I quit completely. . I was so cruel that I quit mobile games, and it was really good to keep them for almost two years. In fact, my mobile game friends were either hundreds of days ago or a long time ago before I broke out of the cocoon. When I looked at those people, I thought I would never give up, but I still quit. Hh At that time, most of the fandoms were fan fiction, not to mention those who were obsessed with CP, and they were so chaotic that they jumped off the wall. But even though I quit, I still praise √ This is the first fanfic I've read since I quit. I'll pay for it first, and everyone can do whatever they want with the rest.

It's very interesting. It's been a long time since I've found such interesting embossed articles. I've been reading the same articles over and over again. I hope the author will update them soon [laughs] @

Come on, Da Da, I especially like books written in Da Da. Everyone's writing is not OOC at all, it's very beautiful and very enjoyable. Lei Yi's character is completely complementary to Lei Shi's. It can be said that the writing is very high-quality. Very, very good to watch. I really like Lei Yi. In my mind, Da Da Da is the most powerful.

It's good to watch, and it can be regarded as a top-notch fanfic. The whole book contains a lot of knife content, and the ending is BE [crying] (the academy chapter can't save the heart that was hurt by the knife). In addition, it smashes the twin setting and raises the banner of orthopedics!

This article is almost the best embossed article I have ever seen! ! (Convinced) (The following is my evaluation of this book, just my personal opinion.) My points in the article are as follows: 1: The author's writing style is brisk and bright, without any feeling of being too draggy, and the look and feel is great! 2: The characterization is very distinct. It is obvious that the author has a good grasp of the character design, and there is no OOC feeling. 3: The author has a complete grasp of the overall world view and style of Aoyu, and there is also a sense of humor. (After all, no knife means no soul, right? [Laughing]) 4: The author will publish some extras, and the quality is very good! ! (I can guarantee this, the author's extras will definitely not disappoint you!!) 5: If readers point out problems, the author will revise them in time. And there is a lot of interaction between readers and authors. The above is my personal opinion on this article, to summarize... Great author! ! ! I love you! ! ! (Hoarse

It's exciting and logical. Compared with other Guan Yitu World, this one is superior.

What a lovely book! ! Because of this book, I have fallen in love with Gemini. I can't find anything similar [crying]. Overall, it's very good! Actually, I'd rather watch the extra episode where Lei Yi travels to the original world. I don't know why, but I really like tit-for-tat! I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, Lei Shi and Lei Yi are a match made in heaven~ If this is the ending... [I'm about to cry] Unexpected but expected, I knew there would be a plot to save Palos, I also knew the protagonist would be gay, but I didn't expect a soul exchange. It's the first time the teacher has written an article so well. He's the top pick! Already included in the best-looking list!

Very nice! ! ! ! How should I put it? It describes the complexity of Lei Yi's heart. Because of the family in his previous life, he wanted to make the family relationship stronger in this life, but he had to break up for some reason, but it is still really good-looking! ! ! I'm a bit picky, but this article really made me pick it up at a glance.

I accidentally came across this book when I was looking for a book at the beginning, and I came in. The writing is very good, and the character description is also very good. To be honest, when it first appeared that there were a hundred souls, I thought it was a fight between a hundred souls. The one who won in the end could make his own wish. After all, this idea is very reasonable in the worldview of the concave and convex world. Later I discovered that my ideas were very different. Not a fight but a redemption Select a hundred numb souls and let them set a goal to reach in a new world with a new appearance, new personality, new memories, and new memories, and work hard for this goal. Re-plant the seeds of numbness and let them bloom and bear fruit. The system is the gardener who helps them grow. The story here is not over yet, I wish the protagonist can enjoy his new life well Our spying ends here.

Book: No CP, fast-paced, more daily life, male protagonist, no female protagonist, systematic, soul-piercing, not embarrassing or OOC (personal opinion). The protagonist of this article is very good, with a good personality and good looks. The author of this article is also very good, with good writing style and good ideas. Everything is good. It can be typed much better than books of the same type (personal opinion. Congratulations, you have surpassed 80% of the convex articles (that I have read). I hope the author can add some emojis appropriately. I saw a picture of Paley in the article, which made me so cute. (As long as it's appropriate, it's fine if you don't add it.

One of my favorite embossing articles, (one of the best!!) Very well written! The writing is really wonderful, especially the twins! This setting particularly pricks me! And orthopedics is really super easy!

It's so good, so good, so good. I didn't plan to read fanfics on Tomatoes, but this book kicked me into a trap. I haven't seen such good-looking fanfics in a long time! ! (Ps: Although orthopedics is very good! But I hope to be alone and beautiful... [Please update] Twins and stuff, that's awesome [got it]

This is the most logical thing I have ever seen. The writing is relatively good and the characters are not. The O C protagonist's outlook is also very positive. According to the author's description, the appearance is also very charming. It is really amazing. Compared with orthopedics, because the anime does not have a plot of two people falling in love, other novels with C and P aspects are a bit unrealistic. This kind of relationship between brothers feels more reasonable. But I don't know why the rating is so low. I'm really worried.

This is the best of the concave and convex articles I read on Tomato! ! [Adoration] Twin setting, brotherhood! ! Not OOC, the plot is lively and interesting. The most important thing is that the author's writing style is super good! ! The battle plot is not sloppy and is described very carefully. It feels like you are there in the next second. [Laughing][laughing] Although the ending of the competition chapter is a bit regretful, it is generally good. [Almost crying] [Almost crying] I also really love the setting of the school chapter! ! [Adoration] Lei Zing who cares about people, Lei Mu who appears, Lei Shi who doesn't mean anything, and Lei Yi who integrates into a new life. [Note] To sum up, this convex article is worth reading! !

The author's writing style is really good, the characters' emotional descriptions are very delicate, and there are almost no OOC plots. Moreover, he also added details that are not in the main drama. The summary written by the author is so beautiful! ! !

It's okay. Some of the plots are too brushed off. Many exciting aspects are not written. The ending is too dramatic. I don't know what you think. Why do you want to exchange souls with Palos? The ending is at the beginning, and all the following are extra chapters. If you go to the previous extra chapters, it is estimated that there are only about 90 chapters in the whole chapter. As for the description, from childhood to adulthood, from Lei Wangxing leaving the pirate life, and coming to the Bump Competition, and in the Bump Competition, the process of participating in the Bump Competition is a bit too little described. The descriptions of each stage are very brief. Overall, it is good, too little, and too few details, but it is still highly recommended.

It's beautiful, I love it beyond words, ah! ! ! It's great. I finished it a long time ago but forgot to rate it! ! Like! ! ! Like! ! ! The author is so amazing, so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! Show me everyone!

Such a good-looking novel should only have such a low rating. It really shouldn't be possible! 😣. I especially like Lei Yi's character. What interests me the most is that Lei Shi and he are twins, and that they have a common understanding and feel each other's emotions, pain, etc. The most important point is that I can make CPs at will [laughing evilly], and I hope the author will continue to update! ! !

This bump is one of my favorite fanfics! ! The writing style is much better than most convex fanfics [Flying Kiss] The plot is reasonable and the characters are not OOC. The only shortcoming is that the author likes to leave blank spaces so much [crying]

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...,..., Oh... The plot design struck a chord with me, the characters are charming, handsome (with both hands on the face) and easy to get along with other characters, so delicious, wow, tears are enough, so delicious that it spirals up to the sky to follow the sun, and the teacher is so gentle and considerate, he really cares for his characters. If there are any complications or foreshadowing, the author will tell us individually. It's my honor to meet such a good teacher, and the extras are also delicious, well, it's just a bit dull, but delicious! (Although most of them are based on my own imagination, I am tired) Anyway, let me see them all! It's so delicious. I can't say anything nice, but it's delicious! Rouse I will always follow you❤️

So pretty! Combat descriptions and environment descriptions come to mind! ! The banter with Lei Shi and the awkward concern of the family all of a sudden came into my mind [crying] [crying] (second only to my personal feelings)

Good reviews, must be good reviews. The author's writing style is really good. Each character is very three-dimensional and full. Whether it is the protagonist Lei Yi, the members of the Thunder Lion Pirates, or other characters, there is no OOC. It is really good to read.