[Two male protagonists + primitive + farming + infrastructure + double cleaning]
Lu Ming was abducted to the island for training when he was a child. When he grew up, he became a famous killer. When his plane crashed, he traveled back to primitive society.
Bai Yang, the only male child of the tribe leader, was ridiculed and ostracized by others in the tribe because of his short size, until he rescued a comatose male in the forest...
The story of mutual redemption between attacker and sufferer will become better and better.
Powerful indifference attack x optimistic sunshine talkativeness
Food, farming, building cities...
There is no child, the whole process is sweet, and there is no misunderstanding between attack and reception.
Reader comments
✨🌷💗Lu Ming💗🌷💗Bai Yang💗🌷
✨Recommended stars: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐
✨Double Male Protagonist+Attack Wear+I don't specify whether it's the previous year or the next year, I guess it should be the previous year+Double Clean+Overhead+Original+Infrastructure+Non-Beast World+Extreme Pull+Double Days of Long-lasting Love+Two-way Rushing+Two-way Redemption+Healing System+Daily+Small Sweet Article+No Child
✨(Forest Tribe) Original theme, not a novel about the world of beasts. The setting is novel, the writing is delicate and smooth, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the pace is fast, the characters are vivid and full, the content is exciting, the feelings are sincere, no cruelty, no abuse. Misunderstanding, (both sides are talking), the characters of the two male protagonists are also very interesting, super sweet, super loving and easy to talk to, but a little bit watery, the family atmosphere is also very warm and heartwarming, the ending is HE, the lovers finally get married. (We didn't get married until the finale)
✨This short story has been read. This is the second book I have read by this author. Overall, it is very good. I will give it a five-star rating (๑>◡<๑)👍🏻. Brothers and sisters who like this type of writing can read it! Recommend! 💕
✨Lu Ming, who came from another world, met his sun and all the darkness in his world disappeared.
✨Bai Yang, who was marginalized, saved his light and made his life free from gloom.
✨Where there is the sun, there is light, and the light makes the sun shine even more...
It's rare to see original-themed novels nowadays, and it's even rarer if it's not about orcs. The author's writing belongs to the daily flow, which is very interesting. I felt very happy when I saw Lu Ming discovering potatoes, mushrooms and leeks. However, the article is relatively short, and I can actually write more to make their tribe develop better and better. It's really fun to watch the protagonist's life slowly getting better and better. The author's writing style is actually quite good, but there are metaphors in many places. For example, when Bai Yang and Man Yu are happy and laughing, those metaphors are a bit awkward, and the description of Man Yu teaching others to raise chickens is also very strange. As a patriarch, a sub-male should often have contact with people in the tribe and teach them frequently. It cannot be like this. There are also characters in the article who unconsciously use the words "ah" and "he" when speaking. I personally feel that it is not very appropriate and a bit OOC. I hope the author will write better and better in the next article. There is a lot of room for improvement.
It's quite good to watch, and the story is also very exciting. The emotional progression is also relatively natural. There are relatively few intimate scenes.
Lu Ming, who came from another world, met his sun and the darkness in his world disappeared.
Bai Yang, who was ostracized, saved his light and made his life free from gloom.
Where there is the sun, there is light, and the light makes the sun shine even more...
I've watched about 1/3 of it, and it's not Fu Langwen, but Liangxiong. The author's writing is good, but it felt weird when I read it myself. The descriptions of eating are quite vivid. Gong was wearing the clothes, and there was no barrier to communication throughout the whole process. There was no doubt about Gong in the clan... In more than 30 chapters, Shou realized what he wanted, but Gong didn't accept it. I don't know how the emotional exchange will go in the future, but Shou said he would not give up. [Holds face] But I give up now, Wenhuang can take care of himself.
It looks good, I love watching it, please keep updating [sending my heart][sending my heart]
Pretty, very sweet, but a little lacking
It's plain and pretty.
Coherent content and rich plot
It's okay, but it's too watery.
Cookies are pretty good, but short [laughing]
When I saw the lotus leaves, [laughing and crying] I thought I would dig the lotus roots, but I didn't.
2025.3.4
It's okay. The subject matter is quite novel.
Looks good, but I still have more to say
Sweet short article recommended [Learned]
Very good, sweet article, the names of various animals are so cute
I didn't have high hopes at first, but I was pleasantly surprised after reading it. It's very interesting, but the text is a bit short and I didn't read enough [laughing][laughing][laughing]
✨🌷💗Lu Ming💗🌷💗Bai Yang💗🌷 ✨Recommended stars: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐ ✨Double Male Protagonist+Attack Wear+I don't specify whether it's the previous year or the next year, I guess it should be the previous year+Double Clean+Overhead+Original+Infrastructure+Non-Beast World+Extreme Pull+Double Days of Long-lasting Love+Two-way Rushing+Two-way Redemption+Healing System+Daily+Small Sweet Article+No Child ✨(Forest Tribe) Original theme, not a novel about the world of beasts. The setting is novel, the writing is delicate and smooth, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the pace is fast, the characters are vivid and full, the content is exciting, the feelings are sincere, no cruelty, no abuse. Misunderstanding, (both sides are talking), the characters of the two male protagonists are also very interesting, super sweet, super loving and easy to talk to, but a little bit watery, the family atmosphere is also very warm and heartwarming, the ending is HE, the lovers finally get married. (We didn't get married until the finale) ✨This short story has been read. This is the second book I have read by this author. Overall, it is very good. I will give it a five-star rating (๑>◡<๑)👍🏻. Brothers and sisters who like this type of writing can read it! Recommend! 💕 ✨Lu Ming, who came from another world, met his sun and all the darkness in his world disappeared. ✨Bai Yang, who was marginalized, saved his light and made his life free from gloom. ✨Where there is the sun, there is light, and the light makes the sun shine even more...
It's rare to see original-themed novels nowadays, and it's even rarer if it's not about orcs. The author's writing belongs to the daily flow, which is very interesting. I felt very happy when I saw Lu Ming discovering potatoes, mushrooms and leeks. However, the article is relatively short, and I can actually write more to make their tribe develop better and better. It's really fun to watch the protagonist's life slowly getting better and better. The author's writing style is actually quite good, but there are metaphors in many places. For example, when Bai Yang and Man Yu are happy and laughing, those metaphors are a bit awkward, and the description of Man Yu teaching others to raise chickens is also very strange. As a patriarch, a sub-male should often have contact with people in the tribe and teach them frequently. It cannot be like this. There are also characters in the article who unconsciously use the words "ah" and "he" when speaking. I personally feel that it is not very appropriate and a bit OOC. I hope the author will write better and better in the next article. There is a lot of room for improvement.
It's quite good to watch, and the story is also very exciting. The emotional progression is also relatively natural. There are relatively few intimate scenes. Lu Ming, who came from another world, met his sun and the darkness in his world disappeared. Bai Yang, who was ostracized, saved his light and made his life free from gloom. Where there is the sun, there is light, and the light makes the sun shine even more...
I've watched about 1/3 of it, and it's not Fu Langwen, but Liangxiong. The author's writing is good, but it felt weird when I read it myself. The descriptions of eating are quite vivid. Gong was wearing the clothes, and there was no barrier to communication throughout the whole process. There was no doubt about Gong in the clan... In more than 30 chapters, Shou realized what he wanted, but Gong didn't accept it. I don't know how the emotional exchange will go in the future, but Shou said he would not give up. [Holds face] But I give up now, Wenhuang can take care of himself.
It looks good, I love watching it, please keep updating [sending my heart][sending my heart]
Pretty, very sweet, but a little lacking
It's plain and pretty.
Coherent content and rich plot
It's okay, but it's too watery.
Cookies are pretty good, but short [laughing]
When I saw the lotus leaves, [laughing and crying] I thought I would dig the lotus roots, but I didn't.
Not very rigorous But it was fun to watch
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [Sending Hearts]
It was pretty good, but it ended too quickly.
2025.3.4 It's okay. The subject matter is quite novel.
Looks good, but I still have more to say
Sweet short article recommended [Learned]
Very good, sweet article, the names of various animals are so cute
I didn't have high hopes at first, but I was pleasantly surprised after reading it. It's very interesting, but the text is a bit short and I didn't read enough [laughing][laughing][laughing]