[Fantasy, unsystematic, mortal flow]
A monkey carrying a hoe likes to listen to Journey to the West.
A monkey carrying an iron rod is more like it.
A bloody brain axe.
Plus a little beggar who doesn't know how to beg.
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Reader comments
The story is quite good, but I still hope that the protagonist will continue to be a beggar. The previous writing is very good, the plot has ups and downs, the characters are flesh and blood, the logical thinking is clear, and it has been written around the theme.
Chapters 30 or 40 changed its flavor and strayed directly away from the theme. Although the protagonist gradually became stronger in the process, getting closer to fantasy elements, and the writing was good, the overall sense of the story continued to decline.
Well, I hope we can get back to the topic later. This book is one of the few I have read in 🍅, and I am quite satisfied with it. [Smile]
Very well written. The protagonist grows up step by step, starting from a little beggar, and I don't know what he will grow into later. I like playing Allegro very much, and there are a few more sections later [cover face][cover face][cover face]
I would give myself a five-star rating, but that's not too much.
This is my first time writing, and no matter how good or bad I am, I want to finish it [face covering] [face covering], otherwise if I still have writing ideas in the future, I'm afraid I'll never be able to finish it.
I like to read what you wrote and clicked [Like]
The book sounds interesting
Another saint is born👍👍👍👍👍
After Chapter 20, I had no desire to read anymore and left 8888
Okay, big cheers to the author
It's beautiful. Don't forget, the author, that people always have blood.
The story is quite good, but I still hope that the protagonist will continue to be a beggar. The previous writing is very good, the plot has ups and downs, the characters are flesh and blood, the logical thinking is clear, and it has been written around the theme. Chapters 30 or 40 changed its flavor and strayed directly away from the theme. Although the protagonist gradually became stronger in the process, getting closer to fantasy elements, and the writing was good, the overall sense of the story continued to decline. Well, I hope we can get back to the topic later. This book is one of the few I have read in 🍅, and I am quite satisfied with it. [Smile]
Very well written. The protagonist grows up step by step, starting from a little beggar, and I don't know what he will grow into later. I like playing Allegro very much, and there are a few more sections later [cover face][cover face][cover face]
I would give myself a five-star rating, but that's not too much. This is my first time writing, and no matter how good or bad I am, I want to finish it [face covering] [face covering], otherwise if I still have writing ideas in the future, I'm afraid I'll never be able to finish it.
I like to read what you wrote and clicked [Like]
The book sounds interesting
Another saint is born👍👍👍👍👍 After Chapter 20, I had no desire to read anymore and left 8888
Okay, big cheers to the author
It's beautiful. Don't forget, the author, that people always have blood.
What's next? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I want a follow-up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The story is quite good Looking forward to the author's new book