Holy White Crown

Although there are only a few chapters, you can still see the difference between the beginning and the end, and you should be getting into the zone. The world is grand, the plot is good, and the characterization is okay. Overall, it's good. Take a look and see how long it has been

So far, the pace and excitement of this book are good, so good cheers, author! It's great. Although the author now writes three chapters a day, it's still not enough. Come on, author! Please tell me more, author, can you give us readers some face? You can't even update thirty chapters a day, leaving us without even the right to show off [laughter]

Looking at the rhythm of this novel, it still has an epic feel, and the system is not ridiculously collapsed, but I think the most interesting thing is Reinhardt. [Laughing evilly] There is the father of the protagonist who is a time traveler, the mother who is in the catastrophe, and the aunt who has just appeared [face covering] It is sad that she left the show early [shy] It feels like Reinhardt will only have an appearance in the show [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The first five hundred chapters are very interesting The protagonist's personality is relatively full and the rhythm is better controlled. The system's presence is relatively weak, mainly because the protagonist himself is awesome This part can be given 4.6 Stars After 500 chapters, the plot can only be given 3.5 Stars. It goes like this: Invincible Enemy from heaven Invincible in heaven and earth Enemies from outside Invincible in heaven and on earth Enemy from the world Invincible in the world Enemy from the universe Invincible in the universe The enemy comes in the long river of time

It's nice to read, I feel that way, it feels a bit like the physical book I read before [face covering] The author writes well, I will keep up with it for a long time

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on! This book really gave me mixed feelings. The part where Lu Bu and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds was well written, but the overall logic of the battle was like mixing spaghetti with No. 42 Concrete. The length of the screws directly interfered with the output torque of the excavator. The high-energy particle UFOs that collided with each other directly blew up the charging equipment of Huaguo Mountain, causing nuclear radiation pollution. Xue Baochai's numerical value is seriously over the top. If it weren't for the Noxian guillotine scraped on the outer ring of Nuo's hand and the burst of M4 six-fold scope shooting, Lu Bu would have been killed on the spot. Only Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang" struck a chord with me, perfectly describing the resentment he felt after being hit hard by the three golden cudgels. Foreshadowing is hidden throughout the book, and the descriptions of fighting scenes are immersive.

It has the feeling of an epic myth. The author's writing style is better, the story lines are clearly interspersed, and some foreshadowings are also good. Although it is relatively general in some aspects, the character creation is also okay. It can be seen that the author is avoiding the important and taking the easy, and brings out all the things he is good at. Overall, it deserves high marks.

The front part is pretty good, it's a very good hegemony story. It's quite interesting to watch the Winged Man transform from a birdman to a real Winged Man and then to an angel. The protagonist gradually develops the kind of strong character that God should have. Some of the later branches also refer to some myths in the Bible, such as God's creation in seven days (I read the comments That's what Ou said (I haven't read the Bible myself), but later on he became a cultivator. Of course, it was the kind of cultivator who ascended to heaven with the angels' chickens and dogs. It felt like I was back to the kind of exciting articles I read before about defeating monsters, upgrading and changing maps, and repeating the cycle. I felt a bit boring, but the previous part was okay. It's worth recommending. Another point is that this book has a very epic feel, a bit similar to what happened in the Spring and Autumn Period, but it will not go into details. It just serves as a background for some branches and the adventures of my children. It will also record the above content with the calendar of different eras, such as how many years the Goblin Empire has, then how many years the Troll Empire has, or how many years the Elf Empire has. It has a strong sense of Western epic. If you are interested in this style, you can read it.

I watched it for a long time, how can I put it, except for the tiredness and boredom at the end, there is nothing special about it. Also, the single heroine and some daily scenes at the back are no different from the world of nesting dolls. Overall, it is okay and can be watched.

God dwells on high, our Lord is majestic and glorious The ruling reaches heaven and earth, cleansing away the ugly appearance in the world All the gods must be submissive, the Lord is the Supreme Lord of heaven and earth Invincible inside and outside the star realm, fearless in the abyss The platinum holy name spreads throughout the world, and the Holy Seat shines brightly. Heaven stands high, the majesty and glory of our Lord (The level is limited, don't spray if you don't like it) I have been pursuing books since Uriel was still in Gaoman Mountain. The writing pace is relatively fast and comfortable to read. The author also listens to the opinions and corrects any bad points. At first, many people felt that the author's writing was more literary, which did not conform to everyone's impression of Western fantasy being simple and crude. In fact, I think this is like pursuing the style of an epic poem, which is also great. Thank you to the author [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

Four stars. Before the game starts, it has a chronicle feel, which is very comfortable to watch. From being a cannon fodder of the small Eagle Man tribe in the era when the Titan dragons ruled, to planning extraordinary, evolving into a Wing Man, and then leading the tribe to gradually start the evolutionary journey from Eagle Man to Wing Man, and from Wing Man to Angel. After experiencing the era of titans and dragons, the era of goblin rule, the era of elves rule, and now the era of human rule, he has stepped from the extraordinary eagle to the throne of the god king, becoming the king of angels at the pinnacle of great divine power. It's really wonderful. Then, at the beginning of the game, Uriel, who has become the God King, can actually go offline and switch to the player account Jiang You. Then there is the plot of helping his sister change jobs and pretending to be cool in the real world of Blue Star. If you look at it coherently, it's really fragmented, and the gap between before and after is too big! Four stars for the epic ahead.

Very good, I like this book very much. It has the same effect as the previous one. The protagonist is a waste

It's too long, brother [cover face], the writing is really good, but it's too long, brother [cover face], it's too long [cover face], the more I read, the more boring it becomes, the more I read, the more I feel a sense of isolation [cover face], [cover face], [cover face], it's too long [cover face]

It is good-looking and has a clear structure. It seems to have a historical atmosphere, but it is full of attraction. The historical context is clear, and it feels like watching an epic. From the protagonist, a hawk, to a winged man, to a demigod, and finally to the Lord of Judgment, it is very beautiful and worth recommending. It is interspersed with the development history of other races, thus sketching out a huge and magnificent development history of the gods in the mind. It observes other races from an objective perspective, but describes its own race from a subjective perspective. There are many perspectives from other races, which makes people unable to put it down while reading. Thoughts after watching: While I was watching, there were countless wonderful and shocking scenes, describing the history of the development of other races, answering how the mysterious races came into being, and how the protagonist's weak strength survived the powerful Sequence 0 of an era ago, and continued to become stronger, so that the eagle tribe where the protagonist belongs step by step developed into the amazing angel tribe. In this novel, you will abandon personal love and watch a wonderful epic of the rise of different races! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing in the first few chapters is so-so. Many places are quite dramatic and affect the viewing experience, but then it gradually enters the state. The middle is very exciting. Except for some details in some places, it may not be perfect, but it does not affect the overall situation. It is recommended to read. Later, after the player logged in 10,000 years later, the main descriptions were about the players, especially his sister. Regarding the development of the original kingdom, there was less writing about the promotion of the protagonist, but the insertion of the protagonist guarding the solar system in the real world, human beings with extraordinary beings, and other ancient humans was unclear. I may look back later and comment later.

I only use one word to describe this book, it's awesome. It's not like I can read it without paying. I haven't seen such a high-quality article in a long time. The plot is very brilliant and the characters are very successful. I hope the author will continue to work steadily.

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written! First of all, the author's treatment of the character Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Tan and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xia Houdan did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and separation, sparks sparked with her. The logic of the plot becomes smooth and smooth, refreshing the readers. Finally, the storyline of this book is intricate, fascinating, and full of ups and downs, making you immersed in the story. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions have attracted the attention of readers. It is worth mentioning that the final fight plot between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck is both unexpected and reasonable, and the open ending makes readers have unlimited yearning and reverie for the love song duet between Tai Shang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. In particular, the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in the Akina Mountains immediately highlights Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan. In the book, the stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to help his grandfather are also highlights!

So far, this book has a different flavor in Tomato. This is not a traditional anime with a passionate protagonist, but like a documentary describing the legendary history of another world. At least that's what I've seen so far. If you read too much without brains and passion, you can't say it's very interesting, but I still want to read it. It's pretty good, at least that's what I think. I can't stand it anymore when players appear here in the later stages. Why don't you just tell your sister that she is still playing the game of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? It's so cliche and really poisons me.

Yes, judging from the current content, the author has written it carefully. Although there are some flaws in the content, the article structure and outline logic of the entire book are OK. Especially in the writing of characters, the brushwork is vivid and delicate, and the characters are vividly portrayed. It makes me feel like I am in it when reading, and I personally feel the charm of the plot. I hope you, the author, will continue to work hard, work hard to improve your writing level, improve your shortcomings, and strive to make the stories you write better. I look forward to your success! Come on!

At first I thought it was another evolutionary text with a system, but after reading a few chapters I realized that it was quite novel. I felt like I was in the early to mid-stage of God. The shortcoming is that the writing is not really good. It can only be said to be mid-range in Tomato. There are many small bugs and there are many flaws in the plot. , But after reading more than two hundred chapters, you can feel that the author has made obvious progress. The writing has become much smoother. Now he should have found his comfort zone. It is an excellent work that opens at a high level. For people like me who don't like to be serious so much, it's good to read the story of the protagonist with less brains.

I have read over one million words, and the first one million words are very interesting. It feels like watching a civilization epic. After a million words, the protagonist's combat power is too high, and other characters can't keep up, and they are completely reduced to little transparency. The sense of substitution and enjoyment are weaker in all aspects, but you can still continue watching, it's not bad. Overall, it is a very good novel with a unique and interesting story. It received five-star reviews and is worth reading. Especially in the first one million words, I feel like I am reading a Western fantasy version of "Buddha is the Tao." It is currently regarded as the masterpiece of the Western fantasy system in Tomato. If there is a better book of the same type than this one, please recommend it to me.

It's awesome, the plot has a strong sense of epicness, and it's not watery at all. It moves forward very quickly. The author has his own understanding of mainland creatures (those creatures in World of Warcraft, but not entirely) (it can be justified, which is really awesome). It's a little regrettable that the protagonist's becoming a god is not only physical but also spiritual (there is humanity in the beginning, but I feel that the humanity will become less and less later).

I think this book is well written. A western fantasy novel worth looking forward to. Five-star praise. Hope it doesn't break down. That's fine.

Additional updates, additional content is rare, and the writing is good. However, the progress will be slower after the protagonist's level is higher.

The novel constructs a Western fantasy world in the ancient savagery era. In this world, Titans rule the earth, dragons dominate the sky, and various races such as elves and orcs appear on the scene one after another, presenting readers with a colorful and magnificent fantasy picture. This grand worldview setting provides a broad space for the story to unfold, making readers feel like they are in a mysterious and fantastic world. From the development of the Eagle Tribe, to the birth of the Angel Clan, to the subsequent disputes and rise of various forces, the plot advances rapidly and is full of tension, with new conflicts and challenges constantly emerging, keeping readers highly interested in reading. There are many characters in the book with distinct personalities. Whether it is the protagonist who traveled through time to lead the evolution of the Eagle People tribe, or representatives of other races, they all have unique character traits and behavioral motivations, which increases the readability and attractiveness of the story.

It looks pretty good at the front. I've been waiting for the players to come out and see what changes will happen. I didn't expect that I'm going to trick my sister like crazy [laugh] It's been 10,000 years and it's not easy for you to still remember your sister [smile] Why do you have to have interpersonal relationships with the real world [smile]

I really like this feeling of the God of Creation. It feels like watching an epic. Single female protagonist, emotional scenes are okay, it's okay for male videos There are no words that specifically describe women. They have delicate bodies and plump breasts. If you can resist the poison of these two words, you can look at them. There aren't too many players I think it's still very cool, the male protagonist Generally good

I have read the latest chapter and would like to comment again. The first few dozen chapters of the plot are a bit monotonous, but after the protagonist becomes a demigod, it becomes more and more exciting. The plot spans a long time and gives people a grand epic feeling, like reading a history book. The protagonist is well portrayed, with upright views, not to mention a virgin, decisive in actions, and has an invincible heart. After growing up, he continues to develop his family. The look and feel is very good. The other supporting characters are not very disgusting, so the plot is very reasonable and the plot of the whole novel is very good. The play is slow and more like describing history. The author's writing style is good and relatively simple, but it is not mindless and cool. It does not have as many routines as in previous cool articles. Overall, it gives a good impression. I give the author a big thumbs up. I highly recommend it to people who are short of books [like][like][like]

The world view is well established, and there are no poisonous points. Book the fairy grass

It's a very good-looking epic chronicle of Western fantasy, but I personally feel that the ending can be reached after the player arrives and recognizes his sister. There is a protracted war with the abyss, and there is no need to go on further.