Traveling Through *********
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- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Historical & Ancient
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 27d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Synopsis
Reader comments
In booklists 9
Both Parents Died, and the Brother Took the Young Sister's Book with Him
In Datang, There Were Nuclear Bombs, Various Missiles, and High Technology
It worked in ancient times
The Male Protagonist Travels to a Poor Family to Farm
Have You Ever Traveled Through Time and Had a Sister Who Is Affectionate and Soft but Only Clings to Her Brother?
Or it could also be a modern novel, as long as a brother dotes on his sister, and the sister is very small!
Traveling to the Ancient Countryside, Raising Children and Hunting Is Not Enough
The Protagonist Raises a Young Boy and Asks for a Book
The Heroine Is a Genius Who Traveled Through Time and Became the Daughter of a Villain. the Heroine Has a Cold Temperament and Is About Five Years Old.
The heroine is a big boss, and after time travel, the villain becomes the favorite of his family. I have a cp, a childhood sweetheart. I hope I will grow up gradually, and the process of growing up will account for more than half of it.
Is There Any End to Farming in the Apocalypse? Article by Wasteland Lord
I want to read a book like "Rebirth in the Apocalypse: She Became a European Emperor by Opening up Wasteland and Farming". Infrastructure + the fourth natural disaster, the heroine is strong, not the Virgin, and the player's portrayal is also good
Good Baby, a Must-Read for Those Who Like Soft and Waxy Babies
Want to watch movies similar to "Strong Pet!" A book about a poor little girl who was kissed by a rough man until she blushed.
It's pretty cool, but sometimes I feel awkward when I keep using the word Nasha. In addition, this book is very meticulously written and has a slightly slow pace, making it suitable for reading later.
It's well written, but it's too slow. Slowly write a good book [like][like][like][like][like]
You can watch it to pass the time
The author gives you two suggestions: 1* It is said that no book is written by coincidence. As a person who has traveled through ancient times, the protagonist's knowledge in politics, economy, military and other aspects is a dimensionality-reducing blow to ancient people. The plot of the novel is to encounter problems one after another that are difficult or unimaginable for ancient people. Things that the protagonist can easily handle with the knowledge and knowledge of modern people. If the protagonist cannot solve the problem from the perspective of modern people, without the help of noble people, it will be resolved by unexpected chance and coincidence, and he will always be invincible. There are no coincidences in the book. In this way, the rhythm of the story will be very compact, not wordy, and exciting? 2*Have you seen the short play? Writing a novel requires that kind of rhythm to make it interesting. Looking at your novel, I feel that you are not writing a novel. Except for the beginning, it is okay. The rest seems to be recording life. It is too detailed and feels very long-winded and boring. I am more patient. After reading almost ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. Didn't you notice that there are almost no comments at the end? 3. The theme of the novel is raising cute babies, so the cute girl is also one of the protagonists. What is her role? The protagonist has the vision and cognition of modern people and can reduce the dimensionality of ancient people. As one of the protagonists, the cute girl should also occupy half of the story. What supporting role does she have for the protagonist so that he can always take her with him? For example: the cute baby girl can hear other people's thoughts and tell the protagonist, and the protagonist uses her to know what others are thinking to solve problems. Another example is: the cute baby girl can look at treasures and hunt for them. Everything the protagonist encounters is related to this, so he has to take her with him all the time. 4. It's a coincidence that the protagonist can travel through time, and the second protagonist can also have special functions. Does this combination fit the theme? Every time you encounter a problem, you can easily solve it, and you will feel constantly refreshed?
The writing is more detailed and the description is clear. My favorite is Niu Niu. The only bad thing is that, that, that, that, that, that, etc., It's really uncomfortable to hear it.
This book is suitable for foreigners to use when taking Chinese exams. Asking what "that" means in the book [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]
Family and state affairs are major events for everyone and every local organization in the Chinese nation. In a harmonious China, the moral harmony of the Chinese nation that gives in to each other builds the ups and downs of China. We share the happiness of China and fight the aggressors at the top, and dare to fight against any hegemonism at the bottom!
Very well written! It's just that the update is a bit slow [smile]. I hope the author will continue writing and not stop updating [OK]
Very good, it should have a beginning and an end.
I give you five stars and cheers. I will read it when you finish writing.
It's a very good novel, but the score is too low. It's so well-written that it only scores 7.5. I don't know how to score it. To be honest, this novel beats many 9.9-Score novels. The details and the plot are very well written.
Not bad. The content and plot are quite insightful.
Although it is a time travel article, it is written in a very humane and down-to-earth manner. It is a good article...
It's very interesting, I read many chapters in one go [laughs], I'm looking forward to the updates. [Like][laugh]
Kind-hearted and humane
Take a good, good, good, good look at it
Okay, thank you everyone for supporting the excellent anchor
The writing is good, but there are too many dialects.
Come on, it feels pretty good [like][like][like]
It's okay, just a little less water, and everyone is satisfied.
The writing is interesting and there are few mistakes. It is worth reading! !
It's well written, keep up the good work!
Very nice. Not bad, keep up the good work.
It's great, you can listen to books and make money, it's unique [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
The description is very detailed. It's a good novel.
So cool, I like this silly guy the most
The writing is good and the plot arrangement is reasonable. In addition, the description of the scene is also quite good. Give five stars
It's wonderful. The characters in the author's works shed blood for their family and country without hesitation.
Well written and more humane :)
Very good and rich in content