I'm Ni Hui, a hardworking student who studied diligently to earn my degree. All I wanted was to make money, but my parents never cared for me. One night, I died at school. You ask how? Well... Would you believe me if I said I fell to my death just trying to get out of bed to use the bathroom? When I opened my eyes again, I had become the CEO's delicate little wife, who was always trying to die. From then on, I turned my life around, became a rich man's wife, and focused on raising the child. But the original owner's persona was cold and aloof, so I figured I had better act the part if I wanted to fit in.
Well, I'm Hao Jingheng, a renowned entrepreneur. After Ahui woke up again, she seemed different, much more cheerful, but she was still just as cold toward me...
I'm Hao Shiyu. They say my birth mother died in childbirth when she had me, and I never got to meet her. Everyone in this family seems to hate me and pay me no mind. Dad brought a wife home, and Second Uncle said I was going to have a mother. But the mother Second Uncle talked about wasn't nice at all. She didn't like to talk, and whenever she did, she said things that hurt. I didn't like her. She seemed to have suffered a terrible blow and was always trying to get away from Dad. I overheard the servants say that my new mother had lost her home and the parents who loved her. I think I could understand how she felt. But before I could get on good terms with her, she tried to kill herself. I did everything I could to save her that day, but I was still too little. Just like Dad said, I wasn't fit to be a child of the Hao family. Luckily, Steward Xu heard me crying, and Mom was saved. Even though she was always saying nasty things to him, he still hoped she would live well, because she was his mother.
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There are so many things to complain about, I don't even know how to start. The heroine is a character who has traveled through time, but after time travel, she was really self-righteous. Just because the heroine had an unhappy childhood, she self-righteously asked the hero to treat her son well (although she has not yet said how the son came to be), and she self-righteously criticized the original owner. Later, I remembered that I had traveled back in time to the novel she wrote. She clearly knew that the plot she wrote was about the male protagonist forgetting his ex-wife (original protagonist) and marrying Xue, and being scolded, she ended up trying to reconcile the male protagonist and Xue Yuechun. In addition, I feel that the original owner is really miserable. My family fell into decline, my parents died, I was no longer with the person I loved, and I finally committed suicide due to depression. Also, the male protagonist likes the original female protagonist, right? Does he know that the original owner has died and has been replaced?
How should I put it? I feel that in the early stage of your writing, the heroine was a positive person. She felt that she died very casually and it was embarrassing. She should be a person with a rich heart. However, as you wrote, the heroine became more and more negative and started to talk about the childhood of the heroine. The more I read this article, the more it looks like a novel written by the heroine herself.