Kill the Demon******************

General [thinking][thinking][thinking]

What is written? ? ?

What you wrote is a bit verbose. It would be better if it was clear and concise.

It's really average. The male protagonist is not decisive enough and doesn't want to improve his strength. And there is a Taoist priest speaking Buddhist language? Are you fucking funny?

The writing is good at the beginning, but then the pig's feet are crumbled. Is it a zz? How did the predecessor die and how was he taken away without checking it? It's like a headless fly.

The concept of the novel is not good, it is too stretched, and the system and skills cannot be developed. What is the use of having a system?

I generally have no desire to continue reading.

After hundreds of years, the tempering state will be perfect, and the grass will