Pretend to Be a Good Beta and Don't Want to Be a Heartthrob

I like it so much, it pokes at me... (My xp is very weird, very bad, I really like this... That's it (I'm too perverted to express my words) really... This heartthrob is so delicious... (I really like unhealthy relationships... I can't get on the stage, I cheat, hide and avoid hypocrisy) It's super, super good... If you like to see evil people, you can recommend it, if there are evil people (it's a delicious meal...) But the chapters are a little short and not enough to read... Woo woo woo

! ! ! No kidding, it looks really good! It's really beautiful! The main character is a smart person. What is written also stands up to scrutiny. I haven't finished watching it yet, but now I admire the protagonist Shou and Brother Jiang. OMG! The new year is king☞

Designed to contain some spoilers, please do not enter if you mind. I actually wanted to give it a 3.5... But this is the author's first book, so I encourage you to round it up and give it a four-star rating. I haven't kept up with the latest progress of the update, because the more I look at it, the weirder it gets. I was pleasantly surprised when I first opened this article, because as others in the comment section said, the protagonist has a brain, which is surprising. But the more I looked at it, the more I felt stuck in my throat. I thought about it carefully, probably first because the events were too dense, and secondly because the protagonist kept being pushed around. I have only read about forty chapters, but the amount of information given is already too much. From rescuing people to complex and undercurrent relationships, living together, discovering the second differentiation and suspending the past, being suddenly kidnapped, meeting the mysterious man again, and the "game" on the cruise ship, I feel tired just talking about it in one breath. The author's writing style is quite good. Although the information is dense, it is not dry. However, it is still a bit tiring to read, and occasionally it makes people feel like I am reading expository text. As for the protagonist, it is indeed rare to have a brain, but he is too passive. So far, he has been frustrated and encountered difficulties but does not seem to have shown the ability to get out of them. The protagonist thinks a lot and even takes some actions, but he is always being led along, and his actions are almost useless, which makes people feel powerless when reading. I myself have been thinking about writing skills recently, so I inevitably pay more attention to this aspect. As of what I have read so far (about forty chapters), most of the chapters are filled with dialogues between characters + psychological descriptions of the protagonists. This leads to the fact that the plot advances quickly and there are no details that make the characters more vivid; secondly, there are many characters on the scene, and the portrayal of the characters is inevitably a bit shocking; thirdly, it makes people feel that the protagonist can only talk but is strong in thinking. It is good, but it would be better if it can be paired with strong action. Let's talk about some scattered questions. For example, foreigners use English names. There are a lot of characters appearing, and all of them seem to have some secrets, or they seem to be supporting characters who will have plots later. It is already a bit confusing, but when the English names appear again, it is almost blinding. Compared with the direct English name, the translated foreign name will definitely make people remember it better and put it into context. For example, when I say "Hermione", people will think, "I know her", but when I say "Hermione", most people may think, "Who is this?" Hermione is like this, not to mention there are more than one or two foreign supporting characters in the article? Another problem is that the advancement in some places is too blunt. For example, the protagonist suddenly decided that Brother Cadre (sorry, I suddenly forgot his name) was suspected of having a dual personality. I remember the protagonist's thinking logic at the time was as follows: The stepbrother said that Cadre Goth was sinister, but Cadre Brother looked very fair and a flower on the mountain ➕ People may wear masks, but their appearance and nature are definitely not too different ➡️ There is something wrong with Cadre Brother ➡️ Cadre Brother is suspected of having a split personality. This logic is too rigid! First of all, there wouldn't be a problem if the main premise's appearance and substance are too different, right? Secondly, how come "the stepbrother said the cadre brother is sinister" is directly deemed as the minor premise fact? Before the past story about the interruption of the secondary differentiation in the early stage came out, no matter how you looked at it, it was even more untrustworthy for the stepbrother. Even if we take a step back and assume that all the big and small problems are true, we can conclude that Brother Cadre has a problem, but how can we conclude that he is suspected of having a split personality? There is basically no foreshadowing of split personality in the front, so this kind of thinking orientation will appear very forceful and stiff, like holding the answer and working backwards. Of course, as the author's first book, it has many advantages! Praise the protagonist again for his brains! In addition, the author's rendering skills are also very good! It was really scary when the protagonist recalled the part where he was marked. And although I said earlier that the amount of information is too dense, it is rare that it is dense but not confusing, and the direction of the plot line is always clear and not confusing. All in all, although it is not to my personal taste, it is really amazing that the author can write such a first book! Keep up the good work, author!

This elegant, easy-going and thoughtful person is Brother Jiang, right?

I've only read Chapter 10, and the author's writing is very to my liking. I feel like I prefer the kind of exciting relationship, and I prefer the cp and feeling of pseudo-bone or Li 🙈🙈 Great author, do I have a chance to see it?

It's really super good-looking, the author's writing style is good, and the various pulls of the characters are also well written. It looks very enjoyable. Everyone should come and watch it😭😭😭 Especially the part where An An is chased by Li Jingyang made people very excited. Modo Modo The author's writing style is very mature, there are very few typos in wrong sentences, I have almost never seen them, and the content is very interesting! Come and see everyone✋🏻😭🤚🏻

Very cute, teacher, I want to see Shura Field [Adoration]

The setting is very appetizing, the writing is also very good, and the ups and downs of the plot are very attractive [Love] [Love] [Love]

Very nice and vivid character descriptions!

I'll go, it's really good, but can you please read more? Don't give up the book.

The plot direction is very unexpected

It's very interesting. The writing style is pretty good for Tomato. The main character setting really impressed me OwO. Even though the first few chapters were a bit messy, it became very clear later on.

That's great. I'm going to be a big daddy soon🔥🔥🔥

The author likes to use "—", which makes me uncomfortable, and the paragraphs are also long.

Pretty good, come on, come on, come on

It's very beautiful. I really like the protagonist's character.