Siheyuan: Beginning to Gain Proficiency in the 1950S

Chapter 2: What is the theoretical support for your cooking skills +1? If you put them all together and have a big cooking party, it will be level 2. Silly Zhu's cooking skills can be regarded as your ancestors. Silly Zhu's father is also at the state banquet level. Silly Zhu's father can only be level 3 at most.

Incoherent,

This low score only represents my personal feeling... I am a book-listening person... The whole text is... Of...... It gives me a headache. As I listen to it, I think of the most annoying teacher in junior high school. He can name 2 to 300 words in one class. If you can't answer questions, you don't know. Ah, what have you learned? Well, ah, when you ask him a question after class, he will answer: That's it, ah... I also need to ask this, ah... And then he won't answer it. Then when the next class comes, he will ask you the question you asked him yesterday. If he can't answer it, he will come again. What did you study, ah, what did you study, ah... If I knew it, I would still ask you? You asked a question, but you didn't give an answer or an idea for solving the problem, just a series of ridicules. He didn't speak 2-3 words, and it felt like he couldn't even speak... Forget it, the author took it for granted when he wrote the book. It was not the 21st century. An average family in that era needed help with the work, as long as they didn't have a baby they had been looking forward to for N years, not to mention this was a place similar to an orphanage. It will make children more self-reliant. It is impossible not to work for them. As long as you ask, there will definitely be something for you. It is this kind of social atmosphere that has created the self-reliance and self-reliance of that generation, and the attitude of not asking for anything. Moreover, in that era, you had to pay for this craft. If you didn't become an apprentice, you still want to stand aside and watch? How big is your face? If you don't beat you up, it means you are pitiful. You... Hey, check more information, don't just write it on the head... And if you want to borrow plot characters, try to write them with the background of the plot characters, or don't write the characters in the plot. It's not that you can't write period stories, and you want to use plots and write whatever you want. Isn't this a way for others to criticize you? Forget it... Give it up, just write slowly.

The era is wrong. And the writing is poor!

I can't understand it, it's written too profoundly

Chapter 100 is totally wrong. I don't know where I copied it. The first two pictures were just after a banquet with Qin Huairu, and then they became strangers.

I must marry Widow Qin. Are there no women in the capital?

Literary attainments are too lacking, and the use of sentences and vocabulary is very illogical, which makes people feel very confused. It is really like the readers said that this is a college article written by an overseas person!

There's too much nonsense, can't we cut some of it out? My head hurts from looking at it,

That's nonsense, I've seen it before! ! !

All in all, all in all, why does it look a little awkward? It's not that the plot is awkward, but the dialogue seems a bit awkward and stiff?

Too much nonsense. I listen to what the book party has been saying. After all, what are you thinking about? The author lacks vocabulary. He has always been in his heart and so on, so he said it. For me, these words are too much.

It's too wordy to read. After all, what do I hope? Balabala's old wordy.

He is so good at talking, he is simply a master of nonsense.

There's so much bullshit and it misses the point.

Was this written by someone?

What the hell, you read it so well, did you just switch to the novel after chapter 100?

Screw it, this bowl of rice is not for you

The ramble is baffling!

It's incomprehensible and messy, with prefaces and postscripts randomly spliced ​​together, and the character settings are unpredictable. Don't waste your time reading this.

After all, Jun, after all, there are more than N in one chapter

What are you writing after Chapter 105 of Mess?

A mess……………………

Journal articles

Too much nonsense, it's a mess

Why do you like to be unconventional? The most basic things have been changed.

It's too long-winded and contains too many psychological activities, so I can't read it.

Qin Huairu

It was very frustrating to see

The writing is inconsistent and inconsistent.