Give Hogwarts a Little 21St Century Jolt of Spirit

Even though the introduction says she wants to go to Hufflepuff, the heroine is really a standard Slytherin. It's not like relying on the family power of mom and dad, or suddenly having an awesome surname. He is very thoughtful and good at taking advantage of other people's psychology. He is really good at making mistakes while making calculations.

I have been following her for a long time, and I really love the setting of this heroine. Although she says she wants to act bad, she has her own unique style in doing things. To be honest, she is really cool! ! !

Good-looking, like to watch, love to watch Sharp words and smooth chapters The overall tone is like smoking a cigarette and watching funny videos on a rainy day (?) There are places that make people think, places that make people sad, and places that make people laugh. The protagonist is also very individual, with a stable core and a bit of gentleness (?). He stayed away from the environment where he grew up and came to a foreign country. After a short stay, he transferred to the magical world that he only glimpsed in the books of his previous life. The magical world is not as beautiful, warm, and enthusiastic as children's books. The only thing that greets him is the occasional rain like in the south in England. But the heroine's complaints and resistance are like a small umbrella in the rain The care of people around you is like the flickering lights The heroine's firm thoughts and her strategic attempts stabilized Xiao Qiao on the rapid river, although it may still be a bit shaky. Emm… Anyway, it's really beautiful And the emotional lines are well written, like chewing licorice instead of industrial saccharin, sweet but not greasy, surpassing many heartthrob books, haha The overall writing style is like a stone on a torrent, the overall flow is fast, but there is an event in different stages of the flow, which does not develop. Mostly it promotes individual feelings, elicits the protagonist's thoughts, and at the same time lays down the foreshadowing (?) Overall, I like it very much (I only express my personal opinion, without a condescending tone, and I only write about my feelings after reading, and seek common ground while reserving differences) Regarding the concept of cool novels, is the author aiming for brainless cool novels? From my understanding, they are novels based on reality. At this stage, the interesting points of the article are about revenge on the spot, and most of them are against individuals and individuals, rather than the general background (just like the conflict with Decela is only directed at this time Decela and not the future Declar or Malfoy), it is mostly based on the pleasant points of language, and is gathering strength in the dark in the big plot. This also leads to an unavoidable layer of haze when watching (only expressing personal opinions, personal feelings, and expressing my feelings) It's also true that it's not a fool's errand. 8.0 Is indeed low, I feel it should be around 9.2. This score of 8.0 Really makes me miss it three times, haha

It's very interesting. I originally thought I wouldn't be able to watch the first person version, but I accidentally finished watching it. Damn it, the main character Cathy Freeman is so cool, her output is very strong, and she has great ideas. I really like it. I can't get enough of it.

Nice! ! ! I love Sister Kai's beautiful mental state! ! !

It was the first time I read a daily novel that the heroine was very individual and selfish, especially in a scene in Potter where he looked in the mirror of desire and wanted to know if the heroine was the same as him. The heroine was super free and did not turn towards him. Really, I love [send heart] [send heart] [love] so much

Like it very much! ! I had a really good time with Theodore. Both I and the heroine are INTP! So cool! ! ! It's becoming more and more addictive. . . . Cathy is really a good baby and supports babies to be uniquely beautiful!

It's super good-looking, and the heroine is kind of crazy, but also kind of scheming, which makes her very popular.

The bitterness is hidden in the cracks of the relaxed and humorous surface, accompanied by infinite beauty and making people think. If the sailboat strays from the lighthouse, it will no longer be the same sailboat. An easy life cannot paralyze the heroine's pursuit of freedom; false friendships cannot cover up her past sins and pure-blood clown nature; the heroine and Voldemort are on the same path. They both advocate force but will eventually lead completely opposite lives. She is a genius, a genius who will never restrain her will because of others. She is a political genius with vicious vision and skills who is good at pretending to be an idiot to tease others. Such personality charm will inadvertently make all living beings fall in love with you.

Please, let me read another one. I can't see that I have an iron head crawling on my body. Please, let me read another one. I can't see that I have an iron head crawling on my body. Please, let me read another one. I can't see that I have an iron head crawling on my body. Please, let me read another one. I can't see that I have an iron head crawling on my body. Damn it, it's so well written. I like it so much. I was thinking about fattening up. I ended up reading the dozen or so chapters I saved in half an hour. How could it be so well written? I burst into tears [almost crying]. Who cares? I read it so much. It was so enjoyable. . It's so good at writing, the heroine is so handsome, so cool, so awesome, so unique, so individual. I enjoyed watching it! ! ! ! Listening to the song and watching it at the same time makes me feel more déjà vu.

The heroine is a very sober character. From the part about the girl who harmed her because of the cat, we can see that she is a very standard Slater. She knows how to use all means to gain advantages for herself, and she also knows how to hide and is better at hiding.

A book I like very much The author's writing style is very unique. It feels like listening to absurd jokes in an attic on a rainy day. There are many jokes in the article, but it does not seem bloated and cumbersome. It has a very comfortable rhythm. It's still the first person, so there's a sense of immersion, but the characterization is very full, which makes me feel like I'm attached to the protagonist but yet detached from the world. I wonder if Shen Qiao will feel this way when she's in Cathy's body. Regarding the important character creation and emotional lines, it is not the kind of rigid character design. It feels like they are all slightly influenced by the heroine, but they do not pursue the heroine like crazy after drinking a love potion. It feels more like they are just curious about the heroine, and slowly get closer, and the tension of the emotional line is well expressed. But I feel that the heroine's feelings for them are like watching a group of carefree but somewhat limited-minded children. The heroine thinks too much and looks too far ahead. All kinds of small things will be extended to a larger level, and it is somewhat inadequate to deal with their feelings. I dare say that if a character really confesses to the heroine, the heroine will find it troublesome. Without destroying the relationship of interests, she will refuse in every possible way, or block it with one sentence. There are also various forces in the magic world, and various speculations on interests, which are not mentioned in most books, at least not as thoroughly as the heroine's analysis. I look forward to the heroine slowly climbing up the profit chain. I really don't know what the heroine has experienced to be able to do this. Obviously I want to be ruined, but every move I make is to estimate the gains and losses. This is really tiring. I feel like there will be a big knife in the later stage. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to the author. It's great. I haven't seen this type of fan fiction for a long time. Please keep writing and polishing it carefully. I like it very much [crying] One more thing, I don't blame the heroine for joining Slytherin. We Slytherins like such smart people [blowing kiss] [like]

Ahhhhhhhh! This heroine is so perfect for me! It stands out among the more than 100 HP fanfics I have read under different accounts. I will always follow Sister Kai and carry forward her scolding ways! 😆I'm quite picky about fanfics, and out of more than 100 fanfics, only five or six are to my liking. This proves that the author's writing is very good! [Laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I really like the heroine's character of never wronging herself and going crazy at will [laughing] Learning how to behave with Sister Kai, my mother no longer has to worry about me being treated like a weakling at school!

The author's writing style is very humorous. The heroine is a real Slytherin, both in thought and behavior. She is determined through careful consideration. In the author's writing style, the heroine is like a real person, not just a character. I like this book very much and hope the author can update it more.

It's so well written, boss. I haven't read the original work the last time I read it (.) This time I was very happy to read HP's original work after reading it. I felt like I had the pleasure of reading it again with eyes that I had never seen before. I like the portrayal of the heroine, she is strong enough, but not a Mary Sue. Live without depending on anyone, strive for your own interests, and do not gain benefits by pleasing others. It feels so good to have such a good brain, and it feels even better that the author can really write about the protagonist having such a good brain. The various counterattack plots are not embarrassing, very smooth, comfortable and good-looking (yeah). Although Shen Qiao is unforgiving and retaliates harshly when offended, he is still a common-sense person with a good heart and a strong heart... A towering tree. Although she has a bad past and psychological shadow, she will not be ordinary beautiful, strong and miserable. Beauty and tragedy aside, what matters is strength. She doesn't need other people's pity, she will find a bright path on her own. The look I look at Shen Qiao now is like Harry's... But baby, you are a god... (...) And thank you for not being evil to the members of the Lion House! ! ! Thank you too for Neibu (x). It's delicious. Thank you very much. It's very tasty. I want to see it again. I want to see it again () The boss is so awesome, I praise you! I was still wondering why the standard was so high. From the comments, it turned out that I would go back to revise the article after I finished it. . So carefully written, this is really beautiful🥺🤲❤️

I really think the author's writing is very good. I like the heroine's character very much. She is very good at scolding when she is bullied, and she is also very powerful [Adoration]

I really like the author's three views and world view. The construction of the magical world has been improved to a new level. The hidden power flows and social structures in it are all very reasonable. Moreover, the author's female-oriented thinking made me very comfortable with it. From the very humorous writing at the beginning to the gradual in-depth discussion of some serious topics, the painful and heavy side of Cathy's life/past gradually became real. But she is powerful. She faced everything bravely, never bowed her head, never gave in, and was really able to fight back powerfully and stand there with her head held high. I think this is one of her charms. This powerful and powerful charm is not only in ability but also in spirit. And it is reasonable that this strength and her own personality charm make all kinds of people unconsciously attracted to her. If I meet Cathy Freeman in this life, I think I will fall in love with her, no matter in what capacity. She's fascinating, she's admirable, she's relatable. Cathy is very rational, and using this rationality as armor and sharp blade, she moves forward to overcome obstacles. Live on, disgusting all the people who treat her badly, and then live on, live for yourself. But after Cathy wore her armor and blade for a long time, it became difficult to take them back, and she couldn't even see herself. Cathy, you are human and you have the right to be vulnerable. I also want to hug Cathy. She has never been alone. She has just been walking on this painful road alone for a long time and doesn't know how to get off. At first I was attracted by Cathy's sense of humor/venomous tongue. Her arrogant and powerful sides are very charming. Now attracted by Cathy's inner strength and her vulnerability underneath that strength, Cathy, Cathy, I want to hug you. Cathy Freeman, forever free.

I hope I'll be lucky enough to be praised by the author, Mo (*´I`*) It took me half a day to read it in one go. Because I typed this in the middle of the night, the logic of the language can be said to be very confusing, and some of my opinions may be childish) But I am an adult underneath my skin, so I hope you can forgive me orz (Contains some spoilers, please be careful) First of all, I actually like to choose writing styles when reading books. This is the first time I have the desire to write a long review on Tomato (the language is a bit bad but I really want to express my gratitude). Some of the stream-of-consciousness descriptions of the call back in Wife, and the cinematic atmosphere described after Ced and Harry's eyes met at their respective emotional lines really made me scream and take screenshots frantically. Generally speaking, many novels use too many popular memes, which can easily make me feel disgusted. But the amazing thing is that I don't have any discomfort, so I really like my ability to process words. Www From the description of the characters, the author's presentation is unique and wonderful. Shen Qiao's character design is quite new in HP fandoms, and it's not like no one has written about it. However, this kind of protagonist who is as free as the wind in others' eyes and may be fleeting is really difficult to control. If you are not careful, many fandom protagonists can easily fall into a highly homogeneous and forced redemption routine. The other characters I want to talk about are Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter. Due to the huge audience of movie parties and the increasing proportion of younger people online, Draco Malfoy in the original work has been constantly beautified and sublimated. Of course, I will occasionally become the audience of these fans, but this kind of fandom will make me subconsciously disconnect from the original work. The characters are too perfect, elegant and fragmented. However, the author's description of Malfoy immediately reminded me of the feeling of gnashing my teeth at him when I read the original novel in the first novel (hh). In the text, I saw the general description of his subsequent plot direction, which directly coincides with the most reasonable plot direction for him among the fans in my heart. I just slapped the table and shouted (bushi). Next is Harry Potter. This boy who is righteous, brave, kind, sensitive and a bit venomous in the original novel has been an obedient green-eyed kitten in the novel for so long that I almost forgot how lively and cute he looked at the beginning. In terms of plot points, the phrase "Neville Longbottom, the sun has come out" is still echoing in my mind. How should I put it? Shen Qiao saw the rain in Neville's eyes, but I felt that a wet rain was also falling in my sister's heart. The sound of the rain was not loud, but it was silent but continued. I watched this scarred person walking around the world tiredly and confusedly. Suddenly, without warning, she brought a ray of sunshine to another sad soul. The warmth and sadness that spread across the screen made me burst into tears. The narration of Quidditch was a small climax of the plot, and all kinds of hilarious jokes made me go directly to the stadium to watch a hearty game, each with its own characteristics. Hahh, I would like to add another sentence, sister, you are really good and awesome. And the author, although your writing often shows the sense of social exhaustion, but in many plot points of the article and the corners discussed in the comment area, I really feel that you are living a very cute life (˵¯͒¯͒˵) As the author said, although Shen Qiao is sober and indifferent, she actually needs illusory elements such as love and fairy tales to fill her. I have all kinds of healing ideas in my mind. I think such a good person should have someone born for her, so that such a free person will be happier and freer. But I was speechless when I saw her carefully isolated relationship with her adoptive mother, and I felt emotional again when I watched her say goodbye to Cathy. What kind of ending is worthy of this journey of wandering? I thought of this sentence. The hard work along the way made me really want the heroine to have the kind of happiness described in traditional secular descriptions, but there was a voice in my heart telling me that such an ordinary ending was not worthy of her. These are the random thoughts in my mind) The ending of the book is about 4 to 50,000 words, and I look forward to accompanying the characters in the book, the author, and all book friends to share this journey. I hope the author's life goes well for the third time, and the hateful work oppression will stay away from us, okay? (Viciously)

It was different from what I thought of as a story about a heartthrob heroine. I thought it was a relaxing and enjoyable story. However, although the tone gives people a very realistic and heavy feeling, the heroine can always make readers cry and laugh. The heroine is calm, intelligent, gentle and sensitive. I just hope that her future will be bright and full of love.

After reading more than ten chapters, wow, this article is very suitable for my mental state. Hey hey hey hey hey, the little author (whistles) is alone (takes off sunglasses) (flicks bangs) (supports wall with one hand) (bends right leg behind left leg) (ogles) (wink) (picks up sunglasses) Hiy baby~how are... (The legs of sunglasses poked into the eyes) (Leaved screaming) In the mental hospital (Running around) (Shaking the iron door of the patient next door) (Grabbed a handful of the hair of the patient who was passing by) (Blowed it into the air) (Smirking) (Being hurt by the patient who was inflicting wounds) (Get up and watch this patient hurt others) (Watch this patient being taken away and given a sedative) (Laughing loudly) (He was also taken away and given a sedative)

This book touched my heart. The heroine is indeed a Slytherin. If there was no explanation, I would have been involved. Moreover, the author's writing is also very good. There is no traditional way of revealing her identity at the beginning, or being with the protagonist group. Shen Qiao is Shen Qiao, and she is herself. This book is also a bit sadistic. The heroine was isolated from the beginning, or she didn't care at all, but I still felt a little distressed when I read it. I had to bear this because I didn't do anything. But the main part is still quite funny, especially the part where the heroine explains Quidditch. This book is highly recommended. I hope everyone will read it. You will definitely not regret it [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Although I don't understand why the score is so low when there are so many good reviews, it doesn't stop me from discovering a treasure. The author's writing is superb, interesting yet in-depth. An HP novel that is very suitable for Chinese babies to read, perfect

This book is really beautiful! Because the heroine's MBTI is INTP like mine, I see that many heroines have the same psychological thoughts as me when they are in trouble, and I can really understand it! I really like it, I hope the author will work hard and update it!

I haven't seen such an innovative HP article in a long time—— I really love the mouth of the heroine so much (she covers her mouth and screams in excitement [crazy]), and it's so enjoyable to read in the first person [take a closer look]. This article also doesn't tolerate the ferret classmate (dog head) too much, and even writes that the real Hogwarts (in my opinion) is not an utopia [sending my heart] Wife↑Update——I read it in one sitting↑Not→enough↓Read↑ (The following ten thousand words are omitted to express my happiness, excitement, joy after reading this article, my regret and thoughts about my wife's "unappreciated talent" [sending my heart])

The author writes very well, and the heroine is also very handsome. There is a faint feeling of death, but it feels very good. The reason why the heroine poses is because she will die if she doesn't pose. The heroine is very good, but when she saw the cat being attacked, she really almost cried. I watched it on my big account for a long time, and then I got bored, so I canceled that account and re-logged in the previous one. This account is the one that can still make me cry. It is one of the few works that can make me cry. I can only say The heroine is very handsome and beautiful, and very likable. The plot is very interesting, very tight, and perfect. The plot is touching and immersive, and you can put yourself in someone else's shoes. I recommend watching this. It's super good-looking. It's a tie. It made me burst into tears. O(╥╥)o I'm adding some tears at the end. The heroine obviously thought a lot and did a lot, but in the end she encountered so much malice, and her cat was also legged. If she hadn't done it in advance, the cat might have died. I don't think it's that cruel, but it still feels cruel. After watching it, I really hate those two. Humanly speaking, I can only say that the heroine is very strong. I also like this kind of character. I hope the author will keep writing like this. It will not be so sadistic and aggrieved. It is also a good story. I just don't understand why they are so malicious. It is very interesting and the author's writing is also very good. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง

Such a lovely author! ! The heroine's mental state is just like me. It's a cool article that is very suitable for Chinese babies' physiques. If you don't like it, just do it! ! Look at this spirit! I couldn't stop chasing the entire episode! ! ! The author has greatly updated! ! ! ! ! !

A lot stronger. . . It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that has good writing when it's time to write, and can make jokes when it's time to make jokes. The world view and plot are both rich and deep, and the theme is still HP. . . The only drawback is that it's not updated daily [crying]

Invincible and beautiful, everyone came to see my sister's heroic appearance. And finally Harry is no longer a green-eyed kitten, the original poisonous tongue character is resurrected! ! ! Ron doesn't just keep saying that Slytherin is a bad guy.

This character is really rare in HP fanfics. His personality drives the development of the entire story. Especially his personality is so unique. I rarely see it in other fanfics. There is also this book, which is very logical and interlocking, but the protagonist is not completely from God's perspective. There are always unexpected things happening. Through the experience and resolution, the protagonist continues to grow new flesh and blood, which is particularly vivid. And as the plot progresses, how does the protagonist's charm become established? This is also the most surprising part. The more I watch, the more I feel that this is a rare character. Another thing is that I want to know the ending of this character more and more, or in other words, the ending chosen by Shen Qiao. Stories must have a beginning and an end.

It's a very interesting book, I read it over and over again. My overall impression of this book is that it is well written, has brains but is not mentally retarded, is funny but not light-hearted, and the descriptions are spot-on. The description of Slytherin is very good. Slytherin is not blindly brainless in this article. I also like Cathy's character very much. She has a poisonous mouth, a good brain, and can climb along the pole. It's still very funny overall. It suddenly becomes serious in some chapters, but it's not annoying (please don't comment on my personal opinion). I almost died laughing at the scene where Cathy explains Quidditch and some other clips.