I Am Devoted to the Tao, but I Am Entangled by the Cool School Belle

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It's so good. I finished reading it in one morning. I suggest you update it at 10,000 per day and update it quickly. The content is novel, not mindless, and the protagonist is well-established and good-looking. Check out the reading time...

The current female protagonist is only Li Zijin, and now Zhao Yelan, Chen Xuan, and Su Yao may all be the second female protagonists. But Li Zijin in the first volume was so well portrayed that it would be very difficult to write a heroine who could surpass Li Zijin.

The light novel has a lot of flavor, and the yandere is amazing. Not surprisingly, she should be the second heroine, right? [Laughing] Zi Jin is also very good, it would be better to have them all under his command! [Laughing] The author's writing style is smooth and a bit strong! Come on, come on, I will keep urging you to update! [Learned][Learned][Learned]

After reading a lot of mindless novels, I found this one so addictive. The characters are delicately drawn, the emotions are rich, the psychological description is also very good, the character is not low, there is a lot of foreshadowing, the writing is also quite good, the main plot and branch lines are daily, exciting and fresh, but the plot progress is a bit slow, and the protagonist's strength has not been raised yet, but in my heart this book also stands out, I will definitely catch up to the ending, I hope the author will get better and better [Blow kiss]

In today's Tomato, and even in the current Internet literary circle, it can be said to be a niche style, an absolute treasure, with great potential. It seems that I have found my childhood yearning for the mysterious time and the longing experience. The storyline is also very exciting, the portrayal of the characters is also very perfect, and the style is unique and exciting, but it is too short and feels a little fattened up.

The male protagonist is very handsome, the female protagonist is not a vase, the plot is very logical, and the description of the battle is very different from the traditional Taoist priest descending the mountain. Now it seems that the emotional line can be played just as well as the combat part. It may be a bit slow to pick up in the early stages, but by about ten chapters it's very interesting, and by Wu Gang the plot suddenly takes off. It's just that the male protagonist has a bit of aloof character and is focused on fighting monsters. You can show off more, and your relationship will come to light sooner. I just like to watch vulgar things. [Make faces]

This book's portrayal of the characters is very good and in line with my aesthetic point. I highly recommend [][][]

How is the author's performance now? I hope it can be completed smoothly. It is not easy to find a good book on Rotten Tomatoes that suits your taste.

A great book with potential, worth recommending Step on each other, come on

It's beautiful. Why is it rated so low?

The writing is very good, but the lightness of the day is a bit strong, but the flaws are not outweighed. Each character has his or her own characteristics, but it's hard to keep watching. I just finished reading the second volume and I have no desire to continue reading. A good work never lacks an audience. I hope more people will see your work.

Suddenly it felt like it would be nice to have no heroine. [Shy][shy] In fact, I quite hate Su Yao. I mean character

Very good, not the kind of bad slap-in-the-face writing. I like this style.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's so beautiful, why are there so few people?

Su Yao is crazy about killing, let's give Yao a good endingq

The heroine is well portrayed, and it can be seen that the author really puts his heart into it

You can take a look, the story style is quite interesting

After reading the first volume: the writing style is delicate, the writing is reasonable, the characters are vivid and exciting, the story is mellow and dreamy, step by step, the psychological activities are layered, and the micro-group portraits. This is a great book! The characters and emotions of Zijin in the first volume were so well written that when I discovered that there was more than one female protagonist, I even felt that the author was sorry for her. The other characters seem to be based on street templates, but the various behavioral details and the shaping of psychological activities well bring out their character arcs. It is a very unique book in Tomato! Top grade! Looking forward to the follow-up development (the emotional line should be handled well so that I can accept why Zijin cannot be the only heroine, otherwise I will leave one of the five stars for myself)

I think it's well written, and I found this one after looking for a lot of books. But I didn't expect that the author wanted to finish it directly. I felt like I could continue writing [I almost cried]

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It looks good. I love watching it. I want to watch it again.

Love to watch Hehe

Haokang, don't cut it in half [Like]

Not much to say, just one word, okay

There is a feeling from that time [almost crying]

Beautiful, very beautiful

Great book with potential, keep going!

I just read it a while ago and I feel good about it. This book was delayed by the title.