I Keep Rising in the World of Martial Arts

This is my first time writing a book, so I encourage myself💪

The original world is well written, but the plot development of the world is too slow. I think it should be speeded up.

Come on, the author wants me to read My solemn vow: starting from today, it will never be renewed. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I, Lu, am diligent in coding. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding. It's like this day and night. Signed it then update

Come on, it looks good, please give me more pictures

What is the plot of the original world?

Generally not bad. But some of the character names are a bit more modern, not like the Stone Age. I think the author, you can watch the Stone Age TV series about Dayu controlling floods.

The book is a good book, but the progress of this type of book itself is slow, and there is only one book every day. It is easy for people to keep it, and the data will become worse and worse as the data is kept. If the data is not good, it will be easy to stop updating, which is a vicious cycle.

This new book is very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon. It's a bit unreadable. After all, the number of words is still a bit short. I started listening to it this morning and have finished it at about 5 o'clock after get off work. As an old bookworm, I skip chapters, but rarely skip chapters. Basically, skipping only a small section has saved me a lot of words. In other novels, I skip several levels.

Very well written, with a martial arts feel. But it's not very suitable for Tomato's style, especially the fanfics that are hard to agree on. Main readers enjoy reading the original plot and can't bear to read it. I guess the author wrote it out of emotion, which is rare

The characters are delicately portrayed, the story is progressive, and the world is perfectly connected. Come on, come on, come on [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh]

Follow a little, and a little not enough. See how little you are

The article is good but the update is too slow. The author should speed up [laughs]

It's okay, but the plot is a bit slow. If the plot in other worlds were too fast, this book would be very good.

The protagonist is too kind, so he should be written more ruthlessly.

The book is good to read, but the recent chapters are very dangerous under the care of the God of Harmony. Very good book worth recommending

Come on, author, this is a rare and good book. Without the plot, it surpasses 95% of similar works.

It's good-looking, rich in content, complete in its training system, and the protagonist and supporting characters are vivid and vivid. Awesome, come on.

It's very well written. It's in vernacular and easy to read. [Like]

As long as I feel that I can read it, I will give it five stars. Come on, author! The book with the most words I have read so far is over 5 million words. I hope the author can compare with him.

This book is okay

Everything else is fine, but the main plot is a bit lacking

A good book should be written at a pace, don't be anxious.

Very well written, why are there so few people. [Smile][smile]

I prefer the Huang Feihong part, even though it has some shortcomings, I still like it

Come on, work together. My personal experience in reading books is that I will only read this genre if I need at least 500,000 yuan or more than 1 million yuan.

The logic is strong, the setting is not obtrusive, and the IQ is online [laughing]

Very good. Each story can be regarded as a separate new chapter. It is very exciting. Come on, author.

It doesn't blindly follow the main plot, it has its own plot. Although some plot processing is flawed, the main plot is handled well, especially the original world, which is relatively niche and attracts me.

The content is novel and good

Good, good, good