After Losing All His Cultivation, Wan La Was Surrounded by Seven Rebels.

It's rare to see a book that blends the plot and the main plot so appropriately. It feels much better than some other 8 or 9-rated books. The female protagonist has her own personality and the male protagonist is also a competent master. I hope you won't stop updating.

The plot is wonderfully written and the writing is also very good. From the moment the male protagonist was raped by his disciple for the first time, he started to sing all the way, but the details of the assault were not well described [shy] I hope there will be more detailed descriptions in the future. Also, I hope there will be a perfect happy ending in the later stage. Come on, author, don't let the book take over.

The writing is quite good. The main character is not as incompetent as in other books who deliberately hang you up. The plot is not particularly good. I have read too many literary works and I don't pick it anymore. I feel it is better than some 80% works. After reading this book, I feel that the author can actually handle the subject of Hehuan Sect. I still can't forget that the senior sister of Hehuan Sect was the one who took the lifeline [face covering] It's a pity that she was killed. Ahem, speaking of which, this novel as a whole is quite relaxed. The balance between imprisonment and daily life is very good. Some yandere novels have four apprentices imprisoned all the time without any relaxing moments. The author has done a good job in avoiding this. It doesn't mean that relying too much on the system to constantly create new settings makes people tired, and the text with a weak system will not be particularly abrupt. Generally speaking, I personally feel very good, but the author said that he was afraid of being locked up in a small dark room and omitted many details, which is a fly in the ointment. Unfortunately, I don't like to eat a little bit of knife. I don't particularly like the ending of the future apprentice. Everything else is okay.

I forgot to comment, but why did it become less than 30 minutes?

Micro-knife? In my opinion, the blade is hanging high. I always feel like I'm going to be decapitated by a large knife in the next second. I feel itchy. Author, let me ask you why your head is so pointed [laughs]

The plot connects smoothly and the writing is pretty good, mainly that Lihua... I happen to have a friend named Lihua 😂 I hope the author can help me and add another friend Mingfu to the list.

As for the subjective foreshadowing of the full text, this book has a high score in my mind. The plot basically doesn't have too many poisonous points, but the ending is a bit too sloppy. I'm a bit sorry. There are nearly 400 chapters of foreshadowing in the early stage. Since I can write it to this word count, I think it should have a worthy ending. Some people may say that the male protagonist is indifferent, but it is not mentioned above. From the foreshadowing, Come on, the male protagonist has experienced many reincarnations and lived for hundreds of millions of years and has witnessed the death of the female protagonists many times. From this perspective, it is not difficult to understand his behavior. Each female protagonist has her own unique character. There is nothing to comment on overall. I can only say that it is in the eye of the beholder and the wise see wisdom (purely subjective personal evaluation). I hope the author will get better and better, but there are too many pitfalls! ! You can't fill it in yourself, so at least you can do more extras! !

The foreshadowing at the beginning is okay. I don't know why, but some people say that the first part is too long. I think the full text is very good. Although the routine setting is a bit cliché, it is much better than the logic and settings that are not well written. I think the rough rating of this book should be above 8 points.

As a bookworm with more than 1,000 hours of reading time, this book is really good, even considered to be the best in this genre. The rating is indeed a bit low. First of all, let me explain that I am not a junkie. You can check it out. I do have more than 1,000 hours of reading time on my homepage. I don't want this kind of book to be buried. , And I don't want such an author to remain unknown, so if everyone can take a look at the poisonous points, I personally think there is no problem. You can taste it for yourself, and don't believe too much in other people's comments. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. I hope the author will work harder [Please update][Please update][Please update] Okay, there may be some minor issues, but they're not big. Some of the emotional scenes are a bit awkward, but others are pretty good.

The ending of the master of the human world is probably better. He is also one of the few men in this book. He has devoted himself to the human world for many years. I still hope to see him and Gu Feng drink a few bottles of wine and have a normal daily life with his apprentice.

The author's writing is okay. Anyway, I think it's quite good. The world view is a bit grand. You need a certain amount of understanding to read it. Overall, it's very good. It's not just a simple emotional drama. The content and process are very good. It's not a simple harem story. You can feel free to read it. It's good to read.

I'm halfway through it. I feel it's really good so far. It shouldn't be so low. The writing is very good and the characters are well created. I hope it can be completed and don't stop updating it. The author is big [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Your efforts are not in vain. As long as you keep writing, every time there is a subject similar to yours, that person will open the favorites and look at it again, and then comment that it is not as good as this one. This also proves that the novel you wrote has taken care of some people's hearts. [Like][Smile]

I have never posted a book review before, but I saw that the author would read every short review I wrote, so I thought about it and posted a paragraph to share my views. First of all, I have read more than 200 chapters now, and I feel that this book should not only be rated this way. The author's writing is very good, the whole story is quite interesting, and the characters are well created. I can't understand why it is only a 7.6. I guess there are two reasons: 1. The overall pace of the book is a bit slow. If you read it as a cool article, it will easily lose readers. 2. A certain aspect of the master's portrayal may not be so likable. For example, when being pushed, it seems like he is too straight-faced? In other words, they are all passive. Generally speaking, I can accept these. Although the rating is not high, I still hope that the author will not be sad. The author's writing style is very good and I like it very much. Finally, I wish the author good health and happiness

From what I have seen so far, my feeling is that the story is there, the theme is there, there is a lot of content that can be continued, and no poisonous points have been found. Some of the uncomfortable moments are just to keep the plot going. I have seen many books cut in half, and at least I feel good about this one so far. There is a lower limit, it depends on how high the upper limit is Come on [laughing]

The logic is very clear, the knife is subtle, and the knife is very natural (there is a resurrection in the ending), it creates the characters very well, and there are many foreshadowings. You may be a little confused in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, you will be impressed by the author's writing style. This book is really good, much better than most similar books with more than 8 points, the score should be higher, highly recommended [Blow a kiss]

I can write a million words on the topic of flushing. Needless to say, it's rich. The main plot is well written overall and the characters are well-drawn. This is the first book I've written a review on Tomato. It's really worth reading [Blow a kiss]

Only 6.5 Points? ? ? This is much better than some books with more than 8 minutes, okay [what] [what]

The author has put a lot of effort into this book, and it is worth reading in terms of plot. Although it cannot be called a sacred text, and some small details are contradictory, it is harmless and still interesting to read. You can jump through the book at the beginning, and the plot in the later period is more compact and full of twists and turns. I would like to thank the author for his free writing. I wish him success in his career, physical and mental health, and I wish his new book a huge hit.

I have read more than 160 chapters so far. The overall novel is really good. If you have the patience, it is well worth reading [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] (Give five-star praise and encourage the author [send your heart]) I have reached around 320 chapters so far, and I can't help but write another book review: The early stages of this book are very long (which will filter out many impatient readers [note]). Each heroine in the book has its own characteristics [lick screen] (Li Fei'er has the most descriptions [note]), and the plot and narrative are well grasped. It's very good (the plot may be cliche, but unlike other books of the same type, the author has added other interesting and reasonable characters, which makes this book stand out in my eyes [note]). The author's writing is smooth and fluent, with few flaws [lick screen] (there is less description of the environment, focusing on character dialogue [note]) Note: If there is any error in the above book review, please correct me [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

What if I could call my mother to play in Guangzhou Hospital? Outside 🍜

No way, from my point of view, it is a five-star good book, but from the perspective of Tomato's audience, it is completely understandable that the rating is not high. I think one thing that can be improved is to write it as an interlude and insert some of the plots of Abba and Abba in the back, so that the slow pace in the front will not lose a large number of users.

It's really beautiful. I'm going to give it a second try.

It's very interesting, but the extras are gone, and why didn't the fans see it?

Very nice [laughing] I hope the author will continue to work hard and create more masterpieces

Very good-looking, with smooth plot, strong character creation, and nothing toxic. Highly recommended.

Why doesn't anyone watch it? It's pretty good.

Very good, thank you to the author

It really took a lot of effort

Excellent, five-star praise