Traveling Through an Ancient Family, I Counterattacked and Became a Phoenix

It's okay. Overall, the novel is okay. It has a lot of flaws but it's not too bad. You can read it. Here are some flaws: 1. The protagonist is 13 years old and has C [smile] [smile]? The first moderator may have read a little too much [laughs evilly], after all, the average ZGR is only B, and generally girls only start their second growth around the age of 12. The protagonist's development is a bit too much, and it can be slightly modified. 2. The recipe uses grams... I personally think the author copied and pasted it directly from the Internet. My suggestion is to convert it into two. Using grams is too weird. It would be better to replace 50 grams of eggs directly with one egg. The perspective of the third protagonist is a bit confusing. The first person is mixed with the third person, which gives me a second person feeling. This feeling is inexplicable. Then I looked at it again. Isn't this how I write essays (narratives, the author should be a novice)? It's a little confusing (the author can optimize this aspect). Finally, I hope the author will get better and better as he writes (the novel is still good. Although it is not gold in 🍅this💩⛰️, it is at least above the stone. How will we see the author's ability later)

The boss is very good-looking. Come on.