Race******

It feels like a novel without a beginning. The protagonist only explains the background, and the characters are vague. The transition cannot be said to be particularly stiff, it can only be said to be completely separated. The upper part does not connect to the lower part, making it confusing to read. The overall background setting of the story is not explained. I guess only those who have watched Horse Racing Girl and played the game can take a look.

As a Hermès person, I can responsibly say that the horse girls here are a bit OOC, and maybe I need to study the characters more carefully... But this is the first time I have seen a second-generation novel about horse girls, so I will give it a passing grade first.

It's a bit hard to comment, the timeline is so messed up that I can't say anything. Although I haven't seen the latest chapter, how did you let Mitsuru Satomi and Mitsuru Satomi run away in the scene where Silent Suzuka broke his bones? Not to mention that Silent Suzuka and Mitsuru Satomi are not from the same era at all. Let's just talk about the anime's first and third seasons. Although they also appeared in the second season, that was when they were kids, and Silent Suzuka went abroad. The competition information is all over there. You picked the weirdest one.

It's a bit too messy to be honest right now, but it's good, I like you.

The timeline is a bit messy

Well written, keep up the good work