Harry Potter: the Dark Lord's Nightmare

The author writes very well, and his writing style is also very brilliant. The detailed description and characterization of the characters are very successful. As an Orpheus chef, I have never understood Harry Potter but can understand the plot. This is a very rare thing. There are too few Orphee novels written by Tomato. I hope the author will not be discouraged and keep working hard! I personally feel that this work is one of the best among fans. I hope to have more interactions with Delnics in the future, preferably with a crow sitting on my shoulders. It's so cool. Also, please be sure to plan the nightmare scenes carefully. When the time comes, you can write like this: Nightmare sat lazily on the chair, tapping the table rhythmically with the pen in his hand. The eyes under the beak mask exuded a deep light. "It's time..." The hoarse voice came from the nightmare, as if coming from the dark abyss, making people shudder. Nightmare raised his hand, and a raven as deep as the long night flew out of his hand, turned into a jet-black stream of light, and galloped away into an unreachable distance. … The dark raven hovered above his head, like the whisper of death, announcing the arrival of his death. His nightmare emerged from the dark, ink-like fog, and the purple light emitting from the twins was the only color he could see. "Listen up, I am your lingering nightmare, following you like a shadow." Just write it like this, I like this the most and I feel so cool! Come on, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Looks great 😭 I don't know about D5 but it feels good. The second set is also very well written. Really like the main character! He also likes his roommate very much. The two babies are so loving. The plot is also great! The overall rhythm is also very comfortable!

I haven't seen d5, but it doesn't affect my reading at all. The protagonist is selfish but in the end he is still a child. It's really cute to have two babies sleeping in the same bed...

WC is so good, the author is great, the fusion is just right, especially the fusion of Orpheus and Campbell, the fifth most popular characters in this book, and these two are so good at each other, I recommend locking them up 🔒, and Idhela, my favor for the witch has soared! ! ! The conversation between Idhela and Orpheus was so philosophical, I felt like I learned a lot👍

When I read Chapter 26, the more I read, the more excited I became. The author's writing is delicate and the details are well handled. It can be regarded as standing out among the fan works of HP and Fifth (at least among the novels I have read). I hope the author will work hard! Finally, the fifth personality! Start up!

Why does such a beautiful book have no traffic? . . . . Teacher, you are my god. . . . I will not allow anyone to disobey you. . . . . I gnaw gnaw gnaw the delicious food [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnessinessiness length-that-that-no-speak-sing-of-ing- coming coming coming where a a taking a a a a running a runninguncuncs. Aright that, a ugh, ah, ah, ah, really speechless. This book is really great!) ! ! Forgive me for the plain rhetoric. It really suits my taste. The storyline is compact and can basically be linked together. Campbell is like a fragrant and soft little cake in the article! ! I hope it's a cute white and black cat! [Blowing kiss]

The novel "The Chef" is written so well by the author.

The author's writing is excellent! ! ! It's written with great feeling, and it's not inconsistent at all. If it weren't for a narrow audience, it would definitely be a masterpiece! ! ! This is also the only book that I want the author to pay for after reading it.

Really good-looking! How to say it? I feel like this is one of the few good books of The Fifth Manor. The characters that have appeared now are all descendants of the Fifth Estate. Anyway, the setting is very novel and worth reading.

This book is really amazing to me, but I have only read more than 230 chapters. Teacher, we met so late😭. . Also, my comments are all nonsense. . To be honest, I was really shocked by some of the details in the book. First of all, I definitely want to praise this book, but for me, I really like the teacher's courage to put his love into writing. Compared with the kind of author who updates mediocrely every day, the teacher's heartfelt words interspersed in the article are very humane. I have written a 100,000-word work before, and sometimes even the love for the characters in the writing cannot support the difficulty of writing, so I believe that the teacher must love the characters in the writing very much, and it has also had a great impact on me. On the other hand, what makes me feel good is the emotion. Although the writing is from a third-person perspective, it expresses the shock of the first-person. Many times, Xiaoka's inner fluctuations are incomprehensible and invisible to others, but the detailed description always allows me to understand Xiaoka from the first-person perspective. In addition, the article grasps the information very cleverly. First of all, I believe that the author must have prepared very carefully for extracurricular knowledge such as Cthulhu. Moreover, when repeating the information (similar to retelling the dream knowledge in the first grade in the third grade), the author very thoughtfully marked the location of the previous relevant chapters at the back of the article, which is really heart-warming and I like it. In addition, the protagonist's grasp of information is also very good. Unlike some works where too much information is given to the reader and too little information is given to the protagonist, which makes the protagonist feel too slow. Just enough information makes it easier for readers to follow the protagonist's story line and stimulate reading interest (what's going on? This is obviously not reading comprehension!!!). All in all (what am I talking about), this work still gave me a big shock in terms of details and knives. It was simply a beating! The description of some scenes with crazy sanity (especially the sacrifice in the red church) is quite amazing, and the grotesque aesthetics. . . Well, I don't have much to praise at this point, so I'll offer you some small ideas. . The first one is the growth line. I still hope to see Xiaowei's growth line. After all, the baby is a bit pessimistic now. In one sentence, I hope he can realize later that he is not waiting for Xiaoka's redemption, and then lift himself up and complete the sublimation of his personality. Of course, this is just a personal suggestion. Although the original writing style still has room for improvement, it is already very good! ! ! Finally, I will add a little bit of my own little wish. I saw something about Cricket in the back, so I wanted to give you some tips about Cricket's daughter, including her character name, etc. I really like this work, and it would be better if my little wish could be noticed🥰 The last thing is ㊗️Da Da is in good health and everything goes well. I really want to see the ending of this article. The description of family love is also very plump😋, (I don't know if Da Da has the idea of ​​expanding the list. I really want to follow the progress of the creation and hope to always be able to see the works of Teacher Wisdom Teeth🥰 Come on, you will win if you love to work hard😈 @happy civet cat, come on Teacher Maomao👏 Reviews are here 48 hours after reading 😭

The writing is very good, but I don't know why I always feel so gay when watching Orpheus and Campbell?

It's really good, but the premise is that you have to treat it as a parallel world before watching it. There are a lot of settings changes, and some detailed settings are more mistakes than modifications. If you don't mind, don't enter...

The author's writing is good, a bit unlike the configuration of the tomato area

Great, I found one of the few treasures with Aoife as the protagonist!

I'll give five points to the author for his serious views. Nowadays, fewer and fewer people can understand and respect the works, and there are even fewer thoughtful works. I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It is a very unique book that combines D5 and HP. The logic is very smooth. For someone who has never been exposed to D5 and HP, it is also very fresh. I hope the author will work harder. After all, the update rate of HP's good books and D5 books is really low. [Learned][Learned][Learned]

This book is really good to read. The setting is very novel. It cleverly combines the fifth chapter with Harry Potter. I really like the character of the protagonist. Come on, author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The fifth personality, activate!

Ah, two updates a week, isn't that enough? It's only updated once a week, it's uncomfortable

It is not a common time-travel novel. The life of Orpheus is the futile feathers, the rusty moon and the residual sound of Big Ben in the British winter. The description of the character's growth step by step is really amazing

Very good, but I don't know if I will play with Vigil in the later stage. As far as the background story is concerned, he is quite miserable. Of course, it is based on the author's will. I just want to ask.

Come on, author, it's really beautiful.

Super beautiful, double pit ecstasy

The characters are well understood, no OOC

Why is the score so low? It is obviously a wonderful book [please update]

The writing is very good, but can the character in the novel use the original name of Identity V?

Needless to say, it used to take me several months to read a book with more than 5,000 pages, but this time I read more than 4,000 pages in three days.

The teacher's writing is very good, and the military factory at the beginning really scared me [Love]

The author's writing style is really good🤩❤️, the writing is so good and beautiful so far (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)