The Story of a Master Who Cultivates Immortality and Raises a Husband in Another World

I think it's okay. The protagonist has a pretty good personality. He said at first that he didn't want to take care of trouble, but when trouble comes, he still takes care of it out of goodwill. Isn't this normal? Come on, the protagonist is not a god with no desires and desires, and the protagonist doesn't trust people because of betrayal. This is handled well. He saves people because others have helped him. He can't be a white-eyed wolf. As for the other protagonist, first of all, he has lost his strength (currently) and then seeking another protagonist is not normal. I want to seek the protection of a strong man, and he has no close friends around him. He will inevitably let down his guard after the other protagonist saves him a few times. I feel that this character has a good personality. I don't understand what to say in the comment area. I think the image of the two protagonists is very good. People will change, and no one will stay in the same state forever.

It's good to watch. I like watching two male protagonists cultivating immortality. I also like to read cool stories about two male protagonists cultivating immortality. Looking forward to future development

Gong's character is really cold and cold, I love him. Just go against my cp [grievance] [grievance] [grievance] I want to see if anyone can recommend Xiu Xian Gao Leng Shou... To be honest, the tension between the two was only a small matter. What could be explained clearly in one or two sentences ended up being dragged on for more than 200 chapters, and it still seemed like it was standing still. It can't be said that there was no progress, I can only say that it was minimal. To be honest, I don't really like the protagonist... It's too awkward, and the ups and downs of my emotions are like a roller coaster. Even though I'm sixteen years old, I feel like I'm going through menopause. This character was a master of be endings ten years ago. The protagonist has a strong personality, which is suitable for upgrading to a cool novel for men without cp. I was really speechless when these two characters couldn't say a single good word together. Let's support him first, let's talk about it first. A Gong who currently has no cultivation qualifications, and a Shou who is held back by all kinds of thoughts in a life-and-death crisis... Ah... Really don't write Shou as such a loser. In the beginning, Shou can break through in the battle and later suffer serious injuries, and he can also find Gong to pretend to seek shelter. How smart, he is getting better and better now. He doesn't say to help in the battle, and almost strangles Gong to death, ah? He either pulled his hair or strangled his neck. His legs were too weak to stand and he directly attacked his body. The already weak attack directly kills 50% of the combat power. It really made me laugh... I was picky about each individual battle performance and the writing was poor, but in the end I won every time... The attack belongs to a mage who has no mana, and it is not enough to use a big move every time...

It looks good, and the development of the relationship between the male protagonist and the male protagonist is a bit awkward, but I think two different individuals need to develop a close relationship, accept another person and have a certain relationship with them. This is a choice between two people. For example, I choose to be friends with you, you choose to be a partner with me, or something else. It mainly depends on what you think and what others think, so the results caused by different ideas may be different. At this stage, the relationship between the two male protagonists is unclear. In addition, the differences between the two people make their relationship full of conflicts, tension and awkwardness. Moreover, they do not understand each other better, so sometimes each other's understanding of language and behavior is transferred to their own cognition, which can easily cause misunderstandings. However, after they signed the master-servant contract, each other revealed more of themselves to each other. Although they had their own purposes, they were more real. There would be misunderstandings and illusions, as well as emotional changes; there would be tit-for-tat, and there would be mutual understanding. The tension between them was no longer so tight, they were moving closer to each other, and the distance between their hearts was shrinking. I feel that the development of their relationship is quite good, appropriate, not abruptly close, and developing naturally. They have their own path to take, and they also take into account the communication and interaction between people, the entanglement of rationality and sensibility. Both parties are changing step by step with the changes in the other party. It is no longer one-sided. They respond to each other, and the relationship develops naturally. Otherwise, you can only perform a one-man show for yourself. Therefore, before Gong's reaction to Shou was average or not at all, Shou was so sad. But at that time, Gong was wary of Shou, and Shou was taking advantage of Gong. Their relationship was not good, so the relationship did not develop further. I was controlled, and Shou could not respond to Attack. Like some readers, I felt sour inside, and wanted to shed tears for Shou. But after thinking about it, Gong didn't do anything wrong. He had his own ideas. How to treat Shou was his business. Although there was a connection between them, Gong knew whether Shou knew about this connection. While Shou was using Gong, Gong was also using Shou. There was a lack of trust between them, and there was a lack of trust between them. Wearing a mask, attacking or receiving needs to break this situation, and one person has to actively or passively lead the other person to do something. Therefore, it will happen that the receiving party discovers the fatal secret of attacking, and the attacking force forces the receiving party to sign a master-servant contract. If this does not happen, other things will break this barrier. What will happen to them next? I really look forward to what the author will write. If Shou knew the reason why Gong joined him, would he be more sad or sadder? When will the cultivation be successful? How many chapters can we see their sweet love?

I like this kind of immortality writing, which has two strengths, complements each other, and focuses on the cause. In times of uncertainty about life and death, time and time again, the daily interactions are sparse. A little bit of heartfelt touching and joy are intertwined. As the emotion slowly fermented, I suddenly discovered that the other person was indispensable in my heart. [Thinking] So annoying.

Indifferent old man & bumpy young man: one is reborn and upgraded, the other is poisoned and needs to be rescued: one saves people due to karma, and the other intends to use them; later, he wants to use luck to fight for destiny, but he unexpectedly falls in love. It's not enough. If I had known that Unfinished was so good, I wouldn't have clicked in... I really like the author's writing style, but the characters in the previous books were not very impressive, so I am waiting for this one [crying] [crying]

The story of two male protagonists who focus on cultivating immortals deserves a five-star rating. The content of the story is also quite exciting, but the pace is a bit slow, and almost all the characters are not likeable, but it is acceptable. Lou Yunhan's character is really annoying. How can he have the shortcomings of arrogance and inferiority at the same time? I don't have the eyesight to see it. It's annoying to him.

It's so good, I'd love to read more, ah ah, if this book ends hastily, I'll really cry. It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such writing style that fits the style of the work, and the world view, plot and emotions are not superficial [crying][crying][crying]

This is not different from other books, but its plot is complete and logical. Everyone has their own subjectivity and purpose, and is not just a tool man or a love brain. There are also many readers who may have read too much of the kind of love without any reason or purpose (not pure love), but the kind of love where the author manipulates the protagonists to fall in love. However, in this book, the author slowly and meticulously describes the changes in the relationship between the protagonists. Qi cannot trust anyone because of his experiences in the world of immortality in his previous life. He has lived for more than 500 years, and his views on many things are different from Lou (including some readers). And Lou, because of his experience in a brothel as a child and later returning to Lou's family, his character and his behavior were shaped by his experience. This is really not called hypocrisy. When I got to the back building, I gradually fell in love with Qi. He was not feminized by the author. It is not that girls sometimes act coquettishly and have a soft temper. It only belongs to women and exists only in women. Men can also have it. It's normal for Lou to behave like this when he completely opens his heart and truly relies on Qi's sense of security. After reading more than 500 chapters, it is difficult to shape the character of Lou. From being cunning and tactful in the early stage, and cautious about people and things, in the later stage when he was with Qi, he became careless, loving to act coquettishly, and had low self-esteem and was afraid of being abandoned. The character design of the building in the early stage can be said to be a protective film he has set up for himself. After all, his living environment and childhood experiences are there, which is normal. Later, when he was with Qi, he no longer needed to pretend. He can show his true self. He is only a teenager and it is normal to have a little temper. So the change of Lou's character may be a challenge, both for the author and the readers. But I hope that Lou can have a more complete self and find his own path, instead of just relying on Qi Xiu's extreme feelings.

I like it very much, there is no love at first sight scene. I really like the feeling of this kind of relationship gradually developing gradually! Author, please update! !

All I can say is that Kuai Ran was deceived by the copywriter's character. In fact, he is a petite and pitiful lover who lacks love (I am not praising him, I don't like this character), and he is very weak in the early stage. The relationship between the attacker and the receiver is unequal. After reading more than 200 chapters, the attacker finally understands himself. I like it, but not much, it's just stupid, I jumped back and read it, I don't know what is written in the back, it feels boring. Anyway, if you want to watch a romantic drama, you can go, it's uncomfortable to watch from the front, but you can't understand it when you watch it from the back, and this After all, the article is from the main attack perspective, and I understand all the elements in the comment section. I have already tolerated reading the article. If I really want to read it, I suggest you turn off Duan Ping. If you are under control, run quickly, and the cp party will also run quickly (the battle line is huge, and you have to be stalked before the attack confirms your intention). The attack and control are not good. Suggestion, because Shou has been pestering him in the early stage, which is very annoying. It is unprofessional to say that he is a dog licker because he is very cheating (although Gong has always said that he is using him). People who don't care about the relationship line can enter. Overall, it is a more traditional big and small world, with plug-in upgrades.

It's very interesting. This is the most interesting article about two male majors that I've read on Tomato. The writing is so good that it doesn't look like a Tomato article [covering face] [covering face]!

The characters of the two male protagonists are very real. There is an ooc chapter in the middle of the story, but they are brought back later. Lou shouldn't have thought that Gong would like him. In the last chapter, he said that Gong had murderous intentions towards him. This kind of refreshing novel is very interesting to read. The two male protagonists have top-notch IQs. It is visually estimated that they can talk for more than a hundred chapters together. I didn't want to watch it at first, but then I was gradually attracted to it.

It's so well written that it's not just about romance anymore. It's about precautions and suspicions, and the emotional development is gradual, and it's not like having a heart attack right away.

It's really good to watch. I feel like I've been following it for so long. I'm really excited to see the little lovers making little progress. The author describes the emotions very well, and the part about cultivating immortals is also very good. Author, you are so awesome, come on! ! !

It's very interesting. Wuwang is like a wolf and is cold and powerful. Yunhan is like a little fox, smart and cunning. This story is very real. There is no love at first sight or a long flow of water. The emotional line is relatively slow. If you want to read a baby with a fast emotional line, this article is not suitable for reading. Putting aside the emotional line, it is a more realistic fairy tale. There is no brainless thing and it is more logical. The writing style is OK.

The story of two men of immortality and martial arts has the style of a male video. Qi's ruthlessness on the road is finally pierced by Lou Yunhan. He is no longer lonely on the road to cultivating immortality. It is not as good as two people to become immortals if one person achieves enlightenment. The writing style is strong but soft, and the desire to read is strong! ! !

It's okay. I've read more than 500 chapters. The shortcoming is that Lou Yunhan is overly feminine, but most novels are a bit overly feminine. As a result, it seems that if you change this boy to a girl, there will be no difference and no characteristics. This novel also has its unique characteristics. Qi Wuwang looks a bit like the protagonist of a male video at the beginning. This is indeed a highlight. I want to watch Qi Wuwang even more after playing the dungeon. It's really good to attract readers. In the beginning, Lou Yunhan was actually pretty good, but I hope he becomes more feminine later on. It can be feminine but still retain a masculine feel, which is generally great.

Hahahahaha, it made me laugh so hard, it's so funny, the diary is so funny [laughing] The protagonist and the supporting characters all have brains and work hard on their abilities, but they are still at the stage where they don't like each other. It's so funny [laughing] [laughing] Slowly falling in love with each other as time goes by, that's how it's good to watch.

It's really beautiful! ! ! [Adoration] [Adoration] Love for a long time yyds From the two people using each other to being in love with each other, the character is very full, and the relationship is also ups and downs. He is not the kind of person who just finds a reason to fall in love. Lou Lou occasionally plays a little bit, which is so cute. Although there is a little bit of abuse, it doesn't affect many people. I almost included me in the early plot, but I persisted [shy] The later stage is really sweet. The first comment is dedicated to this article. Keep up the good work, author. I'm optimistic about you [please update] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

I like it very much, but the updates are too slow. I like long stories, and the protagonists have their own growth lines, instead of falling in love at first sight and being happy for no reason. Emotion is only part of it, but it is definitely not cultivation. Growth is all. Continuous progress, strength, and running-in are the long-lasting relationships, and each other has matching strengths and complements.

It's very good-looking, but it doesn't have many emotional lines, but I think it's good this way. The protagonist practices ruthlessness and is betrayed by others. It is difficult for him to have feelings for others, let alone love. Very rigorous. I'm not very good at commenting. If I come across a good novel, I will definitely give it full stars. I don't know why the rating is so low. I almost missed it.

I can only say that this book is invincible. I read it for several days and couldn't get enough of it! ! ! Seriously, this book is my god! ! Looking at it all the way, I love both Lou and Qi very much! ! ! Their emotional lines are written smoothly and naturally, which is eye-catching. I love the story line, plot line and world view, but there are too few! ! ! The author needs to update it soon! Lou Yunhan regards Qi Wuwu as his Taoist heart, and Qi Wuwu regards Lou Yunhan as his only one [almost crying][crying] I'm especially looking forward to the follow-up, and the pairing of Feng Chu and Ao Jin is also to my liking! ! ! ! The author is my eternal god! ! ! This book is recommended at the next level. If you don't read it, you will regret it for eight lifetimes! ! ! Very beautiful! ! ! Looks good! ! ! I am enjoying this excellent work. I feel very good. However, the tail is always cut off. I feel a bit regretful. I will wait for the follow-up and hope the author will finish it soon~ (I can't get enough!!!! [Lick screen][cry][cry])

I really don't understand why the rating is so low. I simply love the feeling of taking my time and getting closer to each other step by step. Both parties are indifferent, but they are emotionally moved. During this period, Yun Han always pushed the limit between sensibility and rationality, knowing that he couldn't do it, the pain of being awake, and Wuwu's kind of always subconsciously being good to the other person. He always said he was unforgiving, but in actual actions, he almost put the word conniving in my face, and his desire for control was unexpectedly strong, which made me very happy to see it. Moreover, both sides gave me a very good sense of distance. Unlike others, the protagonist always falls in love at first sight, or the personality collapses, and the aloof personality later becomes his indispensable one. The characters of the protagonists here are diverse and rich, no longer single. I feel that their stories are unfolding in my mind. I really like the characters of the two protagonists as they unfold before me. Yun Han's character has become a "good boy" in the eyes of others due to childhood reasons, but because of Wuwu's existence, he has changed from a "good boy" to a "bad boy". He can laugh, make noises, make trouble, and be afraid of falling in love to death! To sum it up: I like to watch the coquettishness between two people, and then watching their interaction is sometimes heart-wrenching, sometimes sweet, and sometimes painful and tears streaming down my face. [There is some exaggeration.] Please watch But if you want to read that kind of boring love at first sight, the full text is so "sweet" that the two people cherish each other only for each other, please exit

It's simply perfect for my taste! Don't stand against it. It is indeed a bit easy to counterattack if you open it. Qi Gonglou Shou. I really like QAQ, Lou Lou, this little master, I like QAQ. They were using each other, and Lou was also testing Qi's bottom line. This is understandable because of Lou's experience. The emotional line is also slow at the front, but the plot is really exciting and sweet. Trust me, you won't lose money if you invest in it!

I really, really like this novel (●♡∀♡) It's so good! Good looking! Good looking! I hope the author can continue to update it. I am very looking forward to the subsequent stories and said that I have read it in one go (for now). Because I was very curious about the next plot, I dreamed about it when I went to bed that night (｡♡‿♡｡) It was really beautiful (♥∀♥) and I loved it [shy] Uh 😓 How can I put it... I have been following the book since 24 years ago. What attracted me to this book at first was the characters of the two male protagonists. The part in the small world was really well written [I learned]: the characters are interesting and the plot is satisfying [I learned] The plot after leaving the small place is a bit more exciting and makes people look forward to it, but the plot after that is very average (still very watery) [laughs awkwardly], it feels like it is not on the same level as the previous ones [laughs awkwardly], especially the portrayal of Lou Yunhan is shocking [fear] ], Lou Yunhan who just appeared is so amazing and beautiful (I love it so much) [crying] [crying], anyway, I thought it was an evenly matched relationship from the beginning (this refers to the character's way of dealing with others, not his cultivation [smile]), but I didn't expect that it would turn into a one-sided extreme dependence [crying]

It's so friendly to people like me who love to watch super long upgrade streams and like thin streams of water and long emotional lines! ! ! ! I really like the plot! ! I really love this ups and downs story line! Come on, Mrs. Author! ! I will try my best to catch up! ! And I just like this little bit of pulling and pulling [? Little couple, hey hey hey [aunt laughs] I'm eating, eating, eating, eating

In the first few dozen chapters, the character description of the protagonist was not very good, and the battle rhythm was not well grasped, but it gradually got better after that. The overall plot is quite good, with ups and downs and suspense, a lot of foreshadowing, and the writing is also good. Shou's character is not very good most of the time, and is almost useless in the early stage (but his character is better in the early stage. Although his strength is limited, his character is still consistent with the double strength). He relies on attack. The middle part will be better as his strength gradually increases, but his character starts to be squeamish from the middle, and is often unstable. He loses his temper regardless of the situation, regardless of right or wrong, regardless of whether he is in danger or not. He also likes to feel sorry for himself and lose his temper for no reason (I think it is too violent, but the article says that this is his true character). However, in the later period, except for occasionally liking to do it, he did not get angry on important occasions. The pets are very cute, and each one has a distinct personality. I prefer this kind of upgraded stray pet story. When the protagonist is running the plot, he has a relatively classic character of a starting male protagonist. He is relatively calm, decisive and has an above-average IQ (it is true if he endures the first few dozen chapters). On the emotional line, he goes from being emotionally indifferent to being infinitely doting. Generally speaking, the plot line is much better than the emotional line. Although Gong's shaping is not too three-dimensional and deep, it is much better than being shaped.

The gold was finally discovered. The author said that the data was not good before. I still regret it. It is really good. Whether it is the world view or the plot, the emotional line is also amazing. It is really the finest among the fine chaff, the finest among the finest. I have read so many articles on cultivating immortality, and this one is the only one I have been following for nearly a year. I watched it intermittently, and I really couldn't bear to finish it, and I was also afraid of discontinuing the update. But the author said that he would insist on completing it no matter what, which was really touching. After saving the chapters for almost a month or two, I clicked on this book and was really excited to see the 9.0 Rating. This book is truly a masterpiece. Go read it, read it, read it. [Send heart][Send heart]

The author will update soon! ! Two chapters a day are not enough to read [I'm about to cry]. The characters in this book are more realistic. I don't say that the characters are particularly perfect. The character's personality is flawed. For example, Lou lacks love. He will use some small things to confirm that Wang cares about him [crying]; Delusion is the feeling of ruthlessness. His long-term experience of being alone and being betrayed in his previous life makes his language and behavior very concise and capable. He is the kind of thinking that follows a "straight line" and doesn't care much about other things such as interpersonal relationships [making faces]. Because of these, the two protagonists may be a little impetuous in some things [thinking], but it is precisely because of these small things that they constantly improve the image of the characters [blowing kisses]. I haven't seen the emotional scenes between the two protagonists yet, but the little friction between the two of them meeting and getting along is very interesting. It just shows the difficulties in the running-in of the two characters. The plot makes people feel itchy [shy] Great author, please come on for more updates! ! I wish the author a happy day, and I will definitely pass every exam~ [laughing evilly] No, I feel so uncomfortable waiting every day. I plan to re-read it again [crying] The series makes me wait so hard [crying] I open it every day when I get up and read it again at noon. I waited for two chapters at night. After reading it for 10 minutes, I feel completely empty [crying]