Mine****

My own book is my best

Overall it's okay, the pace is slow and the content is okay. To be honest, there is a bit of a flow at the beginning, and it feels like the rhythm has not started yet after thirty chapters. Then there was the feeling of speaking and describing that the text was deliberately crinkled, and around the twenty-fifth chapter or so I stopped paying attention to the dialogue. The description is relatively serious and there are basically no jokes, so suddenly eating melon seeds is a bit... In summary, if you are bored, you can take a look.

Good-looking, but a little short [angry][angry][angry]

It's a slow-paced and boring read, but it's a pity that I discovered it earlier. If I could have discovered it later, I might have saved a few more chapters.