After Picking up the Star, the Character I Controlled Came True

The second book review, I would like to ask the author not to break it like the one where I picked up the white-haired dumplings at the beginning.

The writing style of Yajiang is still good, I just hope it will be more complete. All the books I wrote before are gone. [Cover face]

The world of Bengsan is not that weak. The mid-level and high-level combat effectiveness is indeed not good, but the basic combat effectiveness of Bengsan is really not low.

This is really the first place

Single girl or multiple girls? I would rather have a single girl in this kind of story, because I don't really like splitting up CPs.

The setting is novel and the characterization is okay. It's worth a read. The only drawback is that the author's updates are unstable and may be interrupted. This has been the case for several books. I'll wait for a few ways online to keep the author's productivity high.

This book... How to say it? The concept is good, very good, but I don't know why, but later on I felt that the male protagonist's character would be better if he had a bit of a real but not overly "fun person". The world view could be more grand, and I feel that the male protagonist could use a "chicken" character. All in all, it needs to be improved.

There is always a sense of immediate vision of the book commissioned by cwm.

Author, you won't send it, will you?

Is this going to have a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?

Why do I feel that this book looks so familiar? Many places seem familiar. I seem to have seen an almost identical book. But that one seems to be outdated.

Not sure I like it.

It's to my liking. Come on.

This author is so interesting.

Keep up the good work, author [Like]

It looks good. If you like it, come and see more.

It's very interesting. Come on, author [laughs evilly]

Did the author not save the manuscript?

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

Big cheers for the author

Hope to live longer

So pretty, but too short

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

I didn't see it until today. It turns out you have opened a new book.

Pretty good? Why is the score so low?

I think the previous ones are okay, but the favorability level rises a bit quickly [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

It looks good. I love it. I want to see it. It's really good. Five stars given

It's good, it's very well written ((*^∀^)) but the author should be careful not to score too high, otherwise there is a risk of the book being closed and removed from the shelves.

A very wonderful novel, highly recommended, and then... Nothing more to say, get off work! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Yes, there is my favorite Xingbao