[Original fruit + development + unbeatable monster]
Because of a ticket to travel through the world of pirates, Dongjun obtained an open devil fruit through the highest wishing opportunity in this world.
At this point, the protagonists of the original work were just a bunch of brats.
So Dongjun let himself go and decided to cause trouble.
In front of the redhead, "Roger is just an old gangster!"
After crushing Charlotte Lingling, "You can call me BIG DAD. If you don't believe me, my abilities are exactly the same as your mother's!"
After beating Teacher Kai, "Can you do it, Kai!"
Pressing Akainu and bathing in the sea water, "Your violence is not worth mentioning! My violence is justice! Because I am stronger!"
Bringing a bunch of demon spawns to Mariejoia to face Five Old Stars and Im, "Come on, let's see who has more abilities?"
Standing on the ruins of the Red Earth Continent, Dong Jun held a knife in one hand and held a cigar in the other, puffing away smoke: "Why is there no one who can hit him?"
Reader comments
It feels like everyone in this world revolves around the protagonist, and they are all NPCs. The protagonist does whatever he says, and no one else has any thoughts. He went to Shuangyue Village to invite Kuina to go to sea. The key is that he succeeded. Would his father let a person he had never met once let his daughter go to sea with her? Not only did my father agree, but I also agreed. The key is to be an adult, but his daughter is not yet an adult. Apart from this problem, everything else is okay. The development of Devil Fruit abilities is also okay. When watching One Piece, I prefer to see the development of Devil Fruits.
I'll give it five stars first. It's really interesting, especially the move names when fighting Ace Luffy. It made me laugh to death [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]
Very fresh and good
Come on, it's not bad so far
Come on, let's be pure fun people together! ! !
It's a good idea, and I've seen a different pirate story. This book probably hasn't been read by many people, so it's rated so low. It's no problem to score 8 points.
It's great. What are you planning to write in your next book?
It's actually finished, and it feels like the pace is so fast. All are the author's own conjectures. [Cover face]
Okay, okay, I can see it
Good, good, good
Nice looking, fun guy
Not bad, I like it
It's just so so, you can watch it
Short and interesting
Well, as long as you can keep watching, it will be good to get to the back
It's a pretty good One Piece fanfic, except it's a bit unfinished [laughing and crying]
It's pretty good, I recommend watching it during your leisure time to pass the time.
The interaction between the male protagonist and the original characters is quite interesting.
The original plot is very good, but it progresses too fast
It's very interesting, has its own ideas, is not toxic at the moment, and the character's IQ is online.
It feels like everyone in this world revolves around the protagonist, and they are all NPCs. The protagonist does whatever he says, and no one else has any thoughts. He went to Shuangyue Village to invite Kuina to go to sea. The key is that he succeeded. Would his father let a person he had never met once let his daughter go to sea with her? Not only did my father agree, but I also agreed. The key is to be an adult, but his daughter is not yet an adult. Apart from this problem, everything else is okay. The development of Devil Fruit abilities is also okay. When watching One Piece, I prefer to see the development of Devil Fruits.
I'll give it five stars first. It's really interesting, especially the move names when fighting Ace Luffy. It made me laugh to death [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]
Very fresh and good
Come on, it's not bad so far
Come on, let's be pure fun people together! ! !
It's a good idea, and I've seen a different pirate story. This book probably hasn't been read by many people, so it's rated so low. It's no problem to score 8 points.
It's great. What are you planning to write in your next book?
It's actually finished, and it feels like the pace is so fast. All are the author's own conjectures. [Cover face]
Okay, okay, I can see it
Good, good, good
Nice looking, fun guy
Not bad, I like it
It's just so so, you can watch it
Short and interesting
Well, as long as you can keep watching, it will be good to get to the back
It's a pretty good One Piece fanfic, except it's a bit unfinished [laughing and crying]
It's pretty good, I recommend watching it during your leisure time to pass the time.
The interaction between the male protagonist and the original characters is quite interesting.
The original plot is very good, but it progresses too fast
It's very interesting, has its own ideas, is not toxic at the moment, and the character's IQ is online.